Drama Queen vs Youngun
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No D/R

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-19-04 at 01:24 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

Drama Queen has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-19-04 12:54 PM.

Youngun has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-19-04 12:54 PM.

ok...

expect the unexpected when i murk this drama queen,
something like a murder scene, when i rip out ya spleen,
youngun spits like a dragon so ill scolder your burnt brain,
i have to keep up with you, with your white lines of cocaine,
"scuse me miss you have got white powder under your nose",
"oh yeh, ive been sniffin on blow,shit! ive just exposed",
youve got no chance hunny,now get the fuck your knees,
i'd never fuck you, ill be afraid to catch an std disease
my lyrics will leave you for dead, ill dismember your torso,
even more so, sit back relax while i bitch slap this hoe,

Uncapable of bringing cats down with sass or rhymes
So you take your gun but any illiterate nigga can commit crimes
Born n raised in prep school, dressed like a fucking lacrosse-clown
Fix that frown cuz I'm taking you for a ride to The-Loss-town
A blind man can easily see your flair's similar to Tony Blair
Even after a ride on the London Eye, you'd still be square
All girls are out of your league,can't even afford a peep
So insecure but don't weep: you can always rape some sheep
I won't tell British tabloids so you remain the illest ever
Cause everyone pukes when it's your drop they've got to endavor

Hope you can see the UK-thing in there...if you don't get stuff, ask me or just don't vote...Votes will be honestly returned btw...

DQ

lol you automatically think that when people come from uk its london... lol nice verse any way

Voted For: Youngun

expect the unexpected when i murk this drama queen,
something like a murder scene, when i rip out ya spleen,
~NICE MULTI
youngun spits like a dragon so ill scolder your burnt brain,
i have to keep up with you, with your white lines of cocaine,
~A LIL WEAK
"scuse me miss you have got white powder under your nose",
"oh yeh, ive been sniffin on blow,shit! ive just exposed",
`DECENT
youve got no chance hunny,now get the fuck your knees,
i'd never fuck you, ill be afraid to catch an std disease
~WEAK
my lyrics will leave you for dead, ill dismember your torso,
even more so, sit back relax while i bitch slap this hoe,
~PRETTY FAIR MULTI


my vote goes 2 u, cause u came hitting a lil harder

you not got any battles you want me to vote on????

Upping this stuff...all votes will be honestly returned...

Uppin to get more votes...thanks...favor will be returned :) promised...

Voted For: Drama Queen

OK FLOWS AND STRUCTURE EVEN DRAMA HAD BETTER VOCAB BUT WHAT GAVE HER A WIN WAS BETTER MORE CREATIVE PUNCHES HERE WHILD YOUNGIN CAME VERY SIMPLE SHE CAME MORE CREATIVE AND HIT HARDER WITH HERS NEITHER HAD ANYTHING FIRE BUT DRAMA HAD SLIGHTLY BETTER PUNCHES

uppin this battle... lets get this over with.......

Voted For: Youngun

Youngun had harder punches & complex all
throughout this battle here..vocab was better, flow
was pretty decent, and the structure was good too
but overall tho Youngun took this one wit ease.......

Return Tha Favor Youngun

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...25&page=1&pp=15

Voted For: Drama Queen

YOUNGUN
expect the unexpected when i murk this drama queen,
something like a murder scene, when i rip out ya spleen,
^hella played, spleen lines are killed on this site.. :(
youngun spits like a dragon so ill scolder your burnt brain,
i have to keep up with you, with your white lines of cocaine,
coulda been a nice punch if u worded it better
"scuse me miss you have got white powder under your nose",
"oh yeh, ive been sniffin on blow,shit! ive just exposed",
not feelin, at all
youve got no chance hunny,now get the fuck your knees,
i'd never fuck you, ill be afraid to catch an std disease
aight, but again kinda played std's= played by this site
my lyrics will leave you for dead, ill dismember your torso,
even more so, sit back relax while i bitch slap this hoe,
nice first line.. second line.. aight, link irrelevant

DRAMA QUEEN
Uncapable of bringing cats down with sass or rhymes
So you take your gun but any illiterate nigga can commit crimes
funny ha ha, str8 opener
Born n raised in prep school, dressed like a fucking lacrosse-clown
Fix that frown cuz I'm taking you for a ride to The-Loss-town
aight... not too bad
A blind man can easily see your flair's similar to Tony Blair
Even after a ride on the London Eye, you'd still be square
blind man lines are played, last line str8 tho..
All girls are out of your league,can't even afford a peep
So insecure but don't weep: you can always rape some sheep
nice multis.. but more of a filler line
I won't tell British tabloids so you remain the illest ever
Cause everyone pukes when it's your drop they've got to endavor
endeavor* sum ppl may not have got that, was str8 fa a closer

Aight both verses were aight, but i have to give it to the more creative verse, Drama Queen..... u had nice vocab, sum better attempted punches, but youngun's flow was better.. played lines killed it for youngun :( ........
My vote/Drama Queen (close battle) u two stay up..

uppin this thread... lets get it over with........

...Uppity up...all favors will be returned...

DQ

Voted For: Drama Queen

i jus liked this verse better....
too me the cocaine stuff jus wasnt exciting it was more like blah and the link was gay.... not feelin it
DQ had a little creativity w/ the england stuff an i jus felt this verse better

This was feedback posted for Youngun
 

Voted For: Youngun

BOTH VERSES WERE GOOD BUT IM GOIN TO HAVE TO SAY YOUNGUN TOOK IT. HE HAD BETTER VOCAB AND FLOW. HIS PUNCHES PUNCHED HARDER AND HE JUST OVERALL HAD A BETTER FLOW.

aight uppin ya'll this is a close battle.......... all votes returned

Voted For: Drama Queen

^damn nice verse baby...you elevating....she riped you bro....better punches,personals...everything....v/DQ...

^Thanks everyone for the votes...hit me up with links you need votes or feedback on...got no time now cuz i gotta go take my final but when i come back, i'll check them out for sure...

DQ

yeh thanks for all your votes thais was a good battle drama no hate yeh?? uppin this...

Nope, no hate man... :)

Voted For: Drama Queen

ok battle my vote goes to drama queen because her verse was funnier her punches hit harder and i like her flow betta both could elevate younggun your punches were kinda of soft


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