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MaSterMind vs ~Logic~
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 12-24-04 at 08:54 PM Must drop verse in 5000 minutes after check in. |
~Logic~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-21-04 08:54 PM.
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MaStErMind has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-21-04 11:44 PM.
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first things first-i've looked at yourbattles-and 3 you didnt post
just gimme a few lines and get this battle closed cause while im elevatin flippin the scripts you'll be in the back kitchen flippin the grits cmon dawg you cant get at me when it takes 4 days to spit ya shit couldnt get at ya girl either- apparently she didnt wanna man wit a limp dick my lines scramblin ya brain and words come out like "up the fuck shut" damn dawg ya money is 0? couldnt even pay for a slut ya health is 100 and happiness 99 percent after this verse just watch its decent why you battlin me? ignorance is the only *logical* explaination the only thingi can give you is a loss for your consolation |
Have u been drinkingMastermind,fuck it shit head what were u *Thinking*//
Is ya mind linking U *Washed Up I should beat u wit a faucet and let it *Sink IN*// I define rhymes in lines that practically fuck up ya time// I told him 2 *check in* He logged off and started drawing Nike signs// But Im not nice nor pleasant, u challenge me u fuckin peasant// U a emcee, tha only tyme u *rap* good is when it comes 2 Xmas presants// In closing I would'nt be surprised if u juss left tha site fear Did u hear this kid went 2 bitch slapped and said MOM u in here// |
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Voted For: ~Logic~
Logic Aiight Nicely Done, Punches Was Alright Not That Great But It Was There, Personals Could Of Bin Added In Here, Word Play Was Decent, Try Not To Stretch Your Bars Out, And Try Not To Put Th"//" At The End Of Every Line, Add Some Multi's In Here,.....8/10 M.M. Not Much To Say Your Verse Was Decent But Wasn't Hitting Hard Enough, THe Fact That You Tryed Wor Play, Was Horible, Coz You Did Not Think It FUlly Threw, Personals Need To Be Made In Here, And Meta's Would Do You Some Good, Vocabulary Was Kind Of Basi, Structure Needs Wor Logic Return The Favor [URL=http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=167279&referrerid=38895]Me Vs Exponent, I'm Up 4-2[URL] |
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Voted For: ~Logic~
~Logic~: Flow was there most of the time, but in one place, your structure threw it off a little bit. You then picked it back up, which is good. Your punches were somewhat creative, and were all pretty decent. Wordplay was there as well. The thing that stood out in this was your punches. They all hit pretty hard. MaStErMind: Your shit was pretty much played. Way too much self glorification. Your punches didnt really hit hard, and they weren't creative. However, ya shit did flow, which is a plus. Unfortunately, flow is not what wins battles; punches are. So, ~Logic~ gets my vote. Good battle...1 |
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Voted For: ~Logic~
logic got this hands down way harder punches better flow and was way more creative hands down Have u been drinkingMastermind,fuck it shit head what were u *Thinking*// Is ya mind linking U *Washed Up I should beat u wit a faucet and let it *Sink IN*// I define rhymes in lines that practically fuck up ya time// I told him 2 *check in* He logged off and started drawing Nike signs// hahaha thats all it took those 2 bars danm hotness |
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Voted For: ~Logic~
weak battle MM better structure....aight flow and weak punches...vocab was really lackin just like ya multis..but personals where pretty good...overall:that was aight but elavate Logic bad structure...good flow and nalright punches...Vocab was aight and multis where lackin also..personals where OK..overall:pretty good comin from you v/Logic for havin betta punches and vocab |
return da favor with a honest vote against theQuestion...im up 3-0
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Voted For: ~Logic~
Logic: decent drop from you..ur lines were stretched but u need to work on that tho... if you want to use the ( * )'s...get rid of them and bold ur words then..cause it makes ur drop look gay..but anyway u had a decent drop here punches were aight..and the flow to the piece was aight..overall it was aight Mastermind: you had a weak drop...wasnt feelin ur punches..ur flow was on point tho..the structure was aight..and the vocab was pretty decent but overall elevate more on thos punches more often tho aight... RTF Logic http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=168058 ^Leave An Explained Vote Here Pleae |
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