Kordozar vs Chaos
 

Battle Rules:

8- 20
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
Dont Bring Ya D/r Friends Hommie.....

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-23-04 at 08:50 PM

Must drop verse in 45 minutes after check in.

Kordozar has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-23-04 07:58 PM.

Chaos has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-23-04 08:04 PM.

[Center]He's Weak On Tha Mic,So How Iss His Name Chaos?
M.a.b Are Full Of Pussies Even Tho Most Of Thier Members Are Straight Guys..
He Puts Half Nude Pics In His Sig,Cus Sex Iss What He Desires.
He'll Get Koed And That Will Be "Tha Reason You Retire"..
This Fake Thug,Lives A Life Of Dream House And Matchbox..
Tha Onli Hip Hop He'll Do Iss Playin As Tha 76ers Mascot..
Your Skills Will Get Abused Like Tha Use Of Tha Amendments..
He Claims Ta Kill A Crip But On Rv He Has Perfect Attendance..
"In Tha Streets" Gettin Sold Ta Fienes Iss Tha Onli Way Youll B "Dope"..
Give Up Hope,Cus You'll Never B A Known Vet Despite Ya Posts..
Before He Speaks,He'll Have A Cap Waiting Fa His Head Like Tha Birth Of Jews..
Vice Verce His Occupation So Instead Of Me I'll Be Merkin You.
Like Christopher Reeves In Tha Olympics He Wont "Stand A Chance"..
He's Raps Have No Point Like Mittens With Out Hands..
Your Punches Make No Sence Like Drinking Milk In A Bar..
And Chaos,Is A Raw Pussy Like Triple X Porno Stars..

Yo,Kordozar!!
This Kid Reminds Me Of Zeke-Talking Shit Swearin He Got This.....
This Kid Stood Up To Battle Me-And Got Lost In The PROCESS!!.....
Your Like Underrated Herbs-We Should Build At Wall Of Shame For You Kids.....
But Accept This Kid Isn't A Herb Underrated-Cuz He Always Mentioned!!.....
You Should Be Like Empire-Take A Break And Come Back.....
Cuz Your Wack-And Lack-Certain Material Your Suppose To HAVE!!.....
Your Like All The Other Rejects Here-We Should Make A Play-pens For You Kids.....
Cuz I Guarentee If You Came Back-No One Would Bother To No-tice!!.....(notice)
Stop Thinking You A Vet-You Swear You Dope-"You Stated".....
But I'll Expose You-Like Latinkitten Did To R-Rated!!.....
I'll Break Ya Spine-And Get You Inline.....Quick!!.....
Cuz Your Linez Are More Crooked-Then R-Rated DICK!!!!.....
Don't Swear You Hard-Cuz God Knows Your Not!!.....
Cuz My Verse It Tight-Like Strobe Having RV ON LOCK!!!.....
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All should be explainintory......OWNED!! hoe.....~1~

Voted For: Chaos

Aight Pretty Sick Battle Niggas..

CHAOS:
Ya Verse Was Full Of Humor Dun, Straight Disses That GOt Right To The Point.. You Had Nice Personals And Great Flow..
Just Work On your Structure So We Can Read That Shit Easier.
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This Kid Reminds Me Of Zeke-Talking Shit Swearin He Got This.....
This Kid Stood Up To Battle Me-And Got Lost In The PROCESS!!.....
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Stop Thinking You A Vet-You Swear You Dope-"You Stated".....
But I'll Expose You-Like Latinkitten Did To R-Rated!!.....
I'll Break Ya Spine-And Get You Inline.....Quick!!.....
Cuz Your Linez Are More Crooked-Then R-Rated DICK!!!!.....
^^ OUCH..

KORDOZAR:
Dont Get Me Wrong Duke, Ya Shit Was Structured Had Great Flow, Nice Personals But You Had Some Played Stuff Like The C.R. Line.. I Heard That Millions Of Times.. And Your Punches Were Just Too Simple.. You Got Beat Out By A Harder Hitting Verse.. Which I Think You Could Have Beat With A Personal Punch.. You Did A Good Job, Just Wasnt Good Enough For The Win..
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He Puts Half Nude Pics In His Sig,Cus Sex Iss What He Desires.
He'll Get Koed And That Will Be "Tha Reason You Retire"..

Good Job By Both..
PLEASE RETURN A VOTE IN MY BATTLES, VOTES WILL BE RE RETURNED !!! ;)

Thanks

This was feedback posted for Kordozar
 

Voted For: Chaos

My vote goes to Chao's because his word play is better and his ryhmes just flow better. Also his mulities where better.

This was feedback posted for Chaos
 

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MaKe SuRe YoU ReTuRn ThE FaVoR.. ItS ApPrEcIaTeD..

opps by mistake i press the votes button......he the rest of my explaintion.........My vote goes to Chao's because his word play is better and his ryhmes just flow better. Also his mulities where better.Kordozar your verse aight...but not as good as chaos's....but almost there...so my vote goes to chaos.... for better punches

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Voted For: Kordozar

WOW this was a tight battle. but kor jus came on top. in my eyes he had better punches n a good flow. coulda used more multis n more personals. but it was a pretty tight battle

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Voted For: Chaos

u did iight choas, u had some nice punchlines at the end but shoulda had it all the way through your flow. the reason why i voted for kordazor is becuase he had nice punchlines all the way through his flow. and the last thing is ur stucture was poor compared to his. nice peice tho, keep it up.
ima rate you 6/10

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shit my faut dogg, i acedently pressed da wrong person my vote was to kordazor

Voted For: Kordozar

aight im gonna go get dude he won but not by dat much..peep tho

But I'll Expose You-Like Latinkitten Did To R-Rated!!.....
^^^choas line umm didn't i say at in my open mic diss 2 da site?? fukkin bitin ass nigga u'll b gettin banned soon...but let me vote

opener-kord it was a nice personal
structure-a tie i understood both
punchlines-kord hands down choas u ddin't have nun
wordplay-choas
creativity-kord
personals-kord hands down
finisher-nun both of dem were wack 2 me
enjoyed-kord....n y i voted 4 him besides choas bitin...choas is battlin kordozar rite?? then y da fukk is u talkin bout everybody else lol come on fam n half ya words aint even ryhme BACK n HAVE dont ryhme dat was forced...kord u had a solid verse u started fallin off like at da end but besides dat u killed dis kidd

return da favor links r in my sig..n choas dont be a bitch n give me a hate vote

This was feedback posted for Chaos
 

Just checking the polls here
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^wts i didn't even know you use that line so fuck off herb.....uppin for more votes....

Voted For: Kordozar

hahahaha,
this was a pretty good text battle!!

Chaos: I've seen alot better, no offense but your verse wasn't really that good.

I'll Break Ya Spine-And Get You Inline.....Quick!!.....
Cuz Your Linez Are More Crooked-Then R-Rated DICK!!!!.....

That is the best line in your verse man!!! sorry it is..
You had kinda long line's which i don't like. And some of the words barelly even rhymed man.


Kordozar: Your verse was pretty good, the only part i didn't like was the first bar!! I didn't rhyme at all! LOL.. but anyway's, you had nice and very creative lines!!

This Fake Thug,Lives A Life Of Dream House And Matchbox..
Tha Onli Hip Hop He'll Do Iss Playin As Tha 76ers Mascot..

my favorite one!! ^^ lmao, it made me hella laugh, very nice!! and good metaphor!!

Vote: Kordozar

Voted For: Chaos

Yeah Chaos got this.. His punches were better, and overall his verse hit harder than Kordozar.. IMO.... Thats why he got the vote.. Kordozar ya shit was ok, jus didnt get the win this time brutha..

V/Chaos.

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Voted For: Chaos

chaos... Your verse was good... other then your structure your verse was on point.... you had good punches and they hit better then kordozar's did only thing i didnt like was that r-rated line cuase that kinda played

kordozar... your verse watns that good i wasnt really feeling your punches your structure was good iw ill give you that but the rest of your verse i really wasnt feelin

This was feedback posted for Chaos
 

poll checkin.....nice job both of yall

Voted For: Chaos

A'ight...this was a pretty one-sided battle...Chaos came wit better punches and personals...Kordozar came wit a better flow and strcture, but punches is what battles are all about...and Chaos's flow was not that bad anyway, just has to work on the structure a bit...no hate return the favor...links in my sig.

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Voted For: Chaos

my vote goe to choas for being more oringinal
this was a close battle
I feel like K was holding back i felt u on some'
of yo punches
but hey chaos merked you
~1~

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This was feedback posted for Kordozar
 

Checkin Them Poles....and Hahahhahahhaa Chaos...u Got Fucked....good Job Kardozar

Voted For: Kordozar

chaos ya verse was good 2 but u disses werent directly 2 kordozar ya punches was betta den his up ya vocab some good worplay have direct disses 2 tha opponent have some betta personals n livate 7/10
i pick kordozar cuz of his punches dey was hittin hard he had direct disses,his personals was fire u can work on ya vocab up some of ya disses have harder punches and elivate a lil more but u did good 9/10

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damn Chaos....

u iz getting out-cheated here...