Black Queen vs Devistation
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate votes

Accept ASAP.

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-21-04 at 10:10 PM

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Black Queen has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-20-04 10:12 PM.

Devistation has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-20-04 10:15 PM.

I will show this here wench, the real drama in my wicked voice,
You have alot of "Balls" Battlin me, which was a wicked choice,
She couldn't condense style if she had the right to go out Tonight,
Steppin to me is a sure fight, this battle will be won in fright.
You couldn't be seen if you were pure one hundred percent light.
People do not recognize a girl with tallent, This is no challenge,
I will rip your soul out and kill you over again, with my tallon.
Your gihts have run out its time to surneder, to bury the hatchet,
If you grew any real tranquility skills, I'd be sure to snatch it.
The ending of this is the fairytale that you once resited in bed,
The wolf was murded, to you I will do, What happened to Lil' red.

here I go again ...........
Da Queen steps in

You aint bringin INTENSIVE CRIMEz...you must have a senseless mind....
When I vent this rhyme you'll be shouting writers "block" from my "Offensive Lines"....
I'm tha demented Kind, i'll give you a jamaican clappin - I makes it happen....
But you're like artificial Gift Paper because you are the "fakest rapping"...
I'll Break his back in...wit flagrent action more hype than an epileptic Bruce Lee...
Fukk using a written!!...I'll break a branch off and beat you wit a "loose leaf"!!!....
Reduce Speech..don't talk-shit i'll bang ya teeth in for breathin you heathen...
Plus you're frequently-feinding anytime someone on this site is speakin of semen...
You're sleepin and dreamin...but faggots like u wake up wit a Pain in the Ass...
School Me?...you were wit a group of "Amputees" and still the only "lame" in the class...lol
None of this "head's lines" connect as if he was a "Parkinsons Barber"....
But my Personals send "EDUCATED SHOTS" like a Marksman-from-Harvard...
I'm remarkable partna, how can you be claimin you a god of rap when you constantly Praise me...??
That nonsense is shady...thoughts of his father molesting haunting him daily...
You're taunting me gayly...wit broken wrists...i'll slap u wit an open Fist....
then strangle you wit a rope and twist...just because you're RN's token bitch.

uppin fo some votes...................................

Voted For: Black Queen

black queen one hands down
her punches where harder and her rhyme scheme was tighter
favoite lines
You aint bringin INTENSIVE CRIMEz...you must have a senseless mind....
When I vent this rhyme you'll be shouting writers "block" from my "Offensive Lines"....
I'm tha demented Kind, i'll give you a jamaican clappin - I makes it happen....
But you're like artificial Gift Paper because you are the "fakest rapping"...
I'll Break his back in...wit flagrent action more hype than an epileptic Bruce Lee...
Fukk using a written!!...I'll break a branch off and beat you wit a "loose leaf"!!!....
Reduce Speech..don't talk-shit i'll bang ya teeth in for breathin you heathen...
Plus you're frequently-feinding anytime someone on this site is speakin of semen...

^^^ You ned to Explain mroe dude....

Uppin........

he explained dat very well dont get mad cause i got his vote thx fo da vote

Voted For: Black Queen

lol This battle was hot .....made me laugh alot but heres how i break it down

punchez--BQ
personals--D
multi--BQ
Metas--BQ
Vocab--D
Structure--BQ

Thats Jus how i feel ...........others may feel different...............
..............Do Me A favor and vote in my battle against hangman Bcuz its alomst over if yall to jus go n there and vote bcuz i got this battle all the way..........but if you feel i lost then thats you .......but jus go n vote honestly
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Voted For: Black Queen

devist...
your verse was cool and mildly entertaining. no hate, but i felt you could have come at her way harder then you did. no sweat. try to work on your personals and punches. throw some multies in there too to spike your work up....i think it helps. your structure was on point.....nice. keep up the good work pimp.

queen...
you outclassed the kid in this battle. your multies, punches, and personals were on point. plus you threw in some nice vocab to spice up your piece some. the only thing that you need to work on is your structure...other then that, your good. nice job. hold it down.

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s.v.............c.s.

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This was feedback posted for Black Queen
 

Checking them pollz...............................

Voted For: Black Queen

its a wrap...........

punches:blackqueen
personals:blackqueen
multis:blackqueen
structure:devistation
originality:blackqueen
shit ima b real wit u..............
everything but structure:blackqueen

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Voted For: Black Queen

wow!!! once again, black queen has done it...she always seems to amaze me...
devistation-near tha beginning, yo flow was coo. u had some nice lines, and creative rhyming, but then after tha first 2 bars or so, u fell off, and ur verse started to get borin. u gotta learn how to come more consistent in rhymes, and stay hot thru-out ur whole flow. ur structure was coo, but it was odd in a way. on one bar in yo verse, u forgot to complete it, so that took major points away, cause it didnt sound right. punches werent there and personals were wack. reading ur verse, was like readin a nursery rhyme...(no hate, just HONESTY)
black queen-u came wit it again. and even in this verse, you switched ur style and murdered him from every angle...i was tryna focus on just tha multies you brought, but u had hard punches that knock him out, and some hard mettas. personals? i dont know about em personally to devistated,but u tied ur verse together, which gave u nice structure. no stretched or unfinished lines, and thats why i gave u tha win....OH, AND U JUST MURDERED HIM
overall-this was a one-sided battle. devistated, you fell off after ur first 2 bars, and black queen came hard thru-out her entire verse, thats why she got tha win...

PLZ RETURN THA VOTE ON MY BATTLE IN SIG...PLZ
this is tha second battle i voted on for black queen, and i havent seen her in any of my battles...you dont wunna lose one of RV's few honest voters....plz vote..both of yall


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