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MC Firetruck vs Parallel
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8-14 lines... No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting dont even bitch out...battle me like this :gfy: Only vote if you understand punches and wordplay!! Minimum posts to vote: 450 Check in by: 12-22-04 at 05:20 PM Must drop verse in 1600 minutes after check in. |
MC Firetruck has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-19-04 05:36 PM.
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:)Thank you for finally agreeing to this, and good luck :thumbup:
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Parallel has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-19-04 05:38 PM.
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yo firetruck do 10 lines..then we can get an equal amount of rate liek how some people vote they do it by ratings on each bar so do 10 and ill do 10
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Ok, that's cool...I was planning on doig 10 lines anyway
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Im so sry u like fire trucks more then the childrens toy cars
I don’t care if ur an alias or newb cuz u still spit wack bars Shut your mouth up even if we have different prospectives You would still pick the opposite of the these objectives Putting out the hotter emcee’s with what your sexuality test Yet you still like to play cars & say a bisect-me is the best Instead of shootin out water didn’t you tell me you do jizz Its confusing that you love to spray liquids that don’t fizz At the same time you get that bisect me, gering surgery After people start to say ms fire trucks stayin with polygamy |
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Then lose smiling, don't be a pesimist Cuz your rhymes are so broke you put RV in a deficit You don't spit fire, if you did, well I ain't scared of the heat Don't think you're a thug 'cuz yellow lines run parallel to the street Yesterday your rec was 18-8, and if you just battle for fun Why you bitchin'? Oh, my bad, it's that time of the month Listen, you're no gangster, so stop ya fiction 50Cent_MurderInc beat you, to prove you're a contradiction Your panties are in a bunch and you started talkin' crap, man But now you lose...like your virginity to a fat man Blah, 10 minutes...good luck |
Voted For: Parallel
Then lose smiling, don't be a pesimist Cuz your rhymes are so broke you put RV in a deficit DECENT You don't spit fire, if you did, well I ain't scared of the heat Don't think you're a thug 'cuz yellow lines run parallel to the street OKAY… Yesterday your rec was 18-8, and if you just battle for fun Why you bitchin'? Oh, my bad, it's that time of the month DECENT PUNCLINE Listen, you're no gangster, so stop ya fiction 50Cent_MurderInc beat you, to prove you're a contradiction UM…OKAY Your panties are in a bunch and you started talkin' crap, man But now you lose...like your virginity to a fat man DECENT Next… Im so sry u like fire trucks more then the childrens toy cars I don’t care if ur an alias or newb cuz u still spit wack bars DECENT OPENER Shut your mouth up even if we have different prospectives You would still pick the opposite of the these objectives NICE PUNCHLINE Putting out the hotter emcee’s with what your sexuality test Yet you still like to play cars & say a bisect-me is the best DECENT Instead of shootin out water didn’t you tell me you do jizz Its confusing that you love to spray liquids that don’t fizz DECENT At the same time you get that bisect me, gering surgery After people start to say ms fire trucks stayin with polygamy OKAY… Overall…I think that Parallel took this one tho… Came harder in the punches too… RTF http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=167178 |
Voted For: MC Firetruck
^he got this with better personals and better vocab.....and also okay punches.....overall both need to elevate...alittle but not that muchhh...~1~ Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
thanks for the votes..uppin.......................
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This was feedback posted for MC Firetruck
checking the polls, i cant vote, but if i had to, id vote for firetruck...since his made sense & had personals...gd battle.
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Ready to win this one, uppin' for more votes......
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Voted For: Parallel
A'ight...Parallell gets this for slightly better punches...this was actually a close battle. I was expecting more from Parallel...but anyway thats not the point...Parallel came wit some funny punches, a nice even flow, nice structure...Firetruck...some a'ight punches but a lotta them was played...and your verse didnt flow too good. No hate...return the favor. Links in my sig. |
^good thing you didnt vote cuz i gurantee you dont even know what personals are..cuz if firetruck used personals he would say of what a lil bitch i look like and why i wear red all the time...and how im white..and shit everything...but learn rap please..
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oops i was pointed that at the newbie who left feed...sry..
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Apparently you don't know what a personal is...a personal does not specifically pertain to your physical appearance...and you do look like a bitch:thumbup: |
Uppin' this shit again, quit sleeping on this.....
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well a personal can go eather way...uppin............ |
uppin............................................. ...........
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Uppin', I'm ready to close and make me 4-0:thumbup:
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Quit sleepin' on this shit...uppin' for more votes
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This was feedback posted for MC Firetruck
nice spit............lmao.............................. ..
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This was feedback posted for MC Firetruck
checkin the polllllllllzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Quit givin' me feed and vote on this shit lol.....
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Uppin' because I won and I'm ready to close this...
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Voted For: Parallel
was kind of hard but here it is flow para structure tie hits para opener-closure tie imagry para multi para over all para peace. and hit up on da lnks. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
^Unexplained as hell...who the fuck votes based on imagery in a text battle?
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^yea tru wtf......but lol people vote................
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^That's an ok vote, but Parallel you deserve to lose. You're the worst textcee I have ever seen.
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Voted For: Parallel
Parallel - Iight spit, Ive seen better from you, but good flow and pretty good punches. Best Line - Shut your mouth up even if we have different prospectives You would still pick the opposite of the these objectives Worst Line - Instead of shootin out water didn’t you tell me you do jizz Its confusing that you love to spray liquids that don’t fizz MC Firetruck - Flow was ok, but you didnt really have any strong punches in there. Best Line - You don't spit fire, if you did, well I ain't scared of the heat Don't think you're a thug 'cuz yellow lines run parallel to the street Worst Line - Then lose smiling, don't be a pesimist Cuz your rhymes are so broke you put RV in a deficit OVERALL - This battle was pretty weak on both sides, but Parallel had some punches in there that won him this battle. Firetruck.. you need to work on some good punches and tidy up that flow. Vote - Parallel |
^What the fuck is that bullshit?! I murdered this pussy!
*hates the abundace of herbs on RV* |
Voted For: MC Firetruck
man.. u killed parallel here. better punches better flow and better personals.. he just got u on the structure... i knwo who u be mc firetruck... or should i say winston... lol.. but yeah better punches and personals and flow is why mc firetruck wins this battle... good job to both just up ur game parralel... |
Voted For: Parallel
LOL 1 sided battle. Parallel, took this. Flow - Parallel Punches - Parallel WittyNess-Paralell Just all around better IMO good battle |
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