Lawless (Hs) vs Black Queen
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-22-04 at 12:40 PM

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Black Queen has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-20-04 12:40 PM.

i'll beat the shit outta lawless, as i guard-my-turf~
reppin "young criminals", but steppin' up y'all look like a "squad-of-smurfs"!~
i'll write my verse on posters and gloves till you "AD-mitt"-defeat!~[admit]
i'm the kick boxer, and the only time he get's "applause" is when he "clapped-wit-feet"!~
i smack-this-geek, for bitin' horrible-text but it's part of your-rep~
only time somethin good "comes outta ya mouth"...is when you givin oral-sex!~
inaudible-wreck, step to me and fail-quick..cuz you a frail-bitch~
get "eaten like fruit" after i rip you to "bits-n-pieces"...like trail mix!~
better evade-swift, cuz i look good when i obliterate-such-geeks~
his rhymes is like "cubs with no feelings"...cuz they "bearly-touchin-me"!~
ya very-lucky, that i'm lettin' you live...and-breathe-right~
but i'm bout to destroy you for being "more of a sap"...than-bee-hives!~
shatter ya-weak-pride, say da queen wack???...quit tellin-foolish-fables~
cuz you "lack the balls to play the game"...like empty-pool-tables!~
annihilate-ya-wack-verse, after i cut ya head off and watch ya "mind-crawl"~
use ya legs as my nine iron, then play golf with your eye-balls!~
ain't my-fault, that a 2.5 centimeter dick is what you're-holding-son~
this fag drags his dick up his boys ass...givin new meaning to "haulin'-one"!!~ ["hole-in-one", *haul=drag*, *2.5cm=1 inch*]

dere my verse

Lawless (Hs) has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-20-04 08:05 PM.

she ain't shit... I set off alarms like winona/
after i'm through wit her she'll be sweepin corners like Indian store owners/

she ain't a Black Queen not ill enuff to keep shit movin'/
this broad couldn't create a 'def jam' if she was Rick Rubin/

I'm known for breakin' plenty bars/
and when I'm through spittin' her heart gon race faster then a muthafuccin' indie car/

soon you gon be livin' a shattered dream/
Black queen? please... she unheard of like a AIDS vaccine/

she ain't crazy she know the nine rest on the hip/
she wouldn't think to 'cross me' if she had skills like professor or skip/

fucc wit me ma and be chillin' in a ditch or lobby/
non rhymin' ass prolly couldn't spit 'hot' if she was addicted to wasabi/

I hate to do it... but I'ma leave this young lady dead/
shit... n battles she bound to 'break' quicka then crazy legs/

she bout to snap like a muthfuccin pringle/
when I'm done rippin this hoe... she gon be makin' jingles for craft singles/

you snatched this one ma... ill shit...
ups on that...
we need feed

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uppin on votes lawless u cud help me up dis.......

Voted For: Black Queen

lmaoooooo even tho i dont like ya crew mad im not a hata..i vote honest.....n u merk law lol da shit looked pre written cuzz u aint have no personals or nothin ....law fam u under estimated shorty u had a couple nice lines but it just wasn't enuff n u should of spit more since it was unlimited lines.....

queen..take multies..punchlines...wordplay...structure ws a tie i understood both damm law u aint take nun fam

links r in my sig return da honest vote ya'll

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This was feedback posted for Black Queen
 

checkin pollz.......n black queen gon win dis 1. dats all i gotta say bout it lol u gon let her play ya dick game like dat mayne damn

Voted For: Black Queen

aii this IS How I Feel It

(Hs)
You came wit some decent Punchez They Jus werent Strong enough I Mean They Were Good Enough To Notice but They Werent really Put to Good use if you know what I mean ...................Um you multi's werent put to good use as so was your vocab Realy alot of thingz werent put to good use and thats wat Hurt you the most Sorry........now ~*~*RTF~*~*

Queen
Well I Liked ya verse You Came wit Some Killa Multi's Which I Like to see um I didnt See any Big Use of Vocab But that neva Hurts n e One Big ..........Punchez were Good I like the Way You mix Yo Punchez Wit Yo Multi's And meta's ...............Thats How its suppose to be I Like to see that In a Verse you Did Good ~*~*~RTF~*~*~

And Thats How I feel I Hope I Help Contribute in a good way .....now Contribute in My Battle LOL

RTF .....................I mean I Only Have one Battle

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Voted For: Black Queen

Black Queen took that one, her punches were right on, and the word play was crazy .. Lawless didnt come quite as hard, had some good lines, but im leanin toward Black, nice battle
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Voted For: Black Queen

dam girl/homes lol but you got thsi one no doubt her hits where harder her flow was better, her structure was iight, and her opner to her closure was pretty good but keep elevating on that and you will be fine, but hey lawless you're hits where soft but everything else was ok just keep elevating.

oh yea hate to double post but hit up on my links please. ;)

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Voted For: Black Queen

nice drop.. i like ur style ma'... u should join up with mk.... nice punches.. pretty good flow.. like the multi's structure is messed up.. stop with all this *~>? )*#& lol... but you killed the kid.. no chance... so due to the punches im'a have to vote for you ma'... and hey think about joinin MK..