DatBoiRob vs MaStErMind
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-20-04 at 11:38 PM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

MaStErMind has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-19-04 11:43 PM.

aight check it.....

before you go acceptin this battle-down get too over zealous
this cat couldnt find his dick if he was holdin a compas

ibreak into your *MIND* and *MASTER* your cerabellum
this dudes probably adopted-but his parents never had the heart to tell em'

peeps on here be talkin bout MaStErMiNd vs DatBoiRob
yea but did you see how mastermind made Dat boi sob

his post said "12 oclock tomorrow you know ill be there"
probably but you'll only see a hot verse if he brings some road flares

with losing comes a lot to learn-but winnin is just more fun
and as long as you on RV you gonna have alot to learn son

DatBoiRob has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-20-04 10:38 AM.

i think it is bout time for u to retire
cuz even if u were a dragon
u couldnt spit out any fire
nigga this battle got u in a bind
u like every kind, and i've mastered your mind
u need to get a new style of rhyme
u could change the "d" to a "e" and still couldnt master mine
come on nigga u aint 2 pac
but u talk alot so u can be like him and get shot
nigga my words alone can put ya soul to rest
my gun explains the holes in ya vest and chest
u keep jibberin and jabberin
ill pull the 48 magnum and get to clickin and clackin
and ya homies wanna kno wut happened
come in my face, see thriller like mike jackson
y u dont wanna fight back when u hear the gun clappin
u is a playful nigga so play some john madden
and when they find u dead there is no askin
nigga u and dicks are fuckin attracted
to mastermind in his mastermind in which i cracked in
ima have mastermind bein mastergracious
i couldnt look at the verse u put cuz ya bad shit is contagious
nigga i can leave u faceless
i got my heat to settle all confrontations
and his excuse for tryna act hard is ' neglectation '

explanations:
changin the "d" to and "e" is in the last part of his name and it spells "mastermine"
I think that is it but if u need anotha one let me kno
Votes:
please vote for this battle cuz i have other battles that only one person voted on and i cant find them to up them

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Nice Battle
 

Yeah Good Luck On The Votes And We Need The Votes.

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Mastermind Check Ya Pms. I Sent U One About Sumthin Important

Voted For: DatBoiRob

yo datboirob you have improved alot mayne well done... imma break it down...

DATBOIROB:

you had some good creative punches and you have sorted your flow out... but i9 kinda lost interest when you carried on rapping about the name mastermind.. apart from that your verse good...

some lines i liked...

i think it is bout time for u to retire
cuz even if u were a dragon
u couldnt spit out any fire
^^ aight... creative punch

ima have mastermind bein mastergracious
i couldnt look at the verse u put cuz ya bad shit is contagious
^^ haha this got me laughin...

overall good verse... you've elevated alot...

MASTERMIND:

ok your verse was auight but nothin special you had played punchesd and your vocab wasn't that good... you need to elevate more...

some lines i liked...

ima have mastermind bein mastergracious
i couldnt look at the verse u put cuz ya bad shit is contagious
^^ i could see i lil bit of creativaty but you landed a played punch

his post said "12 oclock tomorrow you know ill be there"
probably but you'll only see a hot verse if he brings some road flares
^^ ok i see a lil punch finally

overall i thought your verse was pretty week... you need to elevate you got potential but you need to try harder...

v/ DATBOIROB

yo return the favour link in the sig... pz. no hate

Voted For: MaStErMind

^both were wack.....v/^...for not making me throw my computer out the window.....

chaos vote
 

chaos vote didnt explain nuthin and i think it should be deleted

come on yall
 

come on yall we need votes badly cuz i kno i won but yall have to do ya votes so it can be a win on my record

votes are needed
 

we need votes. and i need a win in this battle for my record. come on yall dont sleep on me

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we need votes cuz this battle is like a month old. i need this ova wit

Voted For: DatBoiRob

IIIITTTTTZZZZZ OVER DATBOIROY GOT THIS SHIT WITH EASE...GOOD SHIT....U HAD SOME TIGHT ASS METAPHORS AND HARD HITZ GOOD SHIT HOLLA CHECK OUT THESE:
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OPEN MIC: THA CYCLE
RTF I KEEP LOOKIN OUT HOLLA

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all favors returned if my battles are voted on. come on im sincerre

uppin this battle for votes. all favors returned. come on yall

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come on yall kno i won just give me the votes

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ok uppin this battle for votes. damn homies and fam dont sleep

i need votes on this batle so i can have aslot open holla and vote or die

Voted For: MaStErMind

Punches: ABout equal, both of you had soft punches. Try and get them harder

Personals: Master mind got it with that one line about Dat Boi Sob. It was nice. But DatBoi you had a nice personal concept but you used it in the wrong way. You shoullda said, THe only wayyou could beat me by changin the d to a e. Youd get Eat That Boi. ANywayz.

Flow. Mastermind had it. It was more complex and wasnt repetitive like Dat boi

Multis: None of you had that complex of multis. Thyey make your punches hot harder

Overall: MAstermind had this. He had a smoother verse, with a better flow and one nice personal and punch.

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=170552

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