Lawless (Hs) vs Def by Mouf
 

Battle Rules:

12-16 lines
No biting, recycling, feeding, or swaying whatsoever
due today
no hate, d/r, or crew votes.....

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-15-04 at 08:12 PM

Must drop verse in 90 minutes after check in.

Def by Mouf has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-15-04 06:43 PM.

Lawless (Hs) has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-15-04 06:47 PM.

i'm in here cousin at first I was like " I don't even no this nigga" then I was like oh yea I jus accepted his bitch slap lol..... let's get to it... you goin first?

Do not post your verse here. You must use the form in the first post

Lawless Homosexual yeah thats right i said it...
The only time u pumpin up is gas in the ass.....unleaded,
I checked his profile and what to my surprise,
there was nothing nowhere...kinda like where his skill lies,
I truly don't understand why in ur sig theres a law,
Seein as ur lawless that makes u urself a flaw...
Ur a never has been or will be from a no name town,
Check out his profile to hear the way his skils sound....*
And a law can't be created unless another is destroyed,
which means ur ass is worthless ur life is terminated and void,
Even RV won't welcome u back like mase...
So take ur head out ur ass..although we know u like the taste,
And i see why the Hitman in ur sig is hidin his face...
Even he don't wanna be seen with such a Lawless disgrace...

that first post was a mistake and it deletedmy whole first original verse cuz i pressed the wrong button but....i am now uppin for ur verse....

I agree you must be 'def by mouf' cause you speak like you ten guys deep/
I jus resort to poppin at niggas like french fry grease/

nigga hold back real flows no chat/
muthafucka I can beat you ass wit my hands tied behind yo back/

I'ma spit on this fagg and watch this man do nuttin'/
shotty will lift ya off ya feet like a brand new husband/

yea you prolly got heat but are you prepared to shoot/
you couldn't have a 'hot line' if u was wit a drug awareness group/

you puss nigga ya style been disabled/
i'ma make you close ya mouf like you was chewin at the dinner table/

you should try to get at me instead of the sleepin'/
when I spit this nigga got his hand on his heart like he was pledgin alligence/

you won't win cause you speak ya verse loudly/
you ain't ruff rydin' the slightest bit but ya "style's pee/

def by mouf fucc chat I got shells talkin'/
this battles features a soft BITCH vs. a nigga harder then parallel parkin'/

you shit was HOT....... lol
you got me kidd... everything was hot in yo shit I think I lost this....
nice flow....

keep it up son rep VA TO THE FULLEST what part you from.....

UPPIN FOR VOTES....
ill flow.. props again
ill personals

we seriously need to collab kidd.... u hot from the V same wit me.... we should do that hit me up
nice battle

Yeah and tha same to u.....that would be tight to do a collabo but right now.......we need votes so....uppin for votes peeps and any feedback would be appreciated.

Voted For: Def by Mouf

Lawless, your verse was wack.. it flowed aiight and all.. but there was way too much self-glorification. You need to stay focused on dissing your opponent and throwing punches. def took this for actually staying focused and dissing his opponent..

Vote-def by mouf

pz.

thanks for the vote dawg.... aye I don't want that damn system thing to come n here and reject votes so repost ya vote in categories..... that shit happened to me in a battle and we had to start all over and it was at 2-3 now it's at 1-0

Yeah can we get some votes on this....leave a link and favors will be returned.

uppin this battle.....favors will be returned just drop a link.....HO-LA!!!!!

uppin this battle we need some votes on it....favors will be returned if u drop a link....peaceezy

uppin for votes on this battle...favors will get returned..peaceezy

upping...seriously man.....I will return the favor.....just plz.......VOTE!

upping....Lawless will return all the favors.....so drop a link....peaceeezy

Come come now people....am i not liked at all on this site....uppin for votes...as said in previous posts.....favors will be returned...by Lawless or myself....if u drop a link....

C'mon now......this is truly pitiful.....this is my like 2nd battle it's been here for over two weeks and has ONE vote.....c'mon uppin for votes.....

we are still uppin for votes people come lay a response

This was feedback posted for Def by Mouf
 

checkin dem pollz

Hey man!!!!!.....i can tell y'all what the polls look like...we need votes man c'mon on....uppin

uppin for feedback word son....my first battle and i haven't even won nor lost it.....

WTF son....?.......this is my FIRST Battle,,,,i got into right after I joined and it's been her for about a month....c'mon now.....uppin son....

Voted For: Lawless (Hs)

aight..law took dis shit hands down his whole verse was hott....mouf umm i aint really feel ya shit nothin stood out no creativity

opener-law
structure-a tie
punchlines-law
wordplay-nun
mulits-law
creativity-law
personals-mouf
finisher-law
enjoyed-law......nuff said

links r in my sig...return da favor ya'll i took da time otu da vote on ya'll shit so do da same 4 me

upping once again...so I could might get my 6th win...

Voted For: Def by Mouf

lol now this as a comical battle... lawless uses that set up style that wastes a line in every bar... but his punches did have a harder impact overall than Mouf's did... however Mouf's personals were harsh... *nods* I had to fuck with them... this was a good battle one of the closest I've voted on here thus far... There was one line in Law's verse however that just didn't rhyme with anything... and that's the name of the game...

Opener: Law
Closer: Mouf
Punches: Law
Personals: Mouf
Vocab: Law
structure: Neither

Vote: Mouf... The personals did it... finished on a stronger note

This was feedback posted for Lawless (Hs)
 

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Voted For: Lawless (Hs)

i voted for lawless he had harder punches and better flow and also took personals,
def by mouf u had good punches but they werent good enough to win

no hate

rtf

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