dollarzandsense vs J~FOUR
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-26-04 at 02:08 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

dollarzandsense has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-23-04 02:09 AM.

Four must be the number of brain cells in your head,
youre scared as an 5 year old in michael jacksons bed,
im cold cuz im from canada and you should know i mean this,
but dont jock me cuz i dont want your lips froze to my penis,
you aint got no dollars or sense cuz youre a joke,
plus j-four sounds like somethin baseheads smoke,
time to send you on a long ride down a short rope,
and clean your stupid ass off this site like soap

J~FOUR has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-23-04 05:06 PM.

Listen..

Watch As I Put An "L To DS" Like "High Speed Access"{dsl}
And Leave This "Chick Sleepin" Like ~Foul Game On A Mattress~
Nigga Dont Half-Step, You Need To Come Full At-Four
Dude Said He Couldnt "Handle Himself," So I Hit Him With ~The Car Door~
You A Wack Duke, And I Aint Talking Bout ~Mediocre College~
Cause J Hit More "Books To Ya Head" Than ~Researching For Knowledge~
Four's Style Stay "Polished" Like "Shoe Shines In Airports"
Cause Dude Likes His "Men Tall"(Menthol) Like Smokin Wit ~New Ports~
This A Crude Sport, But Like "Suffocated Boxers" Your Getting ~Shown The Ropes~
Cause Im "Percise With My Points" Like ~Putting Holes Through Earlobes~

But The Fact Remains, I Slain Ya Name ANd Chance At Fame
Cause J Knock The "Sense Outta Dollarz" Like ~Making Change~


YeA GoOd LuCk WiTh ThIs DuKe !!!

up For Votes............................................. .................................................. ..

.................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ....................................

This was feedback posted for J~FOUR
 

Four must be the number of brain cells in your head,
youre scared as an 5 year old in michael jacksons bed,
im cold cuz im from canada and you should know i mean this,
but dont jock me cuz i dont want your lips froze to my penis,
you aint got no dollars or sense cuz youre a joke,
plus j-four sounds like somethin baseheads smoke,
time to send you on a long ride down a short rope,
and clean your stupid ass off this site like soap
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE FLOW, BUT ELEVATE ON PUNCHES THE PUNCHES WERE KINDA WACK AND TOO BASIC PLAYED OUT........


Watch As I Put An "L To DS" Like "High Speed Access"{dsl}
And Leave This "Chick Sleepin" Like ~Foul Game On A Mattress~
Nigga Dont Half-Step, You Need To Come Full At-Four
Dude Said He Couldnt "Handle Himself," So I Hit Him With ~The Car Door~
You A Wack Duke, And I Aint Talking Bout ~Mediocre College~
Cause J Hit More "Books To Ya Head" Than ~Researching For Knowledge~
Four's Style Stay "Polished" Like "Shoe Shines In Airports"
Cause Dude Likes His "Men Tall"(Menthol) Like Smokin Wit ~New Ports~
This A Crude Sport, But Like "Suffocated Boxers" Your Getting ~Shown The Ropes~
Cause Im "Percise With My Points" Like ~Putting Holes Through Earlobes~

But The Fact Remains, I Slain Ya Name ANd Chance At Fame
Cause J Knock The "Sense Outta Dollarz" Like ~Making Change~
^^^^^^^^^^ NICE SHIT FAM GOOD WORDPLAYS. DOPE PUNCHES, GOOD FLOW DONT STRETCH CHA LINES THAT MUCH EITHER, BUT EITHER WAY YOU DID AN GOOD JOB


HANDS DOWN TO J-FOUR DOPE PUNCHES NUFF SAID

Good Looking My Nigga............................................. .....................................

Rise ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

.................................................. ...........................

fair nuff
 

arite props to j~four good battle no doubt. basically im up for any challenges no matter how serious. get at me.

Voted For: J~FOUR

u took dis fam......some of ya shit i was gettin no im not stupid or nothin but i guess u got ya own kind of style...ya first line was ill but da second fukked it up....dollars umm i aint gon tell u da elevate i mean u saw ya verse u know u didn't win not tryn da be mean or nothin fam

opener-four...first line was dope like i said
structure-a tie
punchlines-four...otha dude aint have nun
wordplay-nun
multies-four he had like 1
personals-four
finisher-four nice personal
enjoyed-four ofcourse.....

return da favor links r in my sig

wtf you dissing my verse i peeped your battles kid you're nothing above my level. wtf does it take to get a motherfucka to battle you on this shit?

Voted For: J~FOUR

J~FOUR: 5/10
Decent Drop From You..Nuttin Much Here Tho Yo Punches Seemed Kinda Forced Here, Lacked A Little Tho, Decent Structure But Overall Decent Drop, Just Elevate More Tho

Dollar: 3/10
Work On Your Punches, Cause Yous Hardly Made Any Sense, Fix Your Structure Too Stretched It A Little & Decent Flow...But Elevate More Too

Uppin For Some More Votes.. Dont Sleep On This.............................................. ......................

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^

VoteS VoteS VoteS............................................. ...........

Vote ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Voted For: J~FOUR

J came way harder with the punches...DS, ya shit was all too simple...Dick punches are played man...Be more creative...Flow was there in both verses, but J's was better...
V/ J~Four

No Doubt Fam... Lets Get Some More Votes Up In This Biatch.................

im laughin at all these cats who act too good to battle me
cuz i can take you on my own, you gotta call the cavalry,
dont sleep on me because im keepin it simple,
or you might catch a fist or 2 in your dimples,
you all heard this one before, you talk it, i live it,
fuck around and get stomped front 2 back like xzibit,
you aint hard, from me all you get is a cold shoulder,
maybe you'll understand my shit when you grow older

hahaha peace

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^vote^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^

Votes^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^

Voted For: J~FOUR

breakdown
open/close..j
multies..none
enjoyed..j
vocab..j
structure..j
wordplay//j
punches...j
overal vote..j four..

Voted For: J~FOUR

Aii This Is How me Feel

$'z and cense

You came very Basic And I I think you need To come Wit Some way betta punchez that will Connect
Your opening Was aii I Mean It wasnt all that but It was Alright
Your punchez and Junk were very weak And It seemed as if you forced your words ,,,,,neva do that

J~Four
I dont Like you LOL Sike im j.k But N e ways You came wit Some decent punchez i think You took This one bcuz you came wit some way Stronger Punchez ......and personals were aii There were no real Mistakes Bcuz You did Aii And thats whY you get My Vote

You dont have to RTF Bcuz i dont have any battles im jus Tryna help RV out by Gettin These battles out the way

Peace