next to lead
 

supposed to collab with ..wicked.. but he's takin to long .......so blahh just keyed this up

Next to Lead
Im next to none but I am the rising son
…I shine bright but my talents just begun
I was born with natural skills as young seed
….You couldn’t test me I was created to lead
….....Waiting in line I guess patience is a virtue
..Cautious, when u lead everyone wanna hurt you
……Im the next generation to guide this new world
….reality’s a bitch im just dealin with the same ol girl
…things getting twisted anxiousness of takin tha throne
my palms are sweatin just waitin for that ring of the phone
……….....im next to lead shit its been prophesied and chanted
im gonna straighten out society cause even my verse be slanted

uppin..................

uppin............................my post count

this was pretty good man.........u had a good flow....structure was creative.....ur last bar was nice....

7/10

drop an honest vote at this battle...i hate gettin slept on....http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=161728

thanks for tha feed man

bump..............

Bump bump i liked it alot, it made my brain go Yowzee...ill edit with feedback later yo..

lol yowzee.............good word

[COLOR=Blue] Good Piece Nice Work 8/10

thanks for the feed

uppin............

thats gay you those fucking ..... to make those lines look like that. damn no need for it.

i couldnt comprehend what you just said

ok ok you put dots in front of you lines to make them look like this
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yes what is your point

thats gay no need to make it look like that.

why not?.......

you obviously didnt read it all

yeah i read it all the first line was a bad mult and that rest was ok but the fucking style just annoyed me sorry it's just what i feel there ain't no hate i'm just say. i just did this shit to get my posts up

it was for structure ..............to fit my piece

YEAH homie dats was tight
its nice to see people writtin
verses about me......just kiddin
7/10,i like the creativness and fasho :thumbup:

thanks man upp...

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Where are your 2 links??

- If you do not have 2 links within 24 hours, you will have this thread closed untill u send them.
-If you do this again you will get suspended from O.M. forum.
- If you do it a 3rd time, you will get banned!

-I. Mind

COOL maybe i should post this link in the lyricist lounge to try and get peeps feed on this ;)

testin I.mind's modding skills..............are they just empty threats?? who knows
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=166027
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=167536


there are my links i mind

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