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XCell vs X-Spitty
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 12-25-04 at 09:16 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
X-Spitty has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-22-04 09:17 PM.
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come on man accept this.................................
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xcell has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-23-04 03:26 PM.
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aint no way u gonna win u dont stand a chance
it was over b4 it started call the ambulance/ u dont wanna start a feud i got u crapin in ure pants like mexican food/ ure only way u can beat me is thourgh masturbation i cut u off at ure point like casteration i rip u viscously like laceration/ ya cant erase me im finna make u taste me im a virus ill kill u next time u face me/ |
Illusion bitch thaught this was ''just the begining''*...
I traveled all of your threads,you aint even elevating?... ''Let it go'' Xcell imma merk you aswell *... Wack enought to be a crime and sended to jail... you won twice,and both of them was newby's... while one didnt post shit,yo wack'' and alwasy''* be... S'only getting wurst,You called out Phenom-In-All... Youd lost anyway,S'was only to show that you had balls... But you dont,you lost them twice and regain them by forfeit, Your an eminem fan and still aint showing respect... U acting like your retarded and rime like a cadet... Sorry for the revelation,but the truth must be said!... Fuck me making a fucking conclusion... youll never beat me,like your old alias,its an illusion... *1- he made an open mix called Just The Begining... *2-Let It Go to was an open mic *3-And alwasy be....i dont know if it was really him who made that like that but its suppose to be and always... |
uppin this............................................
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Voted For: X-Spitty
xcell hmmm pretty decent...not the greatest ive seen on rv lol pretty godd stucture and flow but you came pretty damn weak on the wordplay and punchlines in fact you didnt even use punchlines or wordplay in your verse...sry but to be honest you need elevation...no hate pz X-Spitty not bad probably one of the best ive seen from you in a text battle but you need to work more on using punchlines more on a consistant bases you used them but you need to use them more and wordplay i didnt see anything to great there...not bad tho keep trying...pz VOTE...X-Spitty return the favour in one of the battles in my sig...thanks |
iight thanks....uppinnnnnn........................
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This was feedback posted for X-Spitty
checkin pollz....nice jobe crew buddy......
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still uppinnnnnn........................................ ..
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up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up....favor will be return
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Voted For: X-Spitty
aight this shit is...well... ONE SIDED AS FUCK.............break down right here: Xcell- ya shit needs some elevation dawg... no hate but ya strucure is awfull, rhyme scheme is bad, punches and personals were nonexistant..... vocab was childish.... shit was just bad dawg... dont really need more of an explination than that... fix it homie or ya gonna lose some battles... 1/10 Xspitty- ya shit was pretty good, u didnt need much to beat him but ya structure needs a little work, lose the ... after every line it screws up flow... even ya lines out more too... punches were good as were personals so props on that, vocab was good, your elevating well.....good drop 5/10 all in all one sided... no hate Xcell but elevate dawg.... big time..... VOTE-Xspitty....................................... |
Voted For: X-Spitty
Illusion bitch thaught this was ''just the begining''*... I traveled all of your threads,you aint even elevating?... decent ''Let it go'' Xcell imma merk you aswell *... Wack enought to be a crime and sended to jail... decent you won twice,and both of them was newby's... while one didnt post shit,yo wack'' and alwasy''* be... okay… S'only getting wurst,You called out Phenom-In-All... Youd lost anyway,S'was only to show that you had balls... no… But you dont,you lost them twice and regain them by forfeit, Your an eminem fan and still aint showing respect... no… U acting like your retarded and rime like a cadet... Sorry for the revelation,but the truth must be said!... good Fuck me making a fucking conclusion... youll never beat me,like your old alias,its an illusion... average…nuttin much here aint no way u gonna win u dont stand a chance it was over b4 it started call the ambulance/ no u dont wanna start a feud i got u crapin in ure pants like mexican food/ no ure only way u can beat me is thourgh masturbation i cut u off at ure point like casteration i rip u viscously like laceration/ no ya cant erase me im finna make u taste me im a virus ill kill u next time u face me/ no Spitty took this one…punches were harder And structure was decent w/ it… |
Voted For: X-Spitty
I have to go wit x spitty his flow was better, his punches where harder and his closure was killer. Peace! Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
one more please........................................
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merry christmas XCell...good battle too....uppin one more time
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merry x-mas 2 u 2 good battle
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Voted For: X-Spitty
this was a okay battle: X-Pitty: Nice punche's, I even though some of them really didn't rhyme that well, i like it, unlike other people's verse's, they are slmost all the same, You have alot of potetial in you man, just keep writting. Try elevating in your vocab and rhyme's basiclly, everything else is good.. excell: Hey man, your verse had actually some good vocabulary, but your punchlines we're very bad, your saying stuff he has no chance and he'll end up in a ambulance, but didn't say why!! Basiclly try to get personals on him like how he dissed your sig, try to dis him like that.. Also your structure and flow was very off.. elevate on what i sed.. but good job.. Vote: Xspitty |
damn tere was a vote dat didnt count...please vote people
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Voted For: X-Spitty
I ain't neva seen a basi flow like that in my life from X cell... nuttin' was special... x spitty gets my votes for the punches and personals... and that's final.. |
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