J~FOUR vs The Alias King
 

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Check in by: 12-24-04 at 09:31 PM

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The Alias King has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-20-04 09:32 PM.

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J~FOUR has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-20-04 10:07 PM.

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your such a newblol any wy lts get to it..........

Ayo

When I Rip Dudes To Shreds, And Put Two's To Heads
I Leave "Niggas Sleepin" Like "Black Dudes In Beds" ~
Punches Bruise When Sent, To Make Fools Of Lames
Cause I Stay "Over Alias's" Like "Breaking Up With Names"~
The Truth Is Plain, "Shootin A.K." Like "Automatic Weapons"
Cause Punches Stay "Hitting Zones" Splitting All Your Sections~
My Name Not Mentioned, Till I Grasp His Tounge And Slice
And Make "W(Double You's)" With No Verse Just Knifes ~
Duke, "Excpect To Get Beat" Like "Misbehaved Children"
Cause I Leave "Brains Like Fans" Always "Stayin On The Ceiling"~
And "Stomachs Get A Tight Feelin" when "Punches Hit Ya Chest"
Cause This "Dude Win Is Negative" Like "Male Pregnancy tests"~

i'm all over gun punches so you can get your ass pistol whipped
Gang violence so if i don't make you blood you'll get cripped
look they should call me c-4 and we can see who drop a bomb first
I'm at the top being the best and you on the bottom being the worst
I got the power to alimbanate all u snitches and make u
bitches
i'ma make it so that your nba patches is gonna need stitches

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no doubt................................ big up to u dawg you came across hard then i thought you would

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Voted For: J~FOUR

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Voted For: J~FOUR

i'm all over gun punches so you can get your ass pistol whipped
Gang violence so if i don't make you blood you'll get cripped
look they should call me c-4 and we can see who drop a bomb first
I'm at the top being the best and you on the bottom being the worst
I got the power to alimbanate all u snitches and make u
bitches
i'ma make it so that your nba patches is gonna need stitches
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ TALKING ABOUT KILLING IS NO PUNCH, YOUR JUST MAKING THREATS, NO PUNCHES, FLOW WAS CHOPPED UP, PERSONALS WASNT GOOD EITHER. BAD VERSE HERE FAM



When I Rip Dudes To Shreds, And Put Two's To Heads
I Leave "Niggas Sleepin" Like "Black Dudes In Beds" ~
Punches Bruise When Sent, To Make Fools Of Lames
Cause I Stay "Over Alias's" Like "Breaking Up With Names"~
The Truth Is Plain, "Shootin A.K." Like "Automatic Weapons"
Cause Punches Stay "Hitting Zones" Splitting All Your Sections~
My Name Not Mentioned, Till I Grasp His Tounge And Slice
And Make "W(Double You's)" With No Verse Just Knifes ~
Duke, "Excpect To Get Beat" Like "Misbehaved Children"
Cause I Leave "Brains Like Fans" Always "Stayin On The Ceiling"~
And "Stomachs Get A Tight Feelin" when "Punches Hit Ya Chest"
Cause This "Dude Win Is Negative" Like "Male Pregnancy tests"~
^^^^^^^^^^ ALRIGHT NICE SHIT...GOOD PUNCHES....WORDPLAYS WAS NICE......PERSONALS WAS NICE TOO (DISSING HIS NAME).........FLOW WAS GOOD TOO


OVERALL= HANDS DOWN TO J-FOUR CAUSE HE HAD WAY BETTER VERSE, PUNCHES WAS WAY BETTAH, FLOW WAS WAY BETTAH, PERSONALS WORDPLAYS WAS WAY BETTAH TOO. ALIAS KING WAS MAKING THREATS NOT PUNCHES...SORRY HANDS DOWN TO J-FOUR

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Voted For: J~FOUR

J~FOUR: nice drop..punches were hard hittin..decent structure & flow..nice vocab...decent wp's too..overall u had a decent drop nuttin good tho but decent

The Alias King: decent drop from you..punches werent really hard hittin tho..ur structure was aight and the flow was good but overall u could've made ur punches a little harder tho

RTF J~FOUR

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Jesus.. Everyone Deleting Votes Like Its They Fuckin Job Or Something.. Rise For Votes..

same here i'm looking for vote come on ya'll......

still upping for votes ya'll come on...............

Voted For: J~FOUR

man you worked that bitch props man good shit nice setup and nice finish man

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Voted For: J~FOUR

lololol Cause I Stay "Over Alias's" Like "Breaking Up With Names"~
The Truth Is Plain, "Shootin A.K." Like "Automatic Weapons"
Cause Punches Stay "Hitting Zones" Splitting All Your Sections~
My Name Not Mentioned, Till I Grasp His Tounge And Slice
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ lolol good shyt here.....j 4 dope lines ...overall good shyt good flow and structure....phat punches.............yo alias king ur wack drop the gnagsta shyt thang......not on..........ai.......makes sum niggrozsilk..........alias u lackd flow punches were wack,and overall vote goes 2 j 4...........yo drop a honest vote in my battles ............returun the favour