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Spektikul 12-20-04 04:06 AM

Spektikul vs ..Exponent..
 
Battle Rules:

10 lines even
1 day to check - 1 hour to drop
all rules

^^^
Changed to 1 day to check cause it says your offline right now so that should give you enough time to see this open battle thread.


Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-21-04 at 04:06 AM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

DQ'ed.. posted 12 lines instead of 10

System 12-20-04 01:09 PM

..Exponent.. has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-20-04 01:09 PM.

NewKid 12-20-04 01:11 PM

Tha 2 Lines Added At Tha Bottom Iss Tha Punch So Iss 10 Lines Flow And A Punchline.........

NewKid 12-20-04 01:11 PM

Greatness Of Performances Aren't Appreciated But Ya Spektikul?
Might As Well Leave Rv Cus You D/r So Much Theas No 1 Left Ta Do..
He's Onli On Top Cus His Location In Canada..
Thinks He's Man Enough,I'll Rip His Legs Out Tha Socket While Standin Up..
Above And Beyond?Gets That 4rm Stuffin A Dick In Uranus...
He's A Vet?But Yet He's Tha Lamest..
Guess Im Like Stolen Items You Couldnt Check Me Man..
Ya Recyle Tha Same Wack Shit Like Pepsi Cans..
If Ya Skills Wass Ova Tha Limit On A Meter They Still Wouldnt Rise..
This Fag Is Horrible He Even Make Tha Dead Pepl Sigh..
~Punch line~
This Fag Loves Tha Rainbow But Weas Tha Skittles..
What Newbie Is Gonna Take You Out? Now Theas A Riddle..

System 12-20-04 09:55 PM

Spektikul has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-20-04 09:55 PM.

Spektikul 12-20-04 10:17 PM

Im battling the Einstein of rap, should be my toughest opponent
'Cept in E=MC², Im the Emcee(MC) - Your just the exponent(²)
Got five wins against newbs, you battling vets is rather funny
Cause you've been elevating downwards, like the Energizer bunny
I set the battle to an hour, so you can try an make the voters clap
Now you gotta day, so write a punch-instead of your usual bitch slaps
You and your crew ain't the new generation of shit, nevermind Rapverse
Only way you'll be "on top" of this battle, is cause ou rapped first
The worst textee I ever heard, cause your from the "home of the philly"?
Heres a link, to ensure your future battles don't sound as silly.

R.I.P.

EyeDentity 12-20-04 11:10 PM

Voted For: ..Exponent..


Exponant
Multis Was Cool, You Need Work On Your Rhyme Scheme Though, Metas And Shit To, Vocabulary Needs Upping Also Structure's Getting Better Then What It Was Before, Good Use In WordPlay,.......8.5/10

Spektiful
Good Drop Rhyme Scheme Vocabulary Was There, Nice Structure Punches Lacked A Little But It Was A Good Verse, Multis And Metas, Was There Need Personals And Alot Of WordPlay Mang,....8/10........


Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Spektikul 12-21-04 12:46 AM

Upping this thing, lets get some real votes happening...

Adam 12-21-04 01:34 AM

Voted For: Spektikul

hahaha this was a close ass battle...solid drop by both...

Spektikul - dope structure and flow...some fuckin dope punchlines...specially the closer...haha and the opener was tight too man...good personals, and nice punches....i think my fav line was a tie between the opener and closer...it was a solid drop all together....

Overal: 8/10


..Exponent.. - nice drop man...the structure was a bit off at times, but the flow kept it real...some dope punches in there...liked the recyclin like pepsi cans line...and you had a pretty dope closer....because spek is the riddle man....you dropped good..but just a bit under spektikuls level...

Overal 7.5/10

Structure: Spektikul
Punches/Personals: Spektikul
Flow: Tie

V/Spektikul

NewKid 12-21-04 01:54 AM

Quote:
Quote:
Originally Posted by Red Bull
Spektikul is way too GODly to even think about battlin....damn he's hot....


Yo Thass A D/r Vote Im Cancelin That Shit

Ike 12-21-04 01:57 AM

This was feedback posted for ..Exponent..
 
checkin polls............................................. ..

L.E 12-21-04 01:58 AM

Voted For: Spektikul

A'ight...Spektikul gets this for overall better punches and personals...he had a better flow, structure as well...vocab was good...some funny punches...Exponenet...not bad, but you are not on this level yet...elevate, work on more creative punches, a better flow, and a more even structure...No hate. Return the favor if you haven't don so already. Links in my sig.

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Nynth Degree 12-21-04 02:03 AM

Voted For: Spektikul

Exponent:
Greatness Of Performances Aren't Appreciated But Ya Spektikul?
Might As Well Leave Rv Cus You D/r So Much Theas No 1 Left Ta Do..
Weak opener, punch wasn't hard
He's Onli On Top Cus His Location In Canada..
Thinks He's Man Enough,I'll Rip His Legs Out Tha Socket While Standin Up..
Blah...no punch
Above And Beyond?Gets That 4rm Stuffin A Dick In Uranus...
He's A Vet?But Yet He's Tha Lamest..
weak
Guess Im Like Stolen Items You Couldnt Check Me Man..
Ya Recyle Tha Same Wack Shit Like Pepsi Cans..
Doo doo...
If Ya Skills Wass Ova Tha Limit On A Meter They Still Wouldnt Rise..
This Fag Is Horrible He Even Make Tha Dead Pepl Sigh..
weak closer

Spektikul:
Im battling the Einstein of rap, should be my toughest opponent
'Cept in E=MC², Im the Emcee(MC) - Your just the exponent(²)
Decent play off his name, ok opener
Got five wins against newbs, you battling vets is rather funny
Cause you've been elevating downwards, like the Energizer bunny
Energizer bunny elevates downwards? I just thought he kept goin' and goin'...
I set the battle to an hour, so you can try an make the voters clap
Now you gotta day, so write a punch-instead of your usual bitch slaps
Decent personal
You and your crew ain't the new generation of shit, nevermind Rapverse
Only way you'll be "on top" of this battle, is cause ou rapped first
Decent
The worst textee I ever heard, cause your from the "home of the philly"?
Heres a link, to ensure your future battles don't sound as silly.
Decent coser, resourceful, but seems kinda played

Vote - Spek, and I already broke it down so fuck a explanation...RTF at a link in my sig :thumbup:

Adam 12-21-04 03:11 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by ..Exponent..
Yo Thass A D/r Vote Im Cancelin That Shit


shit nugga...obviously i was joking in that post...spektikul is my bitch :nono:

Adam 12-21-04 03:13 AM

plus look at my breakdown....its exactly like what everybody else who voted for him said....don't be a sore loser...nuff said

Spektikul 12-22-04 01:20 AM

Uppin.............................................


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