Trojan... vs Cuban~Storm
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 12 Lines
No Crew Votes
NO D/R Votes
No Hate Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
etc

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 12-23-04 at 07:42 PM

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Trojan... has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-20-04 07:46 PM.

Cuban~Storm has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-20-04 08:31 PM.

Cuban~Storm:

don't even pretend ur ill, ya wack.. imma reveal him
i'd put my two pennies in... but he'd prolly steal 'em
i don't expect u to show against me.. frankly who would
u aint commin close to a tie.. only thing u'll draw.. is blood
i'm getting dangerous and it's fair for me to say goodbye
chuz..
i'm grabbing the scissors and cutting..........off ur air supply
cuban is definatly cutting edge.........of the front lawn
and there's no need for a menu
.................especially when i'm cooking up a storm

This was feedback posted for Trojan...
 

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uppin for an eazy win bitches

Voted For: Cuban~Storm

Wow umm Ill Take The Time to Give A Detailed explanation on This Battle

Trojan
To Start off with You Id like To Say you Structure Was the first thing That I saw That was jus Fucked Up.....Then I Read Ya Verse and at the beggining It had A Decent flow but then At The End You wont rymin and it seems like you were jus tryin to talk and not rap,,,,,,,umm Basically You need to work On Ya Style all Over Bcuz you Seriously Fucked this verse Up
No Hate Mayne Jus Speakin My opinion

Cuban~Storm
I Liked ya verse and I Like the way You Held That Same Rythm and Flow Throught The whole verse ...I didnt See any Flaws with your Punchez and Personals Bcuz they Are Str8.....Um The only Thing i can Say Is Try to Work On Multi's But Thats Not No Big problem when Ya Got a Verse like your but thats What i Say you Were Missing So.....There.

Please Take The Time To RTF In My battle ..I Only have One Battle And I Think It Wouldnt Hurt You To RTF Thanx

This was feedback posted for Trojan...
 

checkin pollz........

This was feedback posted for Cuban~Storm
 

Nice Cuban~storm Keep It Up Uppin For My Nikkah Cuban Werdness

fuckin' kids...not knowing how to vote................wackness

up-up-up and away!

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Voted For: Cuban~Storm

don't even pretend ur ill, ya wack.. imma reveal him
i'd put my two pennies in... but he'd prolly steal 'em
…no
i don't expect u to show against me.. frankly who would
u aint commin close to a tie.. only thing u'll draw.. is blood
okay
i'm getting dangerous and it's fair for me to say goodbye
chuz..
i'm grabbing the scissors and cutting..........off ur air supply
decent
cuban is definatly cutting edge.........of the front lawn
and there's no need for a menu
.................especially when i'm cooking up a storm
okay

Yes it’s Cuban~Storm reigning RV and on this Rain Coat bitch
So you think ya ruff around the edges I think not and I’m a lunatic
decent
So you “smooth with the ladies” but you look like a pussy this time
But its true wat they say you could be a dick...well not mine
good
Trojan can’t deal with the fact that my rhymes are much hotter
This bitch is too dumb, that he looses himself while he wonders
good…
So there’s no question, that to me you’re no contestant
So now I confess this, that I once was and still am blessed
…okay
No more need of a bitch wit protection let alone lubricated
So I’m done...cuz once I bust, this Trojan gets wasted
decent closer

Overall C~S took this one…punches were just plain-harder
And the structure + flow was good with it…Trojan came weak

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This was feedback posted for Trojan...
 

Trojan Got This Cuz Cuban Boy Blew Ass Thats The Weakest Shit I Ever Seen So Props Ta Trojan Good Shit...look Out On Ma Open Battles

Voted For: Cuban~Storm

cuban storm dam nigga that is some tight shit you got going on. But here is how it goes down
flow cuba
strucutre cuban
opener-closer cuban
hits cuban
vocab cuba
hits tie
imagry cuban
so over all its cuban and hey look up my bats and vote peace.

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hahaha chuck low i hating cuz I vote for D Truth in his battle wit her cuz obvisouly D truth one chuck low is a fuckin hater lol

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Voted For: Cuban~Storm

dis shit was fire yo punches were soft doe could of came harder but yo verse was ill as a bitch trojan elevate not a bad verse doe structure fix it
nuff said....

Voted For: Trojan...

no hate 2 cuban but u lost fam......ya verse was real basic nothin cleva or creative....troj ya verse solid u had a few good punchlines.....

opener-tie...
structure-cuban
punchlines-troj
wordplay-nun
multis-nun
personals-troj
finisher-troj...good personal
enjoyed-troj......nuff said

links r in my sig..return da favor ya'll

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Voted For: Cuban~Storm

yeah ill give this to you man aight job for a new rv gimme a holla if ya wanna start a crew

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Voted For: Cuban~Storm

ok easy battle cs you rips the dude

Flow cs
Style cs
Vocab cs
rhyme scheme trojan
opener cs
closer cs
punches none
personal cs
wordplay cs

vote cs
best line:Yes it’s Cuban~Storm reigning RV and on this Rain Coat bitch
So you think ya ruff around the edges I think not and I’m a lunatic