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Parallel vs WICKEDCLOWN
Battle Rules:
UNLIMITED Lines..try and do 10..dont matter tho No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting only vote if you understand wordplay and punchlines no fag newbies voting unless there off an other site and there skilled Minimum posts to vote: 500 Check in by: 12-25-04 at 09:42 AM Must drop verse in 2000 minutes after check in. |
WICKEDCLOWN has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-22-04 02:22 PM.
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Parallel has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-22-04 05:24 PM.
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how many lines are you doiing?
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Wicked likes clownin with the pedophiles on the street
But I just aint playin wit cha, ill still drop ya to ya feet You shook when I stepped up to you with the uppercut Were you excited & trembling in fear to this young fuck Well explain why you think you’re the best, or excuse it Ur 18 & still ur rhymes are weak, elevate or don’t commit A student in collage & always was incapable of criminal justice Still unable to notice you use punches, I suppose they missed I don’t think there is even one purpose for you to be around Theres no use in you trying to beat me, cuz you goin down Im so sick of you, I think you should not even bother me Eather way im still gonna be annoyed when your in surgery |
spit 12 lines...thats what i did...iight...............
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haha! fuck this kid.... look fuck this faggot, must be livin in a PARALLEL universe hearin ya shit reminds me more of a plague or a curse cause all of RV knows you cant spit a real ass verse ya leavin in a herse, be prepared for this to be ya last battle cause soon this kids gonna be shook harder than a babys rattle ya just anotha little boy who cant drop hardcore hooks i hear ya gonna do audio... musta learned from garth brooks readin country music song books and aint gettin no looks from anyone in the fuckin game you claim to love so much cause no ones ever gonna respect you, ya have no touch no tallent and no future, ya might as well up and quit kill ya self faggot, go and get ya wrists slit cause i know you cant deal with the fact you cat rap deep down you know your just anotha prep that shops at the gap so give up, gather ya shit and just move on home dont make me up and split open ya emptey dome ya brainles faggot, why do you even bother to try fuck you bitch, ya been merked, run home and cry |
Voted For: Parallel
Vote: Parallel Opener: Clown Closer: Parallel Vocab: tied Lyrics: Clown Multis: neitha Flow: Parallel Punches: Parallel Personals: neitha Structure: Parallel Wordplay: Parallel Originality: Clown Parallel - 7/10 Clown - 6/10 |
return tha favour -on realistik battle plz -links in sig
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wow, nice unexplained vote! deleted is what this will be
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lol lryics pretty much says he won lmao...w/e delete th evote i dont care
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Voted For: WICKEDCLOWN
This was a hard battle. Both verses came Played.Yeah. Structure goes to Parallel. Punches that weren't all that played go to Wickedclown. Uhm Multis go to Wickedclown. Sorry Parallel but his verse was better. Return an honest vote in my signature. Peace vote=WICKEDCLOWN...... |
yo legend to inforum you no ahte tho...wickedclown did use punches...or wordplay
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shit... people need to learn how to vote... thanks for the vote Legend but it will be removed.... uppin
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Voted For: WICKEDCLOWN
ok battle....not bad not bad Personals-Parralell,you didn't really "diss-him" you kinda just talked shit....its ok...but not what i was lookin for.....any wayz......Wicked you had some decent personals...i mean wit the gap line and a few others... Punches-Ok Parallel you didn't really have punches it was pretty weak coming from "you" but w/e lol....and Wicked clown you had the harder hittin punches wit the Garth Brooks line thats what got this category.... Vocab-Ok both of your vocab was "eehh" you know it was shit i hear all the time when i battle some of the basic emcees at my school...but its all good....and Parallel you need to up like a muh fucka in this department.. Enjoyments-Ok i enjoyed Wickeds more..it was more complex and not as boring and played as yours parallel.....i mean this was not the best battle i've heard but it was "OK" and i'd have to say that Wicked came harder.... Overall-Overall Wicked took this one in my opinion...he had harder hittin personals and punches...his shit was more on topic.....and didn't go all over........ notes:Parallel you need to up on most aspects like Vocab and Multies and Punches....Wicked all i'd need too see from you is some more multies and maybe a lil bit better vocab.... overall it was an ok battle...big ups too both...pzz ~1~ |
Voted For: WICKEDCLOWN
ok ok It was a very good and close battle it actually came down really to like whats between the lines if you no what i mean. Wicked: definally a nice verse with a good flow and nice style. The rhyme scheme was definally on the whole time. however i heard a few played out lines and the rhyme were kind of simple. but i did see so mults in there that worked well. You did say faggot alot so i guess some parts got streched. Now there were some good punches and some bad ones: i mean i ain't feeling the rattle one. The personal were there: even though you kept calling him a faggot. I like your word play. overall i think you could have done better but still raw. 7.5/10 Parallel: you also had a nice flow and a very nice style. You also had a good rhyme scheme the whole time and i think that your rhymes were... well more complex. I saw less mults from you but it still sound pretty good when i did it. but i found alot of your punches were like just grapsing for straws they were kinda wack and one bad punch can fuck up a whole verse so.... as for personals you had some that werre good a creative but overall lacing something. also i don't understand why you put some things in bold. 6/10 |
Voted For: WICKEDCLOWN
eh but came really weak here in my opinion ive seen better but i think wicked got this in all aspects, his flow was better at had a couple punches that were better...parallels punches just didnt hit as hard or at all though...they were too simple but parallel had a higher vocab... good luck to both no hate but i think wicked got this for better flow and punches peace |
^correction in the beginning its "both" came weak here not but
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lmao i love how Parallel aint uppin this...... dont talk shit to me fool cause u got owned
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lol..im uppin this....im playing mba live alot latly...and plus theres no point in upppin a battle when your versign a dick rider...so leave me alone little bitch..i straight owned you....you didnt even use punches or wordplay so shut your mouth
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^wordplay isnt needed and his punches were harder then yours...half of your verse is threats...not punches, read it over
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uppin.,...........................................
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This was feedback posted for WICKEDCLOWN
Wicked Took This One
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uppin this.............................................. ........
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Voted For: WICKEDCLOWN
iight i'ma break this down.... wickedclown - hard ass punchez an mad personalz i wuz feelin this shit didn't have many multiz but still came hard u had okay metaphores vocab wuz pretty decent overall u had a pretty dope verse felt ur flow wuz tight ur barz were almost xactly tha same an ur structure iz good as hell felt this verse more so then i felt parallelz verse para - ur verse wuz pretty good 2 but u had weak punchez an personalz u didn't come wit ur nomal dope ass metaphores so u ain't get it this time but ur verse had nice flow an structure vocab wuz decent also but u gotta step ya game up homie wicked elevated like krazii an u seem 2 be stayin at tha same level but nice verse tho yeahh my vote = wicked clown |
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