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Cuban~Storm vs final
Battle Rules:
Topic: Life In The Ghetto 10-30 lines No Crew Votes No D/R Votes No Hate Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 200 Check in by: 12-21-04 at 05:35 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. Win by forfeit |
final has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-21-04 05:05 PM.
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Cuban~Storm has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-21-04 05:07 PM.
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Life In The Ghetto
I once use to live in a ghetto place where you would have to kill to survive..
..I was like God in a special way had to play with others peoples lives Now that I know how I use to live was a way of hell and torture to me and you.. ..Thugs don’t shed tears, blood is offered as pain and suffer to those who knew Sipping on colt 45, getting high, notice that in the ghetto everyone dies sometimes.. ..Day by day, crime after crime, dime after dime, every day getting high, it aint no lie But that’s how it is in the place I call ghetto...it’s not my fault I just live in it.. ..Blood colliding wit Crips , taking one side is hard but easy for a lethal lunatic Life In The Ghetto: The Story
This is the real story, that I once lived and don’t have to live mo’ more.. ..I use to see kids selling weed in the streets, whores in the sheets, and no open doors Use to go my the name, that you hear and fear, for yes I didn’t think I would get this near.. ..Cuz I use to wear the same old gear, maybe 1,000 times each fucking year Living in a one room apart, can’t even fit two twin beds in it, it‘s like the God damn space is limited.. ..There’s no way in hell you can live in it, still time pass me by and you see me spitting this Every time I walk out the building, ya feeling, something you have to deal wit.. ..Cuz for real bitch, remember that there’s no hope here, ghetto real!! lunatic...bitch!! Cuz the ghetto is much like quicksand the more you struggle the faster you go down.. ..Cuz in the ghetto you’re a laughing stalk just cuz ya the only one reaching for ya dream of holding the crown Most says no, well I have said yes, thats why you don’t see me in the ghetto no’ more holding my chest.. ..Cuz of those who died to survive are now in rest, its a surprise that this is one of God’s own unique test |
nothin but tough times,perplexed visions a high imagination
but thoughts of death lingers...with unsolvable situations from the start were not blessed, and poverty is excessive food almost as nasty as incest, cops are more then agressive try to do whats right, cops disrespect us with more then force and we got no roofs..soaked from the aftermath of a storm some of the youth involved going toward a life of crime... taking the wrong roads, so getting killed is in due time mothers working 2 jobs to support her childrens well being her children pray to get out but have started disbelieving in god...they feel hes invisible, hes a fable just a myth developed to keep hope inspired, how did life come to this? sizzling street on hot days no way to keep cool and furnished making us work for welfare...government does this on purpose and cold days i cant explain far from a rich persons life frost bite causes the victims hands to be siezed and sliced icicles form on eyebrows and the arctic breeze clutters sound unable to move and saliva drools like novacaine in your mouth no way to live its unaceptable todays times are senseless and an untimely death awaits everyone, sooner then expected and now its time to revolt and show no mercy to those men... that enslaved our time and lives its the beginning of the end time for a new way of thinkin where no race cards are pulled out when men and women all races can respect others without a froun where poverty is or beverly hills black,white, purple or yellow applaud those less fortunate,with a life of living in the ghetto |
good verse and good luck
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Voted For: final
vote final on this one easily , final ripped Cuban~Storm to pieces.. Final you had lots of emotions in your drop , you had lots better structure then he did , your feeling was really showing in your drop , not like lethal lunatic he put some self confident stuff in his verse complimenting him self , and i think that really though his verse off. overall final your verse was hot , you had lots of emotions in your drop , nice feelings , and you had some nice structure. 8/10 cuban your verse was decent seen you done better but you just lost this battle plain simple , you had little emotions and feeling going into your verse , you had okay stucture but final had alot better , overall nothing more i can say nice topical to both but final one with one in my opinion vote- Final |
This was feedback posted for Cuban~Storm
checkin polls.............good verse both of you........good luck fam :thumbup:
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Voted For: final
Yeah... Final got this... I didnt feel any emotion in your verse Storm... Final had lots of emotion, and lots of sick wordplay... try to do whats right, cops disrespect us with more then force and we got no roofs..soaked from the aftermath of a storm Good line... Final gets this for emotion and wordplay... |
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This was feedback posted for final
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