..Galieth.. vs DopeMan
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 12-21-04 at 04:08 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

Dopeman has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-20-04 04:12 PM.

..Galieth.. has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-20-04 04:32 PM.

dogg, i'ma nice guy, thats why i filmed your mom with her legs spread..
i'm smarter than ever since she gave me head...
or do i mean brain? i dont know, lemme rhyme bout somthin else instead...
i got an enquiry about your sexual desires...
claimin your hot? psssh, a flamin faggot lightin fires...
wouldnt get recognition for those rhymes even if u handed em out as fliers..
try sellin that shit at a garage sale...
...you'd have 1 buyer...
an thats your own momma out of pitty...
i think u came out the wrong hole as a child, cause your so shitty...
here i'll let u hit-me, it'll have no effect...
if this was for the prezidency, it'd be history, cause we know who they'd elect...
the first black prezident an as my first decision....
u look like u need a brake from the battle....
...so i took the liberty to add an intermission..
...................................
.............now back to the flow
but make this quick, i gotta go pronto..
matter fact, i'm the underdogg, an i won, so save-it...
cause we already know goliath was beaten by david...

This was feedback posted for Dopeman
 

Checkin Tha Polls HaHa This Battle Funni As Hell Koed Hommie

Voted For: ..Galieth..

good battle

punches- Gali, overall your punches hit harder, Dman, u actually said u were an underdog, so u complimented him.
personals- Gali, basically u had em and they hit a lot harder. Dman, u had a nameplay, but that wuz it.
metas- Gali, had em basically.
multis- Dman, overall u had more of em. Gali, only one set, though it did flow well.
word play- Gali, nice wordplay and decent vocab. Dman, not much wordplay, decent vocab.
structure- Gali, overall easier to read, except for the white colorin damn. Dman, work on your structure.
flow- Gali, never fell off heavily. Dman, hard to follow wit your breaks, fell of more than Gali's
humor- Even, i felt like ya both had nice humor.

Gali, nice drop overall. Good personals, and good punches. Overall keep it up.

Dman, decent drop, but i felt it wuz more like a song. try some personals next time, and better wordplay.

No Hate Just An Honest Voter

v/..Galieth..

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This was feedback posted for ..Galieth..
 

checkin poolls............dont write shit in white..its annoyin..Peace

Voted For: ..Galieth..

aight good battle here...... imma break it down for u 2...here we go:

Galieth: for starters fuckin lose the white font, goddamn that hurts my eyes tryin to read that sorta shit.... any way, the structure was aight except the font color was ass but that dont matter... flow was good and was consistant throughout the verse which is good, punches and personals suprisingly were good, ive never read ya shit so i thought it wouldnt be good in the punches and personals department but it was pretty good..... vocab was good, u used a couple of complex things which will always help a verse out a bit.... shit was creative to a point so all in all this was a pretty tight verse, not the best ive seen but it was good.....overall i give this verse a 6.5/10

Dopeman: aight you also had a pretty good verse.... your structure on the other hand actualy hurt you in this one... the structure was kinda ass... flow was pretty good but would have been better with a better structure... so work on that shit dawg (no hate).... punches and personals were pretty good, some had me laughin like ya opener was good... your vocab was pretty good throughout the verse which is always a good thing and can only help a verse out... your shit was creative man, i liked it all except the strucuture.... all in all a good verse... 6/10

aight this was a close battle.... both of yall did very well here and much respect to the both of you... you both came and did ya thing and ya gotta respect that... but galieth is gonna take this one and i hate to say it but this one came all the way down to strucuture.... Dope man no hate homie, just work on the strucuture and u got it dawg.... good battle from both of you......................

VOTE- Galieth

Voted For: ..Galieth..

shit this was a funny ass battle,

opener and closer= dopeman
multi=dopey
punches=galoth
meta=galioth
structure=goalith

some good shit best lines fom both
matter fact, i'm the underdogg, an i won, so save-it...
cause we already know goliath was beaten by david...

And Now You Coming Back?? Shit Here, Your Skill Is Lacked,
Leaving Your Bars More Stretchen Then A Giraffes Neck

well i'm suprized your 3-0 up, ya verse was kinda basic but i aint gon complain so uppin...

<table style=filter:GLOW(color=WHite)>Upping This Shit Real Hard.............................</table>

Voted For: ..Galieth..

v/ goliath

dopeman...basically most of your verse was played.....most of the bars were anyway.....i felt like you came in a not very complex way....it was too simple....and dont use the momma jokes....they are played....you had 0 multis...no metas.....and your punches just didnt hit very hard at all.....

goliath....you had a couple of ok multis which helped.....your personals were decent......the nike line is played.....i dont know why you added that very last line in....didnt help any at all....basically im voting for goliath because he came less wack than dopeman.....his punches hit a lil harder and his personals were there

This was feedback posted for ..Galieth..
 

Voted For: Dopeman

Dope gets my vote becuase I think he was stronger in this battle I think his punches where harder he used more personals and he also had a excellent closure.

Voted For: ..Galieth..

v/ Goliath
goliath took this easily in my book...
first off dopeman yo flow was not on point, it was really hard to follow and switched up too much through out the battle, plus you had some stretched lines which didnt help...
Goliath you had a steady flow the whole way through...
the punches Goliath took because he had em all throughout the battle, Dope you jus didnt have enough...
you started out with good punches, then fell off which also didnt help...
not a bad battle, but i bet both of you could do better...