Emcee vs Kilo704
 

Battle Rules:
10 lines
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-22-04 at 09:27 PM

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Kilo704 has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-19-04 09:28 PM.

nigga i'm battle strapped wit battle gats, uppin battle stats/
u a newbie 2 this battle rap ya open mic's is battle wack/
my rhymes like allah, make a nigga up & change his orthdox/
ya heart stops when twin glocks pop in ya skull leave ya brain in paradox/
u shouldn't b rhymin of that i'm positive cuz rap is prerogative/
even if i got banned cuz of my flow that law'd be abrogative/
i done upped my vocabulary and da shit's so very scary/
tha only way i'd let up on yo ass is if it was constabulary/
my verbal abuse leave mothafuckaz bruised and battered/
while my glock leave they vital organs oozed and shattered/



if yall dont believe some of them is real words den look 'em up

Emcee has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-20-04 09:53 PM.

kilo704? that's nearly a tonne and even more if measured in tonnes
while my rhymes are falling into place...K's falling through the ground
I'm really obviously fitter than kilo...and I also propose happy ending
since he'll eventually sit down...I'll always be the last man standing
I wish that you're solving...your eternal problems of lyrical flowing
cause I'm hoping...your weight is now the only thing that's growing
your skills are low rate...concentrate more on your skills and elevate
even if a whole baby you ate...you'd still be playing in featherweight
post counts don't matter...kid you all know emcees that much better
you'd just develop to be a biter...when I squeeze you you'd splatter

uppin dis 1...........i got dis nigga beat yo. no contest

Voted For: Kilo704

Kilo won to me his flow was better
it made a lil more sense and his vocab was
tighter 2


Emcee
yo shit didn't really make n e sense
sum of wut u said was kinda off so it messed
up da flow u had going but u did alrite

vote on my battle i voted on ya battle
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I need 2 elevate but his 1st 4 lines aint rhyme neitha did his last 2

This was feedback posted for Kilo704
 

A Its Jus me checkin The POLES like a janitor at a strip club
lol

If i Couldve Voted i Wouldve Voted for kilo .........wit the same explanation Wordplaya had ............but hey thats jus me

up for some votes.................................

yo em, i'm bout 2 put tha battle link in my sig so we can get votes quicka. do tha same yo.

This was feedback posted for Kilo704
 

kilo...you have elevated a lot....you won dis in my mind cuz multies and vocab...only thing was that you talked about glocks a lil too much...just some helpful advice

emcee, your rymhe schem wasnt that good...alot of the lines didnt even rhyme....also, al ot of the words in your linez were forced...

i cant vote though, cuz kilo is in my crew, but if i were to i'd say that kilo won....good job mayne, your elevating quickly...

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checkin polls.............uppin 4 some votes, damn dis thread been open 4 a hot minute n we aint even got no votes.

Voted For: Emcee

kilo

nigga i'm battle strapped wit battle gats, uppin battle stats/
u a newbie 2 this battle rap ya open mic's is battle wack/

weak. you need to come more complex in a battle. open mic is different.

my rhymes like allah, make a nigga up & change his orthdox/
ya heart stops when twin glocks pop in ya skull leave ya brain in paradox/

not that complex but it had a nice flow.

u shouldn't b rhymin of that i'm positive cuz rap is prerogative/
even if i got banned cuz of my flow that law'd be abrogative/

no. too weak. nice attempt at big words though lol.

i done upped my vocabulary and da shit's so very scary/
tha only way i'd let up on yo ass is if it was constabulary/

nope..not complex. the flow was a little off too.

my verbal abuse leave mothafuckaz bruised and battered/
while my glock leave they vital organs oozed and shattered/

not a punch of anything but i still liked this because of the scheme and flow.

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emcee

kilo704? that's nearly a tonne and even more if measured in tonnes
while my rhymes are falling into place...K's falling through the ground

wack. didnt even rhyme lol.

I'm really obviously fitter than kilo...and I also propose happy ending
since he'll eventually sit down...I'll always be the last man standing

didnt rhyme that well. weak as hell.

I wish that you're solving...your eternal problems of lyrical flowing
cause I'm hoping...your weight is now the only thing that's growing
wack. lol at least it flowed and rhymed.

your skills are low rate...concentrate more on your skills and elevate
even if a whole baby you ate...you'd still be playing in featherweight

wack.

post counts don't matter...kid you all know emcees that much better
you'd just develop to be a biter...when I squeeze you you'd splatter

wack ending.

kilo takes this easily cause he t least rhymed lol.

vote - kilo

Vote switched

ay u posted ya vote in tha wrong vote box but thanx 4 tha feed.

This was feedback posted for Emcee
 

checking polls............................................

This was feedback posted for Kilo704
 

just checkin da polls homie........................