Theory vs Melancholy
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 1

Check in by: 12-16-04 at 03:21 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Theory has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-16-04 02:52 PM.

Melancholy has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-16-04 02:52 PM.

Check it...

Theory...there's a haze in ya eyes, let me clean that, see clearly...
You have no chance in this battle...I ain' gon merk you...I'ma beat you silly
You from South California? Why you on here, you should be farmin' oranges...
The only way you dope...was if Santa's reindeer were actually horses
Dawg you can't fuck wit me...you wanna loss, here come and get it
'Cause there is no theory in this...You gon' loose...no need for scientifics
Stealin ya funds...bitch before you accepted this was fuckin' finished...
I'ma leave you destroyed...no talent, no skill...sittin' wit slit wrists
I'ma drive up to your car...cash in ya and, blow ya brains out, it's funny...
At least you can be like Tupac...'cause ya got ya mind on ya money...

A'ight half assed should be enough I think...

Melancholy- Sadness or depression of the spirits

… He’ll take two hours writing a verse Hopin’ to Win
Then realize my 20 minute key is still Doper than Him
In research for some punchlines, I talked to his Dad
… He Admitted ur the greatest mistake he ever Had
This ain’t even a real battle… just a one-sided Fight
End should ban you…
…for having Punches wack enough to crash the site
His name fits composure after this Battle of the Minds
The Herald announced his Death…
and he still can’t Handle the Times
His will to battle died tonight, you can’t Erase the Fear
His tombstone’ll read “Theory’s punches Placed me Here”

A'ight good luck...uppin' for some votes...

Voted For: Melancholy

V/melancholy......he had better vocab an multi's his punchs were more creative also he had better structure....theory u had a good opening but u werent creaative wit the punchs all basic.....
punchs=mel
multis=mel
vocab=mel
structure=mel
overall=mel
*RETURN THE FAVOR*

Voted For: Melancholy

good verse son keep up tha good work...............holla back

Removed

im not voting that was sopposed to be feed back i clicked the wong thing by mistake

Damn it...^^I have to get that fuckin vote removed now...shit...

Anyway, uppin' for votes...

Uppin' for some more votes...favors will be returned...

Uppin' for votes...fuckin' slept on...favors will be returned...

This was feedback posted for Melancholy
 

Checkin' polls...nice verse, keep droppin' that shit...

Fuck people...vote on this shit already....FAVORS WILL BE RETURNED!

Uppin' for votes...favors will be returned....fuckin' sleepers...oh and I might not have enough posts yet to vote so yeah...

Voted For: Melancholy

pretty sick hommie , like ya punches,u coulda came witt sum betta vocab tho

Voted For: Theory

LOL I Definetly liked that last line by Theory...mayne that was Great

Theory
>; )~~I Liked ya verse you get my verse but theres a feelin of somethin Missin in ya verse...........But I Jus cant place my finger on it ..........Damnit ....well if you overlook ya verse youll prolly see it ..............But You did great for a newb

Melancholy
>:~(
Mayne you always leave me Hangin Mayne I Be Wantin to vote for you sometimes But im sorry mayne Im as Honest as "Abe" So you know i Cant lie Sorry mayne I Think That this is The second battle i voted on that you didnt get my vote but see its the fact that you start strong and end weak mayne and ppl dont like that kinda stuff mayne you need to work on that but i do hope that you elevate soon in the future.
<><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><> RTF ASAP in battle against Untraceable if you will please

Can't vote in one against Untreceable...hes in my crew...anyway...STG what the fuck kinda vote was that? EXPLAIN please and then I will return the favor? And What you walkin bout vocab? I would merk your ass bitch...uppin' for votes.

Ayo Check Out my other Battles mayne But Atleast try To RTF Mayne Plz

Uppin' for some more votes....damn it I tried man...still not enough posts...

these kids voting on vocab in a battle? LOL let this shit be over with, Im tryin' to get my 5 battles done quick so I can get outta Front Lines. :)

Uppin'...fuck this has been slept on for ages...get it done...

Uppin' this slept on shit.............................

Voted For: Theory

tight spit by both, have to go with theory thou, flow was smoother, punches better, solid rhyming, little slacking on the personals and originality, but all in all, good throw down...sweet finisher

not all bad meloncholy, just a little behind theory in the rhyming and punches, liked the opener, and isnt florida more renowned for farmin oranges? whatever, good battle

Uppin'............................................

Voted For: Theory

liked this rap better theory...you punches were pretty good.

Voted For: Theory

Theory...there's a haze in ya eyes, let me clean that, see clearly...
You have no chance in this battle...I ain' gon merk you...I'ma beat you silly
—played line..
You from South California? Why you on here, you should be farmin' oranges...
The only way you dope...was if Santa's reindeer were actually horses
—decent
Dawg you can't fuck wit me...you wanna loss, here come and get it
'Cause there is no theory in this...You gon' loose...no need for scientifics
—nah
Stealin ya funds...bitch before you accepted this was fuckin' finished...
I'ma leave you destroyed...no talent, no skill...sittin' wit slit wrists
—hmm.. this one was okay
I'ma drive up to your car...cash in ya and, blow ya brains out, it's funny...
At least you can be like Tupac...'cause ya got ya mind on ya money...
—weak


… He’ll take two hours writing a verse Hopin’ to Win
Then realize my 20 minute key is still Doper than Him
—nice opener
In research for some punchlines, I talked to his Dad
… He Admitted ur the greatest mistake he ever Had
—nope
This ain’t even a real battle… just a one-sided Fight
End should ban you…
…for having Punches wack enough to crash the site
—good punch
His name fits composure after this Battle of the Minds
The Herald announced his Death…
and he still can’t Handle the Times
—okay
His will to battle died tonight, you can’t Erase the Fear
His tombstone’ll read “Theory’s punches Placed me Here”
—pretty decent

overall both had good drops, but Theory came harder in
this battle, just had harder punches all thru his verse, his
structure was decent, & the vocab was okay, but usually
Theory took this one because of his punches were harder

no hate..

RTF Theory on my battle against BLACK~MAGIK..

or this vote will be removed

Voted For: Melancholy

Melancholy - you had some nice punchlines in there.. you also had good opener and ender...you flow was iiight and your flow transition was tight..keep working hard 7/10

Theory - man that was an iiight verse...you ryme with some basic words you need to elevate...your punchlines did not really hit....your opener was tight but your ender was pathetic.. 5/10

Voted For: Theory

Melancholy: it looks like you really weren't trying, you didn't realy have any clever punches most of it was kinda played.

Theory: some of your lines were funny and your flow was pretty dope too. You definatly had better lines than melancholy so I give you the win