untouchablekilla vs ~Logic~
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 10 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-26-04 at 12:31 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

DQ'ed.. swaying
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=172323

Edit 1/22: Reversed.. battle closed on 1/15 at 10pm while above thread was posted on 1/16

~Logic~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-23-04 12:31 PM.

untouchablekilla has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-23-04 12:32 PM.

*Fuck head*,I'd rather battle*cordless* otha then this stupid bitch//
*More or less* He's like tha Booty *thread* an asshole thas fullov shit//
I spit *XXX to see* if my expilcit fall will make u fall like *Niagra*
He's seeing colors, tha only tyme u spit hard is if dicks fullov *VIagra*//
He be on tha*cock* around tha *Clock* but scrams when he sees me on tha *Block*//
Untouchable plese nigga tha only tyme you Ryde Ruff is when you see D_ on tha *block*//(d meaning dick)
U throwing punches kid and they all being intercepted//
Cuz u like System just a guest on this site that has'nt been Accepted//

damn my fault to many typos


hope i don't have to explain tha punches ~!~

Lyrical God Like Jesus Started Rappin I'll Leave You Spiritually Lifted/
You Could Get Ryhmes For Christmas And Still Wouldnt Be Lyrically Gifted/
Fuck Queer Eye For The Straight Guy get a Blindfold for this Gay bitch/
Cause Skillwise your lyrics are Nothing To See like a girl with Size A Tits/
Now this nikka is a dork forget the guns that he claims to hold/
Cuz the only thing he touchin are nine's..ten's..and eleven year olds/
Only time youd ever be on top of me is if u was standin on da globe/
I can go over the bar limit and u still wouldnt win if u ran ta strobe/


merry xmas bitch! =D

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Voted For: ~Logic~

this wasnt even close logic actully had better pucnhes smother flow and an alla round more enjoyable read word

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maybe ya aint get it see i could of broke this down like this:


Lyrical God Like Jesus Started Rappin I'll Leave You Spiritually Lifted/
You Could Get Ryhmes For Christmas And Still Wouldnt Be Lyrically Gifted/
that 2ed line been played every single year WEAK

Fuck Queer Eye For The Straight Guy get a Blindfold for this Gay bitch/
Cause Skillwise your lyrics are Nothing To See like a girl with Size A Tits/
thats decent

Now this nikka is a dork forget the guns that he claims to hold/
Cuz the only thing he touchin are nine's..ten's..and eleven year olds/
thats aight R.KELLY ha, decent diss

Only time youd ever be on top of me is if u was standin on da globe/
I can go over the bar limit and u still wouldnt win if u ran ta strobe/
i wasnt really feeling this, but its ok i guess should of had a better ending

*Fuck head*,I'd rather battle*cordless* otha then this stupid bitch//
*More or less* He's like tha Booty *thread* an asshole thas fullov shit//
not bad... but i must ask who is cordless? cordless

I spit *XXX to see* if my expilcit fall will make u fall like *Niagra*
He's seeing colors, tha only tyme u spit hard is if dicks fullov *VIagra*//
ok but kinda played and need it a flip

He be on tha*cock* around tha *Clock* but scrams when he sees me on tha *Block*//
Untouchable plese nigga tha only tyme you Ryde Ruff is when you see D_ on tha *block*//(d meaning dick)
ok

U throwing punches kid and they all being intercepted//
Cuz u like System just a guest on this site that has'nt been Accepted//
ha best line in this battle smoth and hit preety good and good ending

^^ thats why i picked logic as the winner so if u may PM strobe back and ask him to COUNT MY VOTE NOW I would be honerd :thumbup:

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Voted For: ~Logic~

ok here is why he gets my vote peeps,
strucutre logic
hits logic
rhyming logic
flow logic
imagry logic
vocab logic
opener-closer logic

search me up and vote on my battles peace.

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Voted For: ~Logic~

both were aight..........
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untouchablekilla:your verse was aight...you had some good punches in here...you had nice personals....your flows was aight....the only thing that three you off bit time was your fucked up strucutre...it killed you...other than that you had a overall okay verse overall:7/10
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~Logic~:i liked your verse also...you had nice punches and good personals....you lacked flow but made it better towards the end....your vocab was good....but like the same thing kill lacked....your strcutre..needs to go boy...it killed your verse also....but overall pretty nice verse...overall:8/10[/b]

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Voted For: ~Logic~

Logic - decent drop..punches werent hard hittin but kinda landed..structure u need improving on..and the flow was kinda lacking there...and u had some decent multi's there..overall elevate more

untouch - decent drop from you..u had 1 played line which wasn't good which dropped you..u had a decent structure but overall elevate more and dont use played lines either

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wtf bitch u dick rideing whore Chaos u fucking idiot look at my fucking structure its not fucked up wtf u talking bout its better than his strobe!!!!!!! here i come u DICK riding pussy!

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checkin polls........................................

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return tha favor logic...............................

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look like some ones on their.....period lol

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Voted For: untouchablekilla

u got dis shit fam..first off logic da viagra n u spit hard line has been abused n its played......

opener-killa
structure-killa ya shit was neat
punchlines-killa
creativity-umm a tie
wordplay-nun
multis-nun
personals-nun
finisher-killa...i like dat shit
enjoyed-killa...he came with some hott shit a few nice punchlines n his shit was a orignal no personals from nun of ya'll...so killa get my vote

links r in da sig..return da favor ya'll..WUN

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