..Exponent.. vs ..Galieth..
 

Battle Rules:

8 - 20 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

No Dickriders

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-20-04 at 10:44 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

..Exponent.. has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-20-04 10:14 PM.

This Geek Bites Off Everi Thang Including Zeke..
He Tries His Best In Rappin But Iss Truly Weak..
No Chance Of Beatin Me Like Glen Rice Being Tha Star Of Tha Rockets..
All These Biblicle Names And He's Still Not A Phrophet?
Im Confused Why Is This Church Boy Acting Bad...
This Pussies Identity Gets Changed More Than Maxi Pads..
4rm Isaiah Ta Zeus And Now Galieth..
A Bitch Wantin War?Iss Like A Female Riot..
This Iss Like Vanilla Ice Beatin Cass In A Battle..
In Prison, His Gluteuos Maximus Wass Auctioned Off Like A Raffle..
I Was Close Ta Merkin Zeke Until Galieth Showed Up..
Like A Vaccum He Picks Up,Suck Then He Folds Up..
I'll Make His Rappin Carrier Fade Like A Bowl Cut..
Ya Personals Horrible And Ya Punches Suck..
U A Earl Boykins Me Shaq So Im Not Punkin Up..
This Kid Is More Of A Nut Than Eminem..
His Onli Intercourse Came 4rm Bisexual Gentleman..
If Iverson Wass His Dad He Wouldnt Be Tha Answer..
Hes More Pussy Than A Group Of Female Exotic Dancers..
His Chances Of Surving Iss Slim Like A Victim 4rm Cancer..


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..Galieth.. has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-20-04 10:33 PM.

Voted For: ..Galieth..

My vote goes to Galieth for better punches and multis as well plus had the better overall verse....he had creativty and stuck with personal for most of the rhyme....not only that but the wordplay was there..or at least an attempt at it....u had everything else pretty much and it seemed to come out better than Exponents...the flow was about the sam here but everything else i have to give to Galieth....i'm fair voting so peaceezy....

and please hit up the battles in my sig and return tha fava vvv

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Voted For: ..Galieth..

*yawn* easy vote

punches- Gali, overall u kept em comin, not all hard hittin, but still good. ET, u self glorified, and weak punches in the end.
personals- Gali, good personals. ET, started out good, but fell off at the end.
metas- Gali, had better ones overall. ET, u had more, but in this case quality beat out quanity.
multis- Gali, becuz u had em.
word play- Gali, overall not the best wordplay, so work on it. ET, i dont even see wordplay.
structure- Tie, both structures werent that great, but i could read em.
humor- Gali, blah.
flow- Gali, really not the greatest flow, it fell of a lot in one line, but it wuz aight overall. ET, fell off too much, little at a time.

Gali, work on your word play, and also on your vocab. Kinda weak at those points, other than that pretty good.

ET, u self glorified, played punches, need to work on word play and multis, and also work on personals, cuz he wuz a prophet.

No Hate Just An Honest Voter

v/..Galieth..

px

Voted For: ..Exponent..

yo muh vote goes 2 ..exponent.. dude held it down from metaphor 2 flo he wuz tha best

return tha favor..vote on muh battle vs. Jim Crow

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this wuz one a tha best battles i read in a while on here

Voted For: ..Exponent..

i think exponent got dis in da bag. his punches were a lot betta in dis battle and his vocab, he used his wordplayto perfection. dalieth u been stned by david.........lol. ur vocab was not as sharp
v/exponent

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Voted For: ..Exponent..

i was feelin dis a lil more...because

he had a lil betta flow...Coliath..sounds like his shit was honestly written

vote-Exponent

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This was feedback posted for ..Galieth..
 

both had good shits...
but i aint gonna vote..
might be unfair....good
luck to both tho.........

.Out.

Voted For: ..Galieth..

This Geek Bites Off Everi Thang Including Zeke..
He Tries His Best In Rappin But Iss Truly Weak..
No Chance Of Beatin Me Like Glen Rice Being Tha Star Of Tha Rockets..
All These Biblicle Names And He's Still Not A Phrophet?
Im Confused Why Is This Church Boy Acting Bad...
This Pussies Identity Gets Changed More Than Maxi Pads..
4rm Isaiah Ta Zeus And Now Galieth..
A Bitch Wantin War?Iss Like A Female Riot..
This Iss Like Vanilla Ice Beatin Cass In A Battle..
In Prison, His Gluteuos Maximus Wass Auctioned Off Like A Raffle..
I Was Close Ta Merkin Zeke Until Galieth Showed Up..
Like A Vaccum He Picks Up,Suck Then He Folds Up..
I'll Make His Rappin Carrier Fade Like A Bowl Cut..
Ya Personals Horrible And Ya Punches Suck..
U A Earl Boykins Me Shaq So Im Not Punkin Up..
This Kid Is More Of A Nut Than Eminem..
His Onli Intercourse Came 4rm Bisexual Gentleman..
If Iverson Wass His Dad He Wouldnt Be Tha Answer..
Hes More Pussy Than A Group Of Female Exotic Dancers..
His Chances Of Surving Iss Slim Like A Victim 4rm Cancer..
^^^^^^^^^^ SAY HELLOW LOL NICE PUNCHES GOOD FLOW NICE PERSONALS TOO, BUT STILL ELEVATE ON THEM PUNCHES ALRIGHT FAM




I'll Prove Once And For All He Really Is A NewKid,*
After I Cut Him Up More Times Then DJ Whoo Kid,**
No Votes, Like You Never Had Member In Time 2 Rhyme***
Thinking You Can Put A Loss On THat Record Of Mine,
You Going Backwards Kid I Got You In Rewind,
Wanted To See Who Was Better So He Battled HimSelf, Loss Then Ran To The Center Of Emrgency Help
You'll Never Beat Me I'm Like A Mathematical Equation
Exponent Aint It When Your Class Is Made From Retardation
In fact G Does Suck A lot Of Dix, Cant You Tell By His Name,****
He's Prefixed It So He Can Come Back, And Lose In Pain,
It's Clear The Equation's Solved Coz You Can't Beat Me,
When You Take Off Ya Boots You Smell Defeat, Don't Repeat Me*****
The Probability Of The Matter Is You'll Never Be Mathematical
Your Just Like Parallel Your Skill Is Seen Laughable
It Took Me Couple Bars To Get The Job Finished,
Your Perfect Record Has Finally Bin Diminished....
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ALRIGHT NICE PUNCHES GOOD FLOW DECENT PERSONALS



OVERALL= OK THIS AN CLOSE BATTLE TOOK ME 10 MINUTES TO FIRGURE OUT WHO SHOULD GET MY VOTE,,, ex- had some good punches nice flow, the punches is what toook ex verse decent good wordplays nice meta'z. now zeke verse was decent too the personals was like WHOA~!, the punches were nice, alright it comes down to punches, both got flow, personals, ect. i think the person with the most hardest punches goes to zeke kid had some decent personals with them. no hate ex- u had good wordplays meta'z, the punches were nice, didnt see any personals, but still your punches was nice. but i felt zeke punches came a lil harder

v/zeke

This was feedback posted for ..Exponent..
 

nice flow X......you 2 Zeke......both where close...thats why im not voting on it....to close all I have to say...

This was feedback posted for ..Galieth..
 

This was feedback posted for ..Galieth..
 

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Voted For: ..Galieth..

v/ Goliath
a VERY close battle, actually probably one of the closest i read...
both had a very nice flow, it was steady throughout the whole battle and easy to follow...
punchlines were almost even, but Goliath takes it by a hair just because he had more...your punches were at the same level id say, but Goliath had more which helps (even though i HATE when people explain punches it really didnt matter)...
structure was fine...
humor was probably on Goliaths side, but i really dont factor it into a battle unless there is a ton of it...
Ponet i think that you couldve come stronger at the begining though, this wouldve helped out a lot....
very good battle, but Goliath wins with da punches...

Voted For: ..Exponent..

ok my breakdown.......exponent
This Geek Bites Off Everi Thang Including Zeke..
He Tries His Best In Rappin But Iss Truly Weak..
hmm...not too good...not a very strong opener 2/10

No Chance Of Beatin Me Like Glen Rice Being Tha Star Of Tha Rockets..
All These Biblicle Names And He's Still Not A Phrophet?
lol nice lil personal....glen rice line coulda been better though 5/10

Im Confused Why Is This Church Boy Acting Bad...
This Pussies Identity Gets Changed More Than Maxi Pads..
nice meta...i was feelin it........6/10

4rm Isaiah Ta Zeus And Now Galieth..
A Bitch Wantin War?Iss Like A Female Riot..
ok first line...could have been a good bar but honestly it was just decent 4/10

This Iss Like Vanilla Ice Beatin Cass In A Battle..
In Prison, His Gluteuos Maximus Wass Auctioned Off Like A Raffle..
hmm...decent...kind of a fake personal though 3/10

I Was Close Ta Merkin Zeke Until Galieth Showed Up..
Like A Vaccum He Picks Up,Suck Then He Folds Up..
lol decent.....ok punch 6/10

I'll Make His Rappin Carrier Fade Like A Bowl Cut..
Ya Personals Horrible And Ya Punches Suck..
U A Earl Boykins Me Shaq So Im Not Punkin Up..
coulda been worded better..but still hit pretty hard....lose the boykins line 5/10

This Kid Is More Of A Nut Than Eminem..
His Onli Intercourse Came 4rm Bisexual Gentleman..
hmm ok...didnt hit too hard 3/10

If Iverson Wass His Dad He Wouldnt Be Tha Answer..
Hes More Pussy Than A Group Of Female Exotic Dancers..
His Chances Of Surving Iss Slim Like A Victim 4rm Cancer..
lose the cancer line....ok closer...could have been better 4/10


Goliath......
I'll Prove Once And For All He Really Is A NewKid,*
After I Cut Him Up More Times Then DJ Whoo Kid,**
nice opener...hit hard...i was feelin it 6/10

No Votes, Like You Never Had Member In Time 2 Rhyme***
Thinking You Can Put A Loss On THat Record Of Mine,
You Going Backwards Kid I Got You In Rewind,
nope...wasnt feelin it...had potential to be a good bar with the first line though... 3/10

Wanted To See Who Was Better So He Battled HimSelf, Loss Then Ran To The Center Of Emrgency Help
lol nice personal.....nice bar...hit hard
6/10
You'll Never Beat Me I'm Like A Mathematical Equation
Exponent Aint It When Your Class Is Made From Retardation
not feelin the retard joke...it hit ok though 3/10

In fact G Does Suck A lot Of Dix, Cant You Tell By His Name,****
He's Prefixed It So He Can Come Back, And Lose In Pain,
decent....ok play off of his name 4/10

It's Clear The Equation's Solved Coz You Can't Beat Me,
When You Take Off Ya Boots You Smell Defeat, Don't Repeat Me*****
decent...didnt really hit too good though 3/10

The Probability Of The Matter Is You'll Never Be Mathematical
Your Just Like Parallel Your Skill Is Seen Laughable
not too great...2/10

It Took Me Couple Bars To Get The Job Finished,
Your Perfect Record Has Finally Bin Diminished....
decent closer....4/10

exponent....38/90
goliath.......31/80

basically i thought this was a pretty close battle....but i felt that exponent stayed more consistent throughout his verse whereas goliath had some really good bars...but then he would have a bad bar....i just dont think he was consistent enough throughout his verse........return the favor exponent in my battle vs. spektikul, coopa bang, terror2005, or pictureperfect2.....thanks

This was feedback posted for ..Exponent..
 

Voted For: ..Galieth..

honest as fuck-
i think u have good style and u whooped his ass
keep up wid the good shit if u ever want me to check some more shit out just hit me up
u used weapons of mass destructions on his ass good job dog

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Voted For: ..Exponent..

I'll Prove Once And For All He Really Is A NewKid,*
After I Cut Him Up More Times Then DJ Whoo Kid,**
....wack, self glorifying
No Votes, Like You Never Had Member In Time 2 Rhyme***
Thinking You Can Put A Loss On THat Record Of Mine,
....wack, not a punch
You Going Backwards Kid I Got You In Rewind,
Wanted To See Who Was Better So He Battled HimSelf, Loss
....wack first line selfglorifying, secound just wack
Then Ran To The Center Of Emrgency Help
You'll Never Beat Me I'm Like A Mathematical Equation
....wack s/g, not a punch
Exponent Aint It When Your Class Is Made From Retardation
In fact G Does Suck A lot Of Dix, Cant You Tell By His Name,****
....uh, no i cant and sayin someone sux dick is beyond played
He's Prefixed It So He Can Come Back, And Lose In Pain,
It's Clear The Equation's Solved Coz You Can't Beat Me,
....i think he can, win and thats not a punch at all
When You Take Off Ya Boots You Smell Defeat, Don't Repeat Me*****
The Probability Of The Matter Is You'll Never Be Mathematical
....get outta here, defeat lines been played out over a year ago
Your Just Like Parallel Your Skill Is Seen Laughable
It Took Me Couple Bars To Get The Job Finished,
Your Perfect Record Has Finally Bin Diminished....
....WACK, no wordplay, not a punch, and seeing your skills is laughable.


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exponet- decent battle not special but didn't have to be to beat this kids wack verse full of self glorifying lines and no punches.

Voted For: ..Exponent..

pretty decent battle but ima have to give this one to ..Exponent... he had a dope verse..

Exponent[b]
Nice drop exponent you had some nice ass pesonals dope drop, Your structure was dope. Punchlines were hitting there mark and really doing an affect. Personals were dope!! you had nice as personals , damn new kid you've rally elevated from the last time ive seen you , overall your verse was good still can use some elevating but you won this battle

[b]Zeke aka goliath
Your verse was iight but i didnt loike the way you posted your verse in White , that was really wack your structure was fuked, your punchlines were iight nothing really special , multies were there but they were alittle forced , overall your verse was an average verse but newkid just out did you nuff said

overall vote - Newkid aka ..exponent..

pz

This was feedback posted for ..Galieth..
 

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Voted For: ..Galieth..

first thing first I was told
that u r Zeke

second I this was a close battle
good verse from both and there were
some hard hittin personals
Exponent u had a raw verse also and punches were
funny lol
well anyway my verse goes to Golith cuz he came harder than exponet in this battle

~1~

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Voted For: ..Exponent..

eyedentity

I'll Prove Once And For All He Really Is A NewKid,*
After I Cut Him Up More Times Then DJ Whoo Kid,**
(KINDA WEAK OPENER...DECENT FLOW...6/10)

No Votes, Like You Never Had Member In Time 2 Rhyme***
Thinking You Can Put A Loss On THat Record Of Mine,
(KINDA PLAYED OUT...FLOW GOOD...6/10)

You Going Backwards Kid I Got You In Rewind,
Wanted To See Who Was Better So He Battled HimSelf, Loss
Then Ran To The Center Of Emrgency Help
(WAY PLAYED AND STRETCHED...NOT FLOW...WEAK DISS...5/10)

You'll Never Beat Me I'm Like A Mathematical Equation
Exponent Aint It When Your Class Is Made From Retardation
(FIRST LINE IS WEAK...SECOND IS DECENT..6/10)

In fact G Does Suck A lot Of Dix, Cant You Tell By His Name,****
He's Prefixed It So He Can Come Back, And Lose In Pain,
(PLAYED OUT...IT DONT MAKE SENSE...5/10)

It's Clear The Equation's Solved Coz You Can't Beat Me,
When You Take Off Ya Boots You Smell Defeat, Don't Repeat Me*****
(NO REAL GOOD DISS HERE...FLOW IS OKAY...NEEDS WORK...5/10)

The Probability Of The Matter Is You'll Never Be Mathematical
Your Just Like Parallel Your Skill Is Seen Laughable
(KINDA PLAYED AGAIN B/C OF A SIMILAR LINE...DECENT FLOW THO...AND PUCH OK...7.5/10)

It Took Me Couple Bars To Get The Job Finished,
Your Perfect Record Has Finally Bin Diminished....
(WEAK CLOSER...FLOW IS OK...WORD USE WEAK...5/10)


AIGHT MAYNE...YOUR STRUCTURE WAS AIGHT...WYOU FLOW WAS GOOD HERE AND THERE, BUT WAS CHOPPY FROM TIME 2 TIME...YOU NEED TO UP YOUR VOCAB AND WORDPLAY...GET MORE CREATIVE WITH YOUR SHIT....NAH MEAN...NO HATE...IT JUST WASNT THAT GOOD...




EXPONENT

This Geek Bites Off Everi Thang Including Zeke..
He Tries His Best In Rappin But Iss Truly Weak..
(KINDA WEAK OPENER...BUT WORDPLAY AIGHT...FLOW GOOD...7/10)

No Chance Of Beatin Me Like Glen Rice Being Tha Star Of Tha Rockets..
All These Biblicle Names And He's Still Not A Phrophet?
(NICE BAR...GOOD DISS...CREATIVE...WORDPLAY AIGHT...FLOW IS STR8...8/10)

Im Confused Why Is This Church Boy Acting Bad...
This Pussies Identity Gets Changed More Than Maxi Pads..
(LMAO...STR8 PUNCH...9/10)

4rm Isaiah Ta Zeus And Now Galieth..
A Bitch Wantin War?Iss Like A Female Riot..
(DECENT BAR...KINDA CONFUSIN..NOT ALL WILL GET IT...6/10)

This Iss Like Vanilla Ice Beatin Cass In A Battle..
In Prison, His Gluteuos Maximus Wass Auctioned Off Like A Raffle..
(LMAO...NICE...CREATIVE...AND GOOD DISS...9/10)

I Was Close Ta Merkin Zeke Until Galieth Showed Up..
Like A Vaccum He Picks Up,Suck Then He Folds Up..
(DECENT...FLOW STR8...PLAYED OUT IN FIRST LINE...8/10)

I'll Make His Rappin Carrier Fade Like A Bowl Cut..
Ya Personals Horrible And Ya Punches Suck..
(KINDA PLAYED OUT...NO DIRECT DISS...JUST CHATTER...6/10)

U A Earl Boykins Me Shaq So Im Not Punkin Up..
This Kid Is More Of A Nut Than Eminem..
(UMMM...DOESNT FLOW 2 GETHER...DECENT PUCH THO...7.5/10)

His Onli Intercourse Came 4rm Bisexual Gentleman..
If Iverson Wass His Dad He Wouldnt Be Tha Answer..
(LOL...DECENT...NICE PERSONAL...BUT FLOW IS OFF...7.5/10)

Hes More Pussy Than A Group Of Female Exotic Dancers..
His Chances Of Surving Iss Slim Like A Victim 4rm Cancer..
(DECENT CLOSER...COULD CAME HARDER WIT IT...8/10)


AIGHT MAYNE...YOUR VERSE WAS AIGHT...NOT YOUR BEST BUT DEFFINATLY ENOUGH TO WIN THIS BATTLE...YOUR STRUCTURE WAS A LIL OFF HERE AND THERE, AND YOUR FLOW WAS GOOD UNTIL TOWARDS THE END...BUT EVEN WITH THE MISTAKES U MADE, YOUR TOPICS, AND WORDPLAY WERE JUST WAY BETTER...U WERE WAY MORE CREATIVE THAN EYE WAS...ONE SUGGESTION FROM ME WOULD BE TO MAKE SOME OF THE LINES MORE EXPLAINED...BECAUSE NOT EVERYONE WILL UNDERSTAND SOME OF THAT SHIT...SO LET THEM KNOW...


VOTE EXPONENT...IT WAS JUST BETTER...~1~

Voted For: ..Galieth..

i vote for u cuz u had way better flow and way better punches den the other guy E u really need to get better like elavate a lil bit and all dat like learn better punches and shit but for the main factor Eye u got this by punches and flow and rhyme!!!

Voted For: ..Galieth..

Eyedentity had this. you both have a simliar style but Zeke flows way better and punches way harder with it. This was a close battle. Exponent woulda got this if he flowed a little better and structure gfoes to both of ya.
My favorite line form eye is
You'll Never Beat Me I'm Like A Mathematical Equation
Exponent Aint It When Your Class Is Made From Retardation
iight exponent you had hard punches that were aiming right but like I said flow better. You had a couple of good lines. I liked
4rm Isaiah Ta Zeus And Now Galieth..
A Bitch Wantin War?Iss Like A Female Riot..
Nice one^^^
Vote=EyeDentity
Return da favor fam.