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......Hold the Ground......
It's unfinished right now.... but i got my boi-Diabolic on this shit.. he produced it for me, it's with the Bone Thugs and Tupac beat.. btw- Thanx boi! :)
CLICK THIS!! ^then click music, then the top song titled Hold the Ground.. :thumbup: -feedback is much appreciated- RESPONDED TO THESE.. below.. :thumbup: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=166522 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=165866 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=165983 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=165389 |
I always loved bone thugs... :thumbup:
beat was good. You were dope :thumbup: .. flow was fine n' dandy.. only bad thing i picked up was your voice sometimes lacked emotion.. but whattya gonna do.. -_- |
appreciate this feedback, bumpin this shit,..... thanx
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Lmfao At Diobolic Thinking He Clue Lololololol Omg Wait Till He Get On Again Im Gonna Whore Him Lol;)anyways Good Flow And Nice Lyrics Buy You Sounded Way Too Much Like Shawnaa On This Way Too Much And That Killed It For Me:(
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damn you got that voice for that shit...nice flow too, props.
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cali... shawnna? i disagree WITH YOU TERRIBLY.... but that seem mo' of a compliment..... lol And thanx, so insane.. :thumbup:
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I definately agree with you on the beat...liked it!
Your flow was straight to the point,good emotion, was feeling this one for sure...listened to it two times in a row ;) hehe...nah, for real, solid drop and i can't wait to hear more of this stuff cuz it's dope so keep on dropping ya shit...i'll be looking forward to it... :) DQ |
^thanx fa the feedback, i'll return the favor....... :thumbup:
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uppppppppppin' this shit........ like whoa........ :thumbup:
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ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh shut yo ass up.... |
beat is hott...
but i honestly thought u was spitting a long ass hook.... i cuaght on when it was done u was pitting ya verse, i couldnt even really hear what u were saying neither..... work on ya presence, and clarity, other then that nice flow and good voice..... |
this beat fits ur style.........i think the vocals should raised a lil bit and u need to up ur emotion other than that i enjoyed it .....stay up grl
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^^word, thanx y'all.............. i kno what i need to focus on more now.. thanx......
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Listening..
Beat is good.. or course.. Flow is pretty good throughout the track.. At times it seems like you could have used a little more emotion, but its all good.. Breath control was good.. Quality was alright.. Overall, pretty nice shit so far.. Please hit this up.. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=167444 |
word, i will......... much appreciated...... :) ....
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props to my nigga bolic on this mixing...u trying to take my job nigga!!!!!!!!!!!!?......lmao...fiya ya flow was cool...your emotion was really lacking tho...an your pronounciationwa sshaky in spots.....try slowing down on some lines in stead of maintaining same speed throughout the track..it'll sound smoother that way....bolic...you have the laziness DJ vocal tags I have ever heard...u suppose to scream nigga...whatchu doing?......lol...stay up y'all..............1
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