~Logic~ vs x-on
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-24-04 at 08:07 PM

Must drop verse in 4500 minutes after check in.

x-on has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-21-04 08:07 PM.

~Logic~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-21-04 08:07 PM.

aYo
the angels in this world freez over /
gambaling souls amongst the flames of veterin soldiers/
I'll show case demonds dna to prove there existance/
or show case senario's take this one for intence/
funny how man's on the moon yet no cure for cancer/
shit this world with all it's people we need some answers/
but then again 6 billion people it's easy to feel lost/
or think your soul was given no purpose are cost/
then all the mother fuckers like politians/
they only crashing our existence/

" na na , get um hands up "
" na na , get um hands up "

born in the poor now raised in the rish
born with a father now dieing father liss
but regarless, let the whol world come test me
cause from all this none of you empress me/
I stand a soldier with a vest/
a stand a soldier with a worm heart leaning on a cold chest/
Murda plot i'm a put you all to rest/
with my gun to this game screaming " I'm the best"/


ayo that's a wrap... can't think right now to much stress but it is what it is.. holla.

Yo i'm done dog.. hurry i'm getting out of here. I wanna see what ou have son.

I got bad reactions 2 Jacksons especaically rainbows that *PUSH*//
Christmas anit merry ya'll did'nt vote 4 Kerry but yet ya'll beat around da *BUSH*//
Hey I know Im short tempered And bodies wit lead I fill
Beans I hate 2 spill//
Still gotta Tarentino flow but wanna Kill Ill. Bill//
Don't lemme forget lil C.A.L.I in tis mess i almost missed him//
He'll neva be ACCEPTED if he wuz boyz wit SYSTEM//
Fuck our president he'll neva rule wit a iron fist//
Shit 1 lost later X and you migt make tha list//


juss a little somthing
I hope I don't have to explain my punches \
~Peace~

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good verse

this mah first topical'
so i don't know if i'll win

Let's get some votes uppin.. Ps.. anybody who wants my songs come check me out at al_deg@hotmail.com I'll hook you up.

Voted For: ~Logic~

~Logic~ iight verse, your flow was decent and some alright punches.

Best Line - I got bad reactions 2 Jacksons especaically rainbows that *PUSH*//
Christmas anit merry ya'll did'nt vote 4 Kerry but yet ya'll beat around da *BUSH*//

Worst Line - Fuck our president he'll neva rule wit a iron fist//
Shit 1 lost later X and you migt make tha list//

x-on - your verse wasnt bad, but you didnt have any personals or punches.

Best Line - NONE

Worst Line - but regarless, let the whol world come test me
cause from all this none of you empress me/

OVERALL - one sided battle, even though both need work. I got to vote for Logic. His everything was better. X your shit wasnt bad. But you didnt have punches or anything else for that matter.

Vote - ~Logic~

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You stupid mother fuck it's a "topical" don't fucking count that vote are you seirous?

And ps , i'll send you my cd copy you fake ass Mc.. " Gkilla " people who don't know rap should not vote , people who don't read " should not vote ".. get the fuck outa here.

calm down it's 1 vote guy.........................Man u really trippin.................shit

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Na , man it's nothing personal. I just hate people that come here yo and don't read shit. Like it was a topical battle.

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sorry about my vote.. I dont see anywhere that it says its a topical battle. No hate

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Voted For: ~Logic~

Logic took this one
punches were harder...decent structure & a decent flow..and mad vocab..overall logic had a decent drop

x-on..i wasnt really feelin ur drop..punches werent hard hittin..but elevate more tho..

RTF ~Logic~

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Voted For: ~Logic~

aiight this was a weak battle but i think meta4 took this just slitly..because of better punches and the structure and flow was better....logics shit was wack as heyll.....

best line was your closer.s..but blah

upin now

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Voted For: ~Logic~

Meta got this, he dissed you and you didnt even use a punch, you need to up ya game a lot, the shit you spit was more like an open mic, not a battle

please return the vote, link in sig . :thumbup:

Voted For: ~Logic~

Meta4 have pretty good punches.....
I like that meta4 rhyming.......
Metas lines are pretty good.....only 9...........
And x-ons 22..............
x-on tries to get better cauz he get so big verse.....
big are not best at every time.......in sometimes yes....
Meta4 is a good rapper i can see it in him verse.......
MY VOTE:Meta4