d.j em sce vs Ruffridah187
 

Battle Rules:

6-10 linies
blah blah blah
you no the rules....
just checkin

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-16-04 at 05:50 AM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

your not even on line so im gonna decline this battle in a couple of minutes...

Ruffridah187 has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-16-04 05:34 AM.

bull shit....i was doin other shit now just fuckin accept

Half asleep, 13, i'm still whoopin your ass
Ya rhymes break mine like cement and shatter ya glass
Ya lines is a brutal crash you a 2 sided bitch flip flopping
The farthest you'll ever go in music will be a disc jockey
This bitch cocky sayin i'm wack but only looks at his reflection
How you even set this up when you postin Open Mics in the Audio Section
I'm teachin you a lesson, correction records don't mean shit
You only got a good rec cuz you battle newbies or ya rhymes is bit
You can't see me not even a glitch your rap ability is deductible bitch
Even if it wasn't it'd still be destructible shit


simple ya'll should be able to understand it
disc jockey line...in his name he has DJ
Audio line he posted an Open Mic in the Audio Songs thing
simple like i said

aight now what is happening......i was reading a pm...oh you finally excepted after all the prewriting..but yeah

just post a fuckin verse..........damn gotta make shit so complicated ya got work remember?

d.j em sce has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-16-04 05:41 AM.

4 min....come on now........this is gettin tiresome

damn this kid took about 25 mins to check in then once he checks in he drops his verse....lol prewritten....

when i get in the textin section everybody knows im legendary
I win battle bcuz when it comes 2 spitten evrything else is secondary
kid im fresh and ur stale.....but ill admit it u got balls`
if ur a stable person im bout to make sure u take a fall`
Even if u smoked a blunt on a train u still couldn’t blaze a track
U like a sperm guzzling hoe da way u never spit any cum baks
this kid is lame he is to plain all your rhymes are basic
i up the vocab and acuzate that you cant envison my phisical matrix

weak spit but oh well

nice spit but im going to sleep.......night night.....

i wrote it on a notepad cuz i never get me structure right on the thing.....nothin wrong with doin it how i did.....you still writin it aint you? yea so it don't matter.....uppin

it took me 2 min long than you to get this done....lol....o well.....n thanx....i guess good luck....i'm out peace

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Voted For: d.j em sce

dj. emsce definately got my vote... His verse was definately better written, with better vocab, rhymes, and wordplay... RuffRidah did have a better structure tho... but dj's was better IMO...

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Voted For: d.j em sce

vote-D.Jemsce

came lot harder wit flow and punches...it was overall betta...Obvious to see...nice punches hitting..

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Voted For: Ruffridah187

weak.. but better.. then dj
I just didnt like his scheme at all..
my v/ is for Ruff..
weak battle.. terrible/played punches
only thing that was desent was the O.M punch..

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HA HA HA!!!

Dude.. you thikn your better than me?.... HA HA HA.. Peace out.

aigth this battle needs to wake up its been sleeping long enuf

Voted For: Ruffridah187

Half asleep, 13, i'm still whoopin your ass
Ya rhymes break mine like cement and shatter ya glass
THAT DONT MAKE SENSE IF HIS RHYMES BREAK CEMENT AND YOU SHATTER GLASS THAT WOULD MEAN HIS RHYMES ARE HARDER THEN YOURS SO NO OPEN WACK
Ya lines is a brutal crash you a 2 sided bitch flip flopping
The farthest you'll ever go in music will be a disc jockey
LOL FUNNY DISS HERE
This bitch cocky sayin i'm wack but only looks at his reflection
How you even set this up when you postin Open Mics in the Audio Section
LOL GOOD PERSONAL HERE I SAW THAT LOL KINDA STRECHED THOUGH
I'm teachin you a lesson, correction records don't mean shit
You only got a good rec cuz you battle newbies or ya rhymes is bit
IF HIS RHYMES WAS BIT HED BE BANNED AND HE DID BEAT ALOT OF VETS HES JUST NOT AS GOOD ANYMORE
You can't see me not even a glitch your rap ability is deductible bitch
Even if it wasn't it'd still be destructible shit
CLOSER WACK AS FUCK




when i get in the textin section everybody knows im legendary
I win battle bcuz when it comes 2 spitten evrything else is secondary
WACK YOU KNOW BETTER SELF GLORY IS A NONO
kid im fresh and ur stale.....but ill admit it u got balls`
if ur a stable person im bout to make sure u take a fall`
WACK ALSO
Even if u smoked a blunt on a train u still couldn’t blaze a track
U like a sperm guzzling hoe da way u never spit any cum baks
OMG THATS PLAYED AS FUCK CUM LINES NO YOU ALSO KNOW BETTER
this kid is lame he is to plain all your rhymes are basic
i up the vocab and acuzate that you cant envison my phisical matrix
ANOTHER SELF GLORY LINE WACK
DJ YOU CAME WACK AS FUCK HERE AND YOU KNOW IT NO GOOD PUNCHES OR DISSES MADD PLAYED SHIT THIS WAS WACK AND THATS WHY YOU LOST

Voted For: d.j em sce

d.j em sce

when i get in the textin section everybody knows im legendary
I win battle bcuz when it comes 2 spitten evrything else is secondary
^kinda self-glorification so wasn't really feeling ya opener

kid im fresh and ur stale.....but ill admit it u got balls`
if ur a stable person im bout to make sure u take a fall`
^decent but nothing really bold

Even if u smoked a blunt on a train u still couldn’t blaze a track
U like a sperm guzzling hoe da way u never spit any cum baks
^nice one!liked it

this kid is lame he is to plain all your rhymes are basic
i up the vocab and acuzate that you cant envison my phisical matrix
^okay closer but could've been better

Ruffridah187

Half asleep, 13, i'm still whoopin your ass
Ya rhymes break mine like cement and shatter ya glass
^didn't like your opener

Ya lines is a brutal crash you a 2 sided bitch flip flopping
The farthest you'll ever go in music will be a disc jockey
^okay...

This bitch cocky sayin i'm wack but only looks at his reflection
How you even set this up when you postin Open Mics in the Audio Section
^you could've made that 2nd line way more hardhitting if you worded it different but it's aight

I'm teachin you a lesson, correction records don't mean shit
You only got a good rec cuz you battle newbies or ya rhymes is bit
^decent one

You can't see me not even a glitch your rap ability is deductible bitch
Even if it wasn't it'd still be destructible shit
^not feeling your closer

My vote goes to d.j em sce because he had more originality, RuffRidah had potential in there but always managed to word the punch in a way he wasn't that effective anymore.Both vocab was nice,was feeling flow in both verses and structure was aight to. Was close battle for me to decide but i was just feeling d.j em sce's drop a lil more...

Voted For: Ruffridah187

yo ruffridah deffinately git my vote cuz he went at em cee way harda n he got tha better flo at tha end... dude wuz holdin it down

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uppin this battle that has been goig on since like a lil more than forever ago....

Voted For: d.j em sce

Even if u smoked a blunt on a train u still couldn’t blaze a track
U like a sperm guzzling hoe da way u never spit any cum baks

these to lines had me laughin and ruff just like in our battle i aint seein no skill

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damn Lexikon you always gotta be hatin on someone don't you.....you talk to much shit....and you don't get off that battle......stfu cuz that was my first battle i ever had with you.....battle me now
uppin

Voted For: Ruffridah187

not a hard decison.....lol hahahaYa lines is a brutal crash you a 2 sided bitch flip flopping
The farthest you'll ever go in music will be a disc jockey
This bitch cocky sayin i'm wack but only looks at his reflection
How you even set this up when you postin Open Mics in the Audio Section
^^^^^^^^^^^ the best personals in a while.................gud shit.y odj no beef you had weak ounches dawg....................sorry but yo ruuf u had gud structure but wack flow....... anywayz vote goes 2 you.... hollabak wif a vote against me and unknown........

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uppin for the last motha fuckin vote come on people don't sleep on this shit
UPPIN

Voted For: Ruffridah187

dj................
when i get in the textin section everybody knows im legendary
I win battle bcuz when it comes 2 spitten evrything else is secondary
self glory.....shitty opener.........

kid im fresh and ur stale.....but ill admit it u got balls`
if ur a stable person im bout to make sure u take a fall`
didnt hit hard at all........not a good bar at all

Even if u smoked a blunt on a train u still couldn’t blaze a track
U like a sperm guzzling hoe da way u never spit any cum baks
best bar....hit good....nice wordplay

this kid is lame he is to plain all your rhymes are basic
i up the vocab and acuzate that you cant envison my phisical matrix
self glory in 2nd line.....1st line was ok

ruff.......


Half asleep, 13, i'm still whoopin your ass
Ya rhymes break mine like cement and shatter ya glass
not too good of an opener....

Ya lines is a brutal crash you a 2 sided bitch flip flopping
The farthest you'll ever go in music will be a disc jockey
lol decent play off of his name....hit good

This bitch cocky sayin i'm wack but only looks at his reflection
How you even set this up when you postin Open Mics in the Audio Section
good personal....lol had me laughin.....good bar

I'm teachin you a lesson, correction records don't mean shit
You only got a good rec cuz you battle newbies or ya rhymes is bit
not too good.....not a good bar

You can't see me not even a glitch your rap ability is deductible bitch
Even if it wasn't it'd still be destructible shit
good vocab....hit decent....ok closer

pretty much ruff took this battle easy.........he had personals...which dj didnt......his punches hit harder than dj's.....he had better vocab....dj had better worplay...but that not good enough to get it....structure was tied....multis was tied....good battle...no hate

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Voted For: d.j em sce

DAAAAMN, this guy shit on the other guy easily i mean look at this line

Even if u smoked a blunt on a train u still couldn’t blaze a track
U like a sperm guzzling hoe da way u never spit any cum baks

dope dope dope punches in both line he totally killed the other guy with punches, personals wordplay EVERYTHING its not even funny. the other guy wasnt bad but damn he just lost easil and needs to elevate next time he battles this guy. :shocked:

v-dj m c

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Voted For: d.j em sce

good battle kind of close.....gotta go with dj tho...ruff dat open mic line lmaoooooo dat was funny but dat was like da only line i felt from ya verse

opener-ruff
structure-dj
punchlines-dj...da 6th line
creativity-a tie
multis-dj
wordplay-nun
personals-ruff
finisher-a tie
enjoyed-dj....like i said shit was close...ruff u almost had dis with da personals but u aint no ill punchlines dat stood out..

links r in da sig return da favor ya'll

marv i voted in one of your battles a long time ago....that was like a favor returned tho you voted for the other guy so yea we don't gotta return shit.....uppin

fam just vote on wun of my battles dont be a bitch i voted on dis shit cuzz i was tryin da help ya'll close it...& anyway ya vote tooken away cuzz u aint explain it

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Voted For: Ruffridah187

you get my vote in this.... dj you used too much self glroyfication in your verse instead of dissing you opponent... your vocabulary was good but because of that think you lost the battle....

return the favour links in the sig no hate

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uppin for some fucking voters shit don nobody wanna vote anymore