MarvJay1009 vs Lawless (Hs)
 

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Lawless (Hs) has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-23-04 04:17 PM.

MaRVJay1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-23-04 04:33 PM.

dont think ya "songs dope" cuzz u be in da "booth on drugs"
da day u "drop it like its hott" a b da day "snoop gon blood"
shoot 4 snubs..nope ya punk ass wont reach 4 ya glock
u blingin? call it "bed-time" u'll get put da "sleep 4 ya watch"
ya flows a lie...law not a real crip n ima exsposed dis guy
he think he's ova-i,but his open mic 'Nigga buck' got no reply's
skillz dont think are's a like,admit u know marv is nice....
ima call u "wisdom-tooth" 4 now cuzz u think its "smart 2 bite"
4real dogg ya bullshit bar's is just gettin me nauses..
afta i HEAT da SON u'll be in HELL SOON,rv a really be lawless*


*name play his name is lawless(HS) so datz where i got heat son n da he gon b in hell soon concept*

dont think ya "songs dope" cuzz u be in da "booth on drugs"
da day u "drop it like its hott" a b da day "snoop gon blood"
shoot 4 snubs..nope ya punk ass wont reach 4 ya glock
u blingin? call it "bed-time" u'll get put da "sleep 4 ya watch"
ya flows a lie...law not a real crip n ima exsposed dis guy
he think he's ova-i,but his open mic 'Nigga buck' got no reply's
skillz dont think are's a like,admit u know marv is nice....
ima call u "wisdom-tooth" 4 now cuzz u think its "smart 2 bite"
4real dogg ya bullshit bar's is just gettin me nauses..
afta i HEAT SON he gon b in HELL SOON,rv a really be lawless*


*name play his name is lawless(HS) so datz where i got da heat son n da other conecpt from*

ill flows muthafucka ruin ya hype/
got ya motha droppin tears at ya funeral site/

I can't even describe this weak ass flow this one came wit/
you can't be serious OMG he talkin' the dunn language/

this hoe couldn't have a 'goldmind' if he was Timbaland*/
where this nigga been... his whole fuccin style is feminine/

he ain't bussin guns on any day B/
and he definitely couldn't sell 'The Roc' if he was Jay-Z*/

all I see is his weak flow... and yes we got a speaker/
that couldn't 'flow shit' if he had a severe case of diarrea/

* Goldmind is timbalands rap label
* Jay-z sold The Roc to Island Def Jam

nice battle kidd.. we are uppin for votes people..

jea...uppin 4 some fukkin votes

still uppin folks don't sleep on this battle peepz

Voted For: Lawless (Hs)

iight this was kind of hard both keep elevating but here is mine
flow lawless
rhmying tie
opener Law
closure Law
personal Law
punches tie

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uppin 4 more votes n pleez explain ya shit unlike dis dickhead nigga

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

dont think ya "songs dope" cuzz u be in da "booth on drugs"
da day u "drop it like its hott" a b da day "snoop gon blood"
.........dope lines, been played, but secound line decent meta
ya flows a lie...law not a real crip n ima exsposed dis guy
he think he's ova-i,but his open mic 'Nigga buck' got no reply's
........ stating facts aren't punches. play it into a punch by sayin " your punches hittin me up bout as much as your thread "nigga buck"".... since not even your girl hit it up i guess im not the only one not givin a fuck...
.........
lawless.. you lose cuz you only have one decent punch.
all I see is his weak flow... and yes we got a speaker/
that couldn't 'flow shit' if he had a severe case of diarrea/
^^^^but its completely bittin or very closely flipped.
..........
yo return wit a vote on my battle in my sig.. PLEASE EXPLAIN VOTES.

aight fam i got u some more votes pleez

uppin vote muthafukkaz

uppin 4 some votes ppl stop sleepin

Voted For: Lawless (Hs)

Lawless got this i think.....i think he barely did tho......but then it seems he completely merked the other dude.....all i know is the punches were a lot harder and that's all that matters......Marv your shit was hard to understand but it was ok.....but Lawless your shit was kinda funny.....and you had better punches
v/Lawless (Hs)
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

easy win for marv here...

lawless..........
ill flows muthafucka ruin ya hype/
got ya motha droppin tears at ya funeral site/
not a good opener...

I can't even describe this weak ass flow this one came wit/
you can't be serious OMG he talkin' the dunn language/
hit ok....but could have been worded better....1st line wasnt good

this hoe couldn't have a 'goldmind' if he was Timbaland*/
where this nigga been... his whole fuccin style is feminine/
hit decent again....decent attempt at wordplay

he ain't bussin guns on any day B/
and he definitely couldn't sell 'The Roc' if he was Jay-Z*/
no.....not good.....

all I see is his weak flow... and yes we got a speaker/
that couldn't 'flow shit' if he had a severe case of diarrea/
ok wordplay........

well your verses flow was absolutely horrible......you used some good multis....u attempted some wordplay...which was ok.....punches didnt really hit all that hard though....opener was horrible...closer was ok....and structure was fucked...dont space out your bars....its not good....


marvjay............
dont think ya "songs dope" cuzz u be in da "booth on drugs"
da day u "drop it like its hott" a b da day "snoop gon blood"
lol....nice opener...made me laugh

shoot 4 snubs..nope ya punk ass wont reach 4 ya glock
u blingin? call it "bed-time" u'll get put da "sleep 4 ya watch"
gunplay...is played....but 2nd line was nice...

ya flows a lie...law not a real crip n ima exsposed dis guy
he think he's ova-i,but his open mic 'Nigga buck' got no reply's
decent personal............hit good

skillz dont think are's a like,admit u know marv is nice....
ima call u "wisdom-tooth" 4 now cuzz u think its "smart 2 bite"
nice wordplay......hit ok

4real dogg ya bullshit bar's is just gettin me nauses..
afta i HEAT SON he gon b in HELL SOON,rv a really be lawless*
good play off name....decent for a closer....

ok basically marv took this one pretty easy......his punches hit harder.....he actually had a personal.....better wordplay.......both had good multis.....no hate to lawless.....return the favor in one of the battles in my sig with an HONEST and EXPLAINED vote.....thanks...

thanks for the votes we are uppin people... I need some help Marv I can only up once every 3 hours

Voted For: Lawless (Hs)

i aint gonna vote, but this one sided..................................

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dogg... how come my first vote don't count... he did it the right way.... this is makin' me angry... he's the one that followed the rules... he put his reply in the right form...

Uppin 4 Some More Votes

uppin 4 some more fukkin votes

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

pretty good battle for both of you but I think my man Marv was harder...in the end it's all about who's harder, its a dog eat dog world.
rate:
punches-Marv
flow-lawless
vocab-none really
originality- Marv

that pretty much sums it up...return the favour yo!!

ME vs. MC PEEJAY

uppin 4 more votes

uppin damm lazy ass niggaz vote!!!