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~Lady Fiya~ vs JPoll
Battle Rules:
The Council's JPoll vs. M.A.B.'s Lady Fiya 10 Lines MAX No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No B/s No swayin/im-in/pmin 4 votes :thumbup: 24 hour drop, check in by 35 minutes, good luck, JPoll.. pz.... Minimum posts to vote: 1000 Check in by: 12-22-04 at 05:21 PM Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in. |
~Lady Fiya~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-22-04 05:11 PM.
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JPoll has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-22-04 05:16 PM.
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I retire lady liar who say they fiya,
Cause i'm the mesiah, that makes bitches perspire Blah at your whole writtens and southern style, Cause your not from the south, so the draw is a pile, Still you laugh and make audios like you own, When you have a totally different voice on the phone, total bull thats what you represent, Hence, at the market you always buy the store in polydent shut up i'm tired |
J-walks in battles hyped, riders are bribed not only 2 peep Poll’s
Ur goal to hit charts, make dough.. Only 1 rockin a shelf is Play-toh Ya record deals worse, of course ur two-number signs an underscore Place bets, waste checks u can’t afford.. A win if Da Vinci paid u more Orgy from celebs testin skill, just steal ur results from gangs-star-& shit RV’s Game it’s proven, when ya rhymes just won’t lose the 101 gunits fam sip Nyquil, as inactive feedback I return ya crew it’s reusable napkin ko’s lie n ur past, punches don’t happen like self-afflict wounds on manikins EXPL: JPOLL aka Play-toh uses gunit101 in his rhymes lost to gangsstarshit good luck pz.. |
Voted For: ~Lady Fiya~
Lady Fiya: J-walks in battles hyped, riders are bribed not only 2 peep Poll’s Ur goal to hit charts, make dough.. Only 1 rockin a shelf is Play-toh Decent multis here, but punch wasn't that hard Ya record deals worse, of course ur two-number signs an underscore Place bets, waste checks u can’t afford.. A win if Da Vinci paid u more Decent personal Orgy from celebs testin skill, just steal ur results from gangs-star-& shit RV’s Game it’s proven, when ya rhymes just won’t lose the 101 gunits Weak punch... fam sip Nyquil, as inactive feedback I return ya crew it’s reusable napkin ko’s lie n ur past, punches don’t happen like self-afflict wounds on manikins Decent multis, but punch didn't connect JPoll: I retire lady liar who say they fiya, Cause i'm the mesiah, that makes bitches perspire Ok multis, but self-glory Blah at your whole writtens and southern style, Cause your not from the south, so the draw is a pile, Weak attempt at a personal Still you laugh and make audios like you own, When you have a totally different voice on the phone, Aother weak personal total bull thats what you represent, Hence, at the market you always buy the store in polydent Blah... Winner: Lady Fiya, for harder punches, an overall better verse. But both of you cam rather weak, I've seen better from both of you. But oh well, stay up and keep at it... Hit up a link in my sig, honest explained votes only:thumbup: |
this is like the worst battle i've ever done...haha
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lol....... me too, i feel like... cuz i was rushed, i have to use system restore on my computer in a minute.. i noticed i had seven minutes left and was like, wtf? so i keyed this up.. :thumbup: and happened to forget this explanation..
Ya record deals worse, of course ur two-number signs an underscore = (#_#) two number signs and an underscore.. lol... |
This was feedback posted for JPoll
Checking Polls... Get on AIM fiya.....................
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This was feedback posted for ~Lady Fiya~
neither ya;ll had much of pimpin wordplay beside, those play-toh line, filya line,- both in ya'lls first bars
so, they were both pretty equal, so i gotta give it to filya for the rest of the verse. she had some more personals,(that weren't made up) also some of her metaphors were decent punches. ^^^^ ko’s lie n ur past, punches don’t happen like self-afflict wounds on manikins _____ short battle, ya'll should put harder punches in it, and j-poll u didn't try nothin in your battle. filya actually tried......... ya'll return wit an honest vote. PLEAES. LINK IN MY SIG. %%%%% well i can't vote but return wit some feedback anyway in my battle. one |
word, nice explanation, uppin............................ :thumbup:
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Voted For: ~Lady Fiya~
lady~fiya: J-walks in battles hyped, riders are bribed not only 2 peep Poll’s Ur goal to hit charts, make dough.. Only 1 rockin a shelf is Play-toh ^^dope personal good opener 8/10 Ya record deals worse, of course ur two-number signs an underscore Place bets, waste checks u can’t afford.. A win if Da Vinci paid u more ^^decent bar 5/10 Orgy from celebs testin skill, just steal ur results from gangs-star-& shit RV’s Game it’s proven, when ya rhymes just won’t lose the 101 gunits ^^decent 5/10 fam sip Nyquil, as inactive feedback I return ya crew it’s reusable napkin ko’s lie n ur past, punches don’t happen like self-afflict wounds on manikins ^^good multies decent punch 7/10 overall : 25/40 (63%) JPoll : I retire lady liar who say they fiya, Cause i'm the mesiah, that makes bitches perspire ^^ehh ok 4/10 Blah at your whole writtens and southern style, Cause your not from the south, so the draw is a pile, ^^wack 4/10 Still you laugh and make audios like you own, When you have a totally different voice on the phone, ^^ok 6/10 total bull thats what you represent, Hence, at the market you always buy the store in polydent ^^wack 2/10 overall : 16/40 (40%) vote: lady~fiya i dont even think JPoll tried in this battle that was a weak verse and i was nice with the points in your verse that i gavve you |
uppppppppppin for both for sum votes............... :thumbup:
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This was feedback posted for ~Lady Fiya~
checkin this battle out....................................
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This was feedback posted for JPoll
IF your play-toh... then you really fucking suck...
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This was feedback posted for JPoll
checkin polls..
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goodness people sleep on shit like crazy, vote goodness................!
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Voted For: ~Lady Fiya~
J-walks in battles hyped, riders are bribed not only 2 peep Poll’s Ur goal to hit charts, make dough.. Only 1 rockin a shelf is Play-toh Good Punch Nice Personals,Good Openor Ya record deals worse, of course ur two-number signs an underscore Place bets, waste checks u can’t afford.. A win if Da Vinci paid u more Umm Ok Not That Good,But Tha Last Line Wass Ok Orgy from celebs testin skill, just steal ur results from gangs-star-& shit RV’s Game it’s proven, when ya rhymes just won’t lose the 101 gunits That Aint Make Sence & Shit Doesn't Rhyme With G-units Lol fam sip Nyquil, as inactive feedback I return ya crew it’s reusable napkin ko’s lie n ur past, punches don’t happen like self-afflict wounds on manikins Wow Neitha Did That Rhyme,Punch Wass Ok But It Didn't Rhyme Overall Good Lines Some Didn't Rhyme And Tha Rest Wass Ok,Good Personals And Punches Make Ya Words Rhyme 8/10.................. I retire lady liar who say they fiya, Cause i'm the mesiah, that makes bitches perspire Good Multies,Ok Punch And Name Play Blah at your whole writtens and southern style, Cause your not from the south, so the draw is a pile, Didn't Make Sence Weak Punch And Personal Still you laugh and make audios like you own, When you have a totally different voice on the phone, That Wass Weak,And Tha Punch Wass Tired total bull thats what you represent, Hence, at the market you always buy the store in polydent Ok Punch,2nd Line Wass Tired But You Closed It Out Ok... Overall You Didn't Come Hard Enough Ya Punches Wass Weak Well Some Of Them.You Had A Couple Ok Personals Not Tha Many But You Had Some... Lady Fiya Took This Had Harder Punches And Personals Thass Why She Took Thiss........... /V Lady Fiya Rtf......................... |
werd my verse was the worst i have done i think... i need to quit doin shit at the last minute.. lol
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Voted For: ~Lady Fiya~
Damn.. Jpoll...lmao.. You must of been pretty tired man.. I dont really think this needs much of an explenation and I dont really have much feedback for Jpoll because I think you really half assed this battle man.. Lady fiya, I didnt really get some of your punches.. I dont know if they were too complex for me or maybe you just got a different style.. But what I like in text verses is rhymes that are simple, but use well worded punches that hit at just the right part. I aint really into the whole really complex stuff.. I like battle rhymes that'll make me laugh.. Thats bein whats hot in text latly.. This time round, obviously the votes going to Lady Fiya.. Peace. |
Voted For: ~Lady Fiya~
jpoll srry that was weak, but koo on audio..... fiya ya had the opener n 1 other bar(2nd)that won this for you.. srry j but im voting against fam on this ..it was a good battle |
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