Jim Crow vs Jax
 

Battle Rules:

8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-21-04 at 12:32 AM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

Jax has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-21-04 12:03 AM.

Jim Crow has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-21-04 12:31 AM.

fuk ya click..8 lines i spit at u jus cus u a bitch..
i would tell u that u suck at rap..but ur a snitch..
u tryin to act hard?..youll get broke like Shaq do rims..
i stay runnin over u..its like im playin on Jim(gym)..
ill blow away ya dome..n ya hoes wont leave me alone..
cus Jim's girl was a * at 69 before it was on my phone..
u fuckin with Jax..now u know u'll fall..
cus last time u posted somethin ill..u posted me on ya wall..

My *Hands* Brought You In This World When I Blast-With-Hits , After All Who *Jax*-A-Dick!!!
There’s Hardly-A-Issue, I Partly-Slit-You And *Wiped* My Ass With Your *Body-Tissue*!!!
Bruise-Quickly, You About To Hear *Bullets Sing* And I Talking About *Shooting-Whitney*!!
Your Front Is-Hard, These Lyrics *Tighter-Wrapped* Than Fat Bitches In Leotards!!!
Rip-Bars And You *Half Stupid* For Battling Me Like Decapitated Retards!!!
Murking-The-Topic I Compare Flows To Dicks So Jax *Verse-The-Softest*!!
Words-Hurting-With-Hotness, Only Time You *Near Ill* When He Across From The *Nurses-Office*!!!!
Load-The-Scope For Focused-Aim, Only Time Your *Text Is Hot* Is Its When Held Over *Open-Flame*!!

Voted For: Jim Crow

Aight battle

Jim had a better flow and vocab...Your structure was sloppy from my view...Your punches where pretty good nuttin amazing.....Keep elavating

Jax good flow..punches weak and sum out played....bad vocab...Structure was better than his but you still lost this one...Keep elavating...Both of yall

v/Jimmy Bird

yo jim crow do you have AIM?

Voted For: Jax

this was a decent battle i guess...i think Jax came harder than Jim...Jim most of your shit is played. Nowadays you gotta come fresh and creative becus no one dont wanna see the same thing jus flipped another way...Jax came pretty hard i think...i really liked that line about playin on Jim...lol...good battle but vote goes to

Vote-Jax

This was feedback posted for Jim Crow
 

Good shit, checkin' the polls on this 'cuz I'm too tired to vote lol.
Jim Crow > Jax...

Voted For: Jax

jax.........no joke man........holla at me man...seriously

This Is Complete Bullshit.To The Mothafuckin' fullest Extent.

This was feedback posted for Jim Crow
 

ehhhh.......... u won i guess....... but i could see how he could get a vote wit some of those punches.... not the best battle

Voted For: Jim Crow

jim crow....your structure is fucked....and it was hard to read....please refrain from using the *'s......ok but other than that it was a decent verse....punches hit pretty harder...you used some decent multis....vocab was ok......but your structure was horrible......wordplay was ok...nothing great...

jax.........structure was a lot better than jims....but thats really all i can say.....you had a lil more humor in your verse too.....it was not very complex and you didnt use any multis....no vocabulary....some of your lines had potential to be made into good bars....but you just didnt do it....if you came a lil more complex with the same concepts you have....you would have won...

i voted for jim because his verse was more complex.....his punches hit harder....and he used better multis

jim....go to battle complaints and get some of the unexplained votes removed lol.....you deserve a ko on this one man........

This was feedback posted for Jim Crow
 

checkin polls.....................................

Voted For: Jax

fuk ya click..8 lines i spit at u jus cus u a bitch..
i would tell u that u suck at rap..but ur a snitch..

weak opener and i knew you were gonna rhyme bitch with snitch before i even read the 2nd line, thats how played that rhyme is.

u tryin to act hard?..youll get broke like Shaq do rims..
i stay runnin over u..its like im playin on Jim(gym)..

first line was weak but not as wack as the 2nd line, since the Gym is the entire building, you mean a court or floor...

ill blow away ya dome..n ya hoes wont leave me alone..
cus Jim's girl was a * at 69 before it was on my phone..

the first was just a lead up but the 2nd line was the best line out of the whole verse

u fuckin with Jax..now u know u'll fall..
cus last time u posted somethin ill..u posted me on ya wall..

again first line is just a lead up, but the last line was decent

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My *Hands* Brought You In This World When I Blast-With-Hits , After All Who *Jax*-A-Dick!!!
There’s Hardly-A-Issue, I Partly-Slit-You And *Wiped* My Ass With Your *Body-Tissue*!!!

this is a better opener, but it's not that great but i see what you were tryin' to do with the wordplay

Bruise-Quickly, You About To Hear *Bullets Sing* And I Talking About *Shooting-Whitney*!!
Your Front Is-Hard, These Lyrics *Tighter-Wrapped* Than Fat Bitches In Leotards!!!

i don't get the first line i get the sin-whitney part, but what the hell does that have to do with anything? the 2nd line is ok, but that Rap-Wrap wordplay deal is played so hard

Rip-Bars And You *Half Stupid* For Battling Me Like Decapitated Retards!!!
Murking-The-Topic I Compare Flows To Dicks So Jax *Verse-The-Softest*!!

didn't like the first line, since someone's head isn't half their body but the 2nd line is ok

Words-Hurting-With-Hotness, Only Time You *Near Ill* When He Across From The *Nurses-Office*!!!!
Load-The-Scope For Focused-Aim, Only Time Your *Text Is Hot* Is Its When Held Over *Open-Flame*!!

first line is ight, but the Ill/Doctors office deal is played too, but it's still ok, the 2nd line is ok too, but also a bit played

Over all
Punches-Jim had more, most were played but he still dropped more

Structure-Jax had even bars which made it much easier to read

metaphors-jim

wordplay-jim had the most wordplay even though most of it was played

but overall-vote Jim Crow

i put it under the Jax one but i voted for Jim Crow...i didn't know it'd do that if i posted it in the first box to post in so yeah...my real vote is for Jim Crow

Voted For: Jim Crow

Aii This Is How The King Breaks it Down

Personals...Jim
Punchez...Jim
Multi'ss..Jax
Metas...Jim
Vocab..Jim
Structure...Jax

So there You Have it folks i hope i helped in a good way ...........now RTF in my Battle against Hang-man Please
Thank you you are so kind

This was feedback posted for Jax
 

easy win......... checkin polls....... crow shd win