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Limited Edition vs Konqlusion.
Battle Rules:
10 Line Minimum, 16 Line Maximum No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Topical Battle, Topic Is....Trapped In The Jungle. If You Do Not Understand Our Concept's Or Content, Do Not Vote. Minimum posts to vote: 250 Check in by: 12-18-04 at 03:10 PM Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in. |
Limited Edition has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-18-04 02:49 PM.
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Konqlusion. has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-18-04 02:51 PM.
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Fear's Moulded & Shaped Into Twisted Figure's Of Vine's. Sun Searing Stamina, Struggling To Keep Grip On The Time. Undergrowth Swallowing My Ankle's, Stumbling Our Control. Bodie's Shrivelling Up, Delving Into Sleep, Sun Stripping My Soul. Snake's Snapping At The Random Path, On Which I Traipsed. The Jungle Was Too Savage, The Climate Alone Could Solve One's Fate. Boot's Were Gripless, Blunt & Torn By Creature's, Discarded Object's & Thorn's. Sweltering Heat Scarred My Hydration, Was Like Being Hung From Satan's Horn's. Sweat Plummeting Down My Body, While Howl's Of Animal's Sounded. The Mission Successful, But Aspect's Of My Survival Had Mounted. I'd Been Bitten, By Graceful Yet Villanous Reptile's, Insect's & Snake's. Patience Wearing Thin, Compass Busted, Boot's Torn, "Oh, For Fuck Sake!". Elevated Canopy's Shrouded Creature's & Minion's That Gazed For Prey. Throat Was Rough Like Sandpaper, Speech Was Denied, Under Siege By Sun Ray's. I'd Had Enough, "I Can't Get Out Of This Fucking Pit Of Chaos, & Survival". So, With A Sweep Of My Pocket Knife, Breath Evaded, Beyond a Revival... |
...All Of A Sudden...The Jungle Is Rushing Towards The Plane... ...A Head Rush...A Crash...And Then Blackness... I wake up...my neck hurts, mouth dry, my face caked with dust... ...I look at the pilot...recoil in horror...his face is brutally crushed It's an effort...but I am finally free from my restraining device... ...I look around the plane...it's like a hell in this jungle paradise I look up through the trees...the sun squeezes through the canopy... ...How come I was the only one left here...alone and damage free? A conflict in my mind...should I leave, or stay here with the plane..? ...I could be rescued...or the passengers' fate and mine be the same A hear the roar of a jaguar...the air I breathe fails to seep in... ...A silence...a pric on my arm, I gasp a tic burrowing beneath my skin Fuck...I rip it out, my red blood, dripping slowly onto the ground... ...I realize now...I am an instant target for the roaring animals around I have never feared death...but how I am a coward now I see... ...The dizzying heat...the roar of animals...the trees towering over me I hear another roar...closer now...it sounded like it came from behind... ...I twist my body...the piercing eyes...a sound of grass rustling, and a claw into my spine... ...Death Comes To All... ...Nobody Can Escape It... ...Even In Paradise... |
This is a fuckin' hott topical...uppin' for votes...favors will be returned.
Worthy opponents fo real mayne... :thumbnup: |
This was feedback posted for Limited Edition
damn this was a tight battle you both had some really really nice verses but if i had to vote it would go to LE but not cuz he is my crew leader he had more imagry and a better storyline to it i felt his emotion more as well.....but Kon had a good storyline great vocab and nice multi usage....this def is a close battle depending on how you view it and take in the verses it could go either way...good luck to the both of you
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This was feedback posted for Limited Edition
Checkin' polls...this was a very hott battle...keep up the good work both of you :thumbup:
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Voted For: Limited Edition
This Wass Deep But Limiteds Verse Made It Seem Real His Vokab And Lyriks Wass Hott Tha Strukture Of It Wass Koo And It Seemed Like A Real Life Sitaution Keep That Shit Up.... /V Limited Edition Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
That Ain't A Very Good Explanation, But Ill Let It Slide. Anyway Upping, For Vote's.
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This was feedback posted for Konqlusion.
.............Upping This Battle..............
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Agreed. We can get it removed if you really want. But anyway...uppin' for votes. Favors will be returned. :thumbup: |
Upping For Some Votes...Fucking 50 Characters.....
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A'ight...this battle is bein slept on...uppin' this shit for some fuckin votes...favors will be returned..
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Being Slept On...................Vote You Fucking Homo's.
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This was feedback posted for Limited Edition
checkin pollz................
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Voted For: Konqlusion.
I think this one was way better.....it was in very good detail but i had a hard time picturing this one but i liked how it sounded......everything was better in this.....were you rapping with a dictionary? lol LE yours was good i pictured that one easy.....this was good but not as much detail....this was good tho the on;y thing better on this verse was your flow.....but nice shit keep spittin that fire peace v/Konqlusion. return the favor http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=167288 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Limited Edition
both had nice pieces...good job to both . . LE:your structure was alsome....you had good vocab..nice flow....nice story line...and all-around really good piece overall:9/10 . . Kon:i like your piece also...you had a good flow and a nice story line...but what threw you off was ya strucutre...it killed you....in my opinon,....and your effort felt weak...overall:8/10 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
A'ight thanks...uppin' for some fuckin votes...this is another hott battle...
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Upp...dont sleep you worthless sons of bitches....
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Fuckin Sleepers!!!!!!! Upppinn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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If nobody votes on this shit soon, Ima fuckin slap you, and then get my dog to rape you...UPPIN!
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Uppin'...come on favors will be fuckin returned...for fuck sakes...
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This was feedback posted for Limited Edition
mmm i think youi guys shoulds tart battling in elevated frontlines
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Voted For: Konqlusion.
I like tha bar set up it wuz a hard choose but I love tha bar form drop Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Limited Edition
Opener: LE Closer: Kon Flow: Tie stucture: tie creativty: tie win: by a hard choice: LE Konclusion hmmvery good from you....good stucture and it flowed well also was your creativity...it was good...all tho im givin LE the win i think you did very well cuz this was a hard choice cuz you came out very good in all areas of stregth..keep workin on your stuff i see mad potential here tuff luck tho n hate pz LE i liked yours also very stuctureized untell the end it was a lil messed but its all tight....very good with the vocabulary and flowing and the multis were used a lil...nicly work with with the creativty....keep it up you did a great job..tony the tiger style:thumbup:..playin...no hate to both good luck also to both.. pz |
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Voted For: Limited Edition
LIMITED NO DOUBT GETS THIS BAT. He had better strucutre better imagry on helping me to understand the topic more u did also but he just made it short and sweet here is what I liked and how I graded it. LIMITED All Of A Sudden...The Jungle Is Rushing Towards The Plane... ...A Head Rush...A Crash...And Then Blackness... I wake up...my neck hurts, mouth dry, my face caked with dust... ...I look at the pilot...recoil in horror...his face is brutally crushed It's an effort...but I am finally free from my restraining device... ...I look around the plane...it's like a hell in this jungle paradise 19.7/20 KON Undergrowth Swallowing My Ankle's, Stumbling Our Control. Bodie's Shrivelling Up, Delving Into Sleep, Sun Stripping My Soul. Snake's Snapping At The Random Path, On Which I Traipsed. The Jungle Was Too Savage, The Climate Alone Could Solve One's Fate. Boot's Were Gripless, Blunt & Torn By Creature's, Discarded Object's & Thorn's. Sweltering Heat Scarred My Hydration, Was Like Being Hung From Satan's Horn's. 16.1/20 and hey hit up on my sig peace. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Limited Edition
vote has 2 go 2 limted here cuzza good rhyme shcmes and you had good structure and flow..made me really think and all aiight................ yo konclusion yo your shit wuz like poetry really wuznt feelin ur shit,.............................homie........... .... like edition made me think and actually i enkoyed readin his shit........ur shit wuz like some shakesspear shit homie...no hate or beef ,,,my opnion.,............... like I wake up...my neck hurts, mouth dry, my face caked with dust... ...I look at the pilot...recoil in horror...his face is brutally crushed It's an effort...but I am finally free from my restraining device... ...I look around the plane...it's like a hell in this jungle paradise ^^^^^^^ limted good intro homie......really good intro....... made me think...........hard//.........shit kon sorry daw wuznt feelin ur shit ...aight good shit by both here.................... |
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Uppin'................fuck this has been slept on for a long time...
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Voted For: Limited Edition
i was feelin LE's drop more...NO HATE...i think LE came with more creativeness and stuck to tha topic better. he came out with tha topic, and kept it thurout tha whole flow. i was loving tha structure and tha all around rhyming. rhymin was not too simple, and ur lines werent stretched from what i seen. i think u took this one... Konqlusion. -u had a nice drop, but i wasnt feeling it. i wasnt feelin tha all around structure...i think u should elevate on that...topic was coo for u. i think u stuck to tha topic, it was just boring to me...i wasnt feelin it that much. but no hate..i think u should elevate on that...more excitement in ur topicals...thats a big category. ur rhyming was good by tha way, but i think LE came too strong in this one...NO HATE THO... OVERALL- this was rather close, but LE came wit more creativenes, and more excitement...no hate...just honest voting... PLZ RTF ON BATTLE IN SIG...AGAINST CJ...too many battles gettin slept on...and i did take tha time to vote on this...NO HATE votes plz... good drops.....1......... |
Voted For: Limited Edition
KONQL;USION DOPE AS FLOW FOR FUCKS SAKE LMFAO HAHA DOPE BUT YOUR IMAGERY WASNT REALLY THERE YOU AINT BRING THE STORY TO LIFE I THINK YOU CONCENTRATED HARDER ON YOUR FLOW THEN ON YOUR LYRICAL CONTENT VOCAB WAS GOOD AS WELL HERE EMOTION WAS GOOD TOO ITS JUST YOU AINT BRING A PICTURE TO LIFE AND THAT HURT THE TOPICAL FOR YOU IN MY EYES. LIMITED EDITION FLOW WASNT AS GOOD VOCAB WAS EVEN AS WAS EMOTION BUT WHAT GOT THIS FOR YOU IN MY EYES IS YOU GAVE A BETTER PICTURE YOU MADE ME SEE SHIT LIKE I WS THERE WHICH IS GOOD AND TOPICALS AND WINS THEM EVERYTIME THATS GOT YOU MY VOTE. |
Voted For: Limited Edition
nice topic battle here LE: you took this one here, your story was good had some real nice shits up in yo story, the flow was good with it, vocabulary was on point here but overall here, that story was hella good though Kon: your story was okay, but to me not as good as LE's though, the flow was on point and the vocabualry was good, but i felt that your story wasn't as good as LE's though, but good story tho |
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