MaStErMind vs Given Light
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-20-04 at 06:04 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Given Light has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-17-04 06:04 PM.

MaStErMind has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-17-04 07:51 PM.

you've been "Given" the "Light" and at the end stands the grim reeper
my words so dangerous they come attached with misdeamors

i got a guardian angel by the name of makaveli
watch him laugh as i blast these lyrical bullets through this niggas belly

how can you counter a rhyme thats so compelling
you get scared like evil spirits rising from there dwelling

bown down bitch like my name was king salamon
takin a shit is the only way you could drop a bomb

get a toto and wand because his just a little fairy
showin no remorse as i brutally murder my advisary

roll him off and zip up the body bag-another one left slain
a tarnished reputation is all you got left to your rap name

ferensiocs show up take one look and say "bag it"
too bad cause the boys upstate wouldve had fun with this silly faggot

your lines be sp-sp sputterin but yo got no money fot gas
thats aight-they was played out like they was sega dreamcast

this weak motha fucka cant be pissed enough to knock me out my zone
grim reeper of rap bitch been placed in stone

you can see the light but i can see the end
dont even accet dawg because your verse has been condemed

7th bar and the2nd line the word is ferensics...my bad

Listen, sir-thinks-alot, you call yourself mastermind?
Even If I lent you 1000 i.q. points you couldn't equal mine!
From Michigan, seeing you project anywhere makes me laugh
Only possible talent you could emit would be mine easilyHalved
You couldn't string words together with that intelligence
I could be deaf, a mute, blind, and still make iller sentences
Grim Reaper of Rap? Your only approached by wack talent
Death,should be the least of your concern when you spit that!
Owned you like Santa and his red-nosed reindeer
Ya nose be changin color to, brown when a loss is near
Your records wrong by the way your two and one
cause now that you've lost this battle, we be over and done.


blah @ this.

uppin this, vote and all favours are returned no matter what.

upp...............................................

:thumbup: :thumbup: lights right yo......votes!..............

This was feedback posted for Given Light
 

I didnt Feel like voting bcuz im tired ive voted in every battle on this front line in the ;ast 2 days and wathc my battles still get slept on ................but if i wouldve voted i wouldve for .......................***IM NOT TELLIN**** LOLL

^ Than don't post moron...........................

A personal you might not recognise.

From Michigan, seeing you project anywhere makes me laugh
Only possible talent you could emit would be mine easilyHalved

Michigan is a penisula. Definition for penisula is a body of land that projects itself into a body of water.

Voted For: MaStErMind

I LIKED MASTERMIND'S VERSE BETTER. HE HAD BETTER VOCAB AND BETTER STRUCTURE

I STILL THINK BOTH VERSES WERE OFF.

GIVEN LIGHT U WAS COOL BUT I COULDNT CATCH A CONSTANT FLOW AND U NEED THAT IN A BATTLE

MY VOTE : MADTERMIND

AND MASTERMIND CHECK YA PMS

Voted For: Given Light

^both wack...bnoth elevate....vote:^him....

^ Thanks to those above for voting..


upping.

This was feedback posted for Given Light
 

checkin pollzxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Uppin this, make sure to leave links, so I can return the favour.

*sighs*

upp.

Leave links.

I'll give feeback.

Voted For: Given Light

God I think both did good but I have to go with him becuase I think he flowed better harder punches and his personals where good so hit up on my link u 2 peace.

thanks up this, and favours will be returned. !

Voted For: MaStErMind

yo i think mastermind took this one. this was a very close battle. he had better punches and vocabulary. keep elevating people. no hate. return the favor in my battle with honest votes please. the link is in my signature.

^Np, lets get this battle closed please.................

^word.............

remember to leave links please.

geeze, lets get this closed. Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

god damnit up this.......................................

um up? sil vous plait. (that's french for please))

Voted For: Given Light

damn you get this for sure,

Structure: Tie
Punch's:Given Light
Humour:Tie(no humour)
Flow:Given Light

pretty cool battle both of you but my vote goes too :

Vote:Given Light
WordPlay:

Thanks for voting, please people leave links!!! As soon as you vote on this, I'm definetly voting on your battle as soon as I can.

Voted For: Given Light

i vote for G. cuz of tha meta4's an tha great wordplay........

Upping this thanks for the vote one more and this baby is closed!

Come on LoL leave your links, I have returned feedback on everyones so I'm definetly trust worthy.

Voted For: Given Light

You couldn't string words together with that intelligence
I could be deaf, a mute, blind, and still make iller sentences
Owned you like Santa and his red-nosed reindeer
Ya nose be changin color to, brown when a loss is near

Damn dis guy brought FIRE in this battle. hrder punches and better wordplay and everything. complete slaughter. mm you need to elevate a lot more and start using more complex punches and wordplay. given clowned you this time. :thumbup:

VOTE ON THE BATTLE IN MY SIG!!!!!!