Eclipse vs Black Queen
 

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Eclipse has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-20-04 11:16 PM.

Black Queen has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-21-04 08:38 AM.

hey yo.. clispe would be "Insane-to-Show" similar to CRAZY ACTORS/
Cuz I'm dropping punchlines you "Can't-Throw-Back" just as Re-Tired Catchers/
You must be DYSLEXIC.."you'll-never-learn", it amazes me why you try to Rival/
You couldn't BLESS ME with a Verse even if you "Bit-From-The -Bible"/
Your Life's on the Shelf, against me you have NO PRESENCE(presents) like "Un-employed" elfs/
Wouldn't be Suprised to see you "Eating your own Flesh" cuz you "FULL-OF-YOURSELF"/
This Battle must be AMBIDEXTROUS......I guess it's Ready to "Switch Hands"/
Roped ya entire Neck and Hung you just so you could be "ABLE-TO-HANG".... man/
You could enscribe ya Verse on ya Fore-Head and still not be able to make "Head-Lines"//
Compare you to Busta Rhyme's aerobix instructor the way you try to "STRETCH-RHYME'S"//
While you have "Cyber Sex" with EXTACY.......my "RAPID TONGUE" is ceasing ya Battle Cries/
My "HI-TEK" lyrics draw "PRAIZ" "IN-SITE'S", now you Realize facing me wasn't wise/

Black queen is a bitch and her ego has shown
and a poor ass record that I could easily own
she is premature to have challenged the master
her rhymes are bad and her skills are a disaster
ya clothes are tacky,and you have too much makeup
and a dumbass record that my rhymes could easily rakeup
bitch your record is the same as mine but yours sound like a broken windchime.
your record is 0-0 and you cannot rap ya little fucker
go back to getting payed for being a dumbass dick sucker

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Voted For: Black Queen

Black Queen


hey yo.. clispe would be "Insane-to-Show" similar to CRAZY ACTORS/
Cuz I'm dropping punchlines you "Can't-Throw-Back" just as Re-Tired Catchers/
^decent opener...

You must be DYSLEXIC.."you'll-never-learn", it amazes me why you try to Rival/
You couldn't BLESS ME with a Verse even if you "Bit-From-The -Bible"/
^goodie goodie

Your Life's on the Shelf, against me you have NO PRESENCE(presents) like "Un-employed" elfs/
Wouldn't be Suprised to see you "Eating your own Flesh" cuz you "FULL-OF-YOURSELF"/
^hehe...2nd line was dope

This Battle must be AMBIDEXTROUS......I guess it's Ready to "Switch Hands"/
Roped ya entire Neck and Hung you just so you could be "ABLE-TO-HANG".... man/
^okay bar

You could enscribe ya Verse on ya Fore-Head and still not be able to make "Head-Lines"//
Compare you to Busta Rhyme's aerobix instructor the way you try to "STRETCH-RHYME'S"//
^hehehe...nice...

While you have "Cyber Sex" with EXTACY.......my "RAPID TONGUE" is ceasing ya Battle Cries/
My "HI-TEK" lyrics draw "PRAIZ" "IN-SITE'S", now you Realize facing me wasn't wise/
^bit of self-glorification but aight closer

Was def. feeling your verse, had nice wordplay in there n formed some good punches. Your vocab n flow was straight to the point...like ya style...keep on going girl...


Eclipse

Black queen is a bitch and her ego has shown
and a poor ass record that I could easily own
^weak opener

she is premature to have challenged the master
her rhymes are bad and her skills are a disaster
^wtf? Nah man...this is way too basic

ya clothes are tacky,and you have too much makeup
and a dumbass record that my rhymes could easily rakeup
^again the record thing... :confused:

bitch your record is the same as mine but yours sound like a broken windchime.
^uhm, decent i guess

your record is 0-0 and you cannot rap ya little fucker
go back to getting payed for being a dumbass dick sucker
^AGAIN??? Why u keep on using the record thing, 3 times in 9 lines???

Didn't like your verse at all, it was way too basic and mad played. Get some creativity in there, original punches, better personals and stop using the same thing 3 times in one verse!!! Get ya game up...no hate though...

*Please return the favor (link is in my sig)* Thanks...

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This was feedback posted for Black Queen
 

your stlye and strucher sux "this"/.// just makes me get head aches other than that it takes away form your punches to

damn....well im a noobie so what did u expect????i have to see how to rhyme lol

lol it didnt count my vote kinda pissed here i voted for elise i musta hit the wrong button if it comes down to it just pm strobe tell him i left feedback and to count my vote also that other vote is a striat d/r vote disqualify that

it not a structure damn why dont ppl get dat its wats in da verse dat matta no matta how da structure looks its still gon say da same fuckin thang

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Voted For: Black Queen

Vote: Black Queen

Eclipse:--work on creativity , less dick suckin crap, ok structure, come wit mo elvated punches and wordplay man..elevate..overall - 5/10

B.Queen

your structure was shit girl..work on that...and get rid of the lines at the end of each bar..makes u look amateur



hey yo.. clispe would be "Insane-to-Show" similar to CRAZY ACTORS/
Cuz I'm dropping punchlines you "Can't-Throw-Back" just as Re-Tired Catchers/
ok opener, gd creativity - 7.5/10
You must be DYSLEXIC.."you'll-never-learn", it amazes me why you try to Rival/
You couldn't BLESS ME with a Verse even if you "Bit-From-The -Bible"/
this is played as fuck..but ok filler...-6/10
Your Life's on the Shelf, against me you have NO PRESENCE(presents) like "Un-employed" elfs/
Wouldn't be Suprised to see you "Eating your own Flesh" cuz you "FULL-OF-YOURSELF"/
nice diss & a lilbit of wordplay - gd punch - 7.5/10
This Battle must be AMBIDEXTROUS......I guess it's Ready to "Switch Hands"/
Roped ya entire Neck and Hung you just so you could be "ABLE-TO-HANG".... man/
likin tha ambidextrous line that shit was nice girl and original and finished wid a punch -9/10
You could enscribe ya Verse on ya Fore-Head and still not be able to make "Head-Lines"//
Compare you to Busta Rhyme's aerobix instructor the way you try to "STRETCH-RHYME'S"//
nice humour in dis bar and an ok punch aswell..-8/10
While you have "Cyber Sex" with EXTACY.......my "RAPID TONGUE" is ceasing ya Battle Cries/
My "HI-TEK" lyrics draw "PRAIZ" "IN-SITE'S", now you Realize facing me wasn't wise/
:nono: shouldnt hav finished wit self glorification but it was an ok closer......-7/10

Return the favour on my battle wit Wack Methods/J.Rabbit - Links in sig....:thumbup:

Voted For: Black Queen

she killed you...ROYALLY hahahaha!

Since i always start with tha weakest, HERES GOES ecplispe, yo rhyming needs help. you structure was good, but alotta yo lines seemd unfinished, or like they needed more syllables...even if these verse were in audio, she wouldve merked u...yo flows was aight, but ur rhyming was simple...not too many punches in there that caught my eye either, so u should work on that...and ur all around flow...
Black Queenyo verse murdered him from all angles...ur punches merked him...had me droppin my jaw, u got madd skills-werd..yo first bar took him in my opinion. and ur structure was soo perfect...just at tha beginning, one of ur bars was stretched, so u should work on that, but other than that, u took him with punches...and mettas,, nuff said
overallthis was completely one-sided...he didnt come remotely close to taking this...she killed him from tha start...

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This was feedback posted for Black Queen
 

black queen got this hands down with ill punches and Bitch fix your struture j/p with ya. Flow was a lil chopped up but she got dis with punches

peace

^^^lol im workin on da structure lol uppin.........

Voted For: Black Queen

Black queen is a bitch and her ego has shown
and a poor ass record that I could easily own
flow no hit

she is premature to have challenged the master
her rhymes are bad and her skills are a disaster
no punch just a diss basic flow

ya clothes are tacky,and you have too much makeup
and a dumbass record that my rhymes could easily rakeup
easy to follow flow no real punch just a simple diss

bitch your record is the same as mine but yours sound like a broken windchime.
your record is 0-0 and you cannot rap ya little fucker
go back to getting payed for being a dumbass dick sucker
3 lines for 1 bar aint even and it aint eve flow good why the extra line?? ending was weak ya flow was ya strong point but u need more then a flow to get a win no hard hit just simple diss 5.0/10
next

hey yo.. clispe would be "Insane-to-Show" similar to CRAZY ACTORS/
Cuz I'm dropping punchlines you "Can't-Throw-Back" just as Re-Tired Catchers/
there go a decent punch flow good

You must be DYSLEXIC.."you'll-never-learn", it amazes me why you try to Rival/
You couldn't BLESS ME with a Verse even if you "Bit-From-The -Bible"/
again a decent punch that connected and flow good

Your Life's on the Shelf, against me you have NO PRESENCE(presents) like "Un-employed" elfs/
Wouldn't be Suprised to see you "Eating your own Flesh" cuz you "FULL-OF-YOURSELF"/
oo shit that preety crwal and i like it good shit

This Battle must be AMBIDEXTROUS......I guess it's Ready to "Switch Hands"/
Roped ya entire Neck and Hung you just so you could be "ABLE-TO-HANG".... man/
was that a diss to me???

You could enscribe ya Verse on ya Fore-Head and still not be able to make "Head-Lines"//
Compare you to Busta Rhyme's aerobix instructor the way you try to "STRETCH-RHYME'S"//
good one here im really diggin ya style and u remind me of somebody style who aint currently here ummm i wounder??

While you have "Cyber Sex" with EXTACY.......my "RAPID TONGUE" is ceasing ya Battle Cries/
My "HI-TEK" lyrics draw "PRAIZ" "IN-SITE'S", now you Realize facing me wasn't wise/
decent ending not the hardest hit u had in this battle but a good ending

danm boy she killed u hands down with ease and each punch she had can easyly merk u'r whole verse no hate its just take mores then a flow to win battles when u have punches like black-queen did WOW u def gonna win a couple of battles easy like she did now 8.5/10

thx hangman and naw dat wasnt a diss to you........

Voted For: Black Queen

werrd black queen your verse was alot better than ecplip's better vocabulary... nice multies the structure was good and some of your punches were good... in my opinion you should battle some one with more skill then that way its more of a challenge to you... keep it up. pz. no hate