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1,000,000 dollar Christmas eve giveaway!
aight here it goes... this will be up all day til some time tonight.... here is what i want you to do...
Write the best christmas poem / topical that you can and i will give 1 million RV dollars to the person who does the best one keep it between 10-25 lines or so. remember this is for a million so go all out.... :thumbup: |
ahh man you should just gimme the million right now:thumbup: decemebers poet of the month bitch
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meh, rules are rules post up a christmas topical or poem.... this will be up til tonight to get everyone who wants to try
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once im done wit my topical, ill be sure to write this. px
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:sleep: :( a sad kid christmas in the hood written by hang-man * read the whole thing *
marry christmas, i got the best wish list 2 pound of dro from stanta, but how can u give this the hood kidz dont need this yet they ask for it got so much green i can start up my own danm forrest cicer are to little to cut up some bud my hand on a nugget looks like a leave with a bug but my brother got cancer and all he do is smoke moms always steelin some hes perscrib drugs N mix it w/ coke sister out crying at night, cuz her piss hurt from whoerin the corner got her pubic hairs look like its ant infested the way the crabs are on-her got her itchin till her skin peel off and all dad do is watch her bath-in-shower always asking to put some cream, no bottle, so why would was he ask-in-coward i keep getting cought by the law, and all they do is beat me saying HEY-FREEZ u SPIC, like thats a way to greet me but sadly thats the way the streets-be and i kept on asking santa, on christmas make it stop but this wasnt something hes helpers can make at the shop is he god or one of hes angles who grant wishes like a genie but if i could get one wish granted it would be, NOT TO BE ME but the day came and noting happen, just more fights with a empty tree susiced thought with a gun in my mouth waiting to empty three but 2 month pass N no-one wounder where was i till watchin NBC cuz for 10 min i was a star, playing a dead-roll floting from the sea so stanta u aint gotta grant me my wish and i alwasy wounder why u aint but lifes ova, cuz the knife throught-cut.. and my family was emtion-less like a blank-picture with no-paint...(in).... and now all i can do is ask god to put me under hes arms N not next to SAINT....(en) :sleep: :( DANM WHAT A CHRISTMAS TO REMEMBER :( |
^^ i think im gonna drop it i open mic as-well
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do it up... you will proplly take it beucaes im not gunna drop i have enough money and im working on a diss for empire... but yeah
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^^ haha no dout but what u thought about it decent good nah maybe a little bit aight what???
it was done in 15 min so i aint try really i let my thought drain out thou |
dont worry hangman, ill give ya some competition.:thumbup:
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uppin this...............
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^^ what did u think wickedclown?
good, decent ,average ,weak ,trash aight what?? |
id say average-decent.... not bad i guess for someone with a 3-12 record (no hate)
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yo WICKEDCLOWn what time exactly is dis endin cos i need 2 know when i shud start or how long i got.....
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^^^ why dont u drop in 15 min like i did just let ya mind flow word i did
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this will be up til between 10 and 12 tonight
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aight cool im on it and ill drop @ 10.30
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Yo acuity go look in my thread in the graphic section the Second one
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meh...i made something kinda emotional...but with a good end
I'm lucky that my parent had enough respect to make me live In my eyes,its almost the best present that can be give Some wishing to have a 1000 dollars present,nothing to fear While other is to have a meal and deserve it once in a year This maybe look like forced and all that shit But tell you this,this could be you but with different parents Beatin up and locked in your room,25 of december But you still want to give a gift card to you family member A card who speak about a family to remember They like it and gave him love to make him feel better He probly had the best christmas of all time Make christmas a beautiful day,do it,its not a crime |
sorry for the structure...i put the caractere at 3
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its aight but mines is def better i give u a 5/10 nice try thou i like effort no diss or hate |
... aiight
From Santa's Perspective Christmas is a time for joy, a time for giving too Happiness, love and gifts is what i will give to you I read the naughty or nice list, then i checked it twice And i found out that no one on rapverse is very nice They all want to recieve, but the joy is in giving And that my children is the reason behind living For Tommy in Chicago, i have a one of a kind toy A monkey that sing with symbols and gives everyone joy For Karrie in Minnesota i have the loveliest thing A beautiful teddy bear and the purest gold ring For James in England, i have a gift that he'll love A remote control airplane that lifts like a dove I'm a one of a kind man who gives, but doesnt receive But my happiness is in giving if that you could believe For all the good boys and girls through-out the world I'll give thomas a new bike and jenny some pearls A new car to Chris and tons of toys for his son I have already gave alot but my job is not done If you are nice, then on christmas you'll be pleased But if you are naughty coal is what you will receive Everything i have said is completely undertood right ? Well then i wish you a Merry Christmas and good night |
once apon a time the fairy godmother snapped..
sniffin coke in hopes her mind state would break from bein trapped.. with one twist of her wand the bond in fairyland would fill... with turmoil and grief the first vics were jack and jill... jack ran to the house of sticks and then the house of bricks.. but the pigs was baggin drugs too, "YOU AIN'T GETTIN IN BITCH!" robin hood was bout to shoot em, but jack ducked and rolled... kicked in the door of some house, ran in the room to reload... but somebody was fuckin, on the bed in this room... jack pulled the covers and saw the Dish butt-fuckin the Spoon... that gay shit got jack sick, so he ran back out... let off shots, he caught 1 in his chest 2 in his mouth.. now jacks dead, the boy who cried wolf made everything right... merry christmas to all..and to all a GOODNIGHT!!!! ^lol^ |
damn...peeps gonna make this hard for me to judge... be sure to be on here around 11pm eastern tonight to see who won! keep em commin
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prewrite for the touney :nono: |
damn i completely 4got about dis...............oh well cnt b bothered now - but Flow has taken it i reckin
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I've been naughty all year robbing and stealing
Woman on thiers knees boobing until they swallowed my children Ive sold drugs hung with thugs and started bullshit Drunk packing my pump all day acting foolish I burned the christmas tree in the fireplace and ate all his cookies So i know Santas bringing me coal watch when i catch that pussy Venision burgers outta rudolph,doner and blitzin Then im hacking up and cooking dancer,prancer ,and nixon Im taking his sled and going for rides in his whip Drivebys on a sled with the elfs reloading my clips Back to the north with misses claus on my pole While im busting all in her face and videotaping the ho The fat man tied up watching as im piping his wife Now you can really see 'If i been naughty or nice' So listen Mr.Claus before you come down my chimmeny bitch You best have everything i asked for on my list :thumbup: |
uppin this... its pretty much between 2 people as of now but still uppin
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i sed its goin 2 flow but now its a toss up batween flow and cali
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hit this up folks... 1 mill up for grabs
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upp'in to see if my verse have a chance |
ok....well there is oficialy 1 hour left til the winner is crowned...still time to get a verse in.....hurry up folks
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yo..
christmas is dope and the pope wears a cope we all have fun and christmas is lots of fun i smoke more stuff then snoop and big punn we are all glee and excited we get presents werd up yo its awesome dawg tastes like heaven werd up holla back |
aight this is it ........... all the verses were good but 2 stood out above all the rest and those 2 were cali and flowintell..... it was a tough decision to make but imma have to be honest here and go with cali.... sorry flow....
Cali i need ya account #.... congrats on the million and thanks for all who took part in my million dollar give away... merry christmas to all!!!!!!!!!!!! |
merry christmas to you too wicked....good job everyone
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Unmatched Gifts Hustling and bustling trying to make it to the saftey latched door, not noticing that she has dropped her supply of tinsil on the floor. This is the Christmas, the one that will forever be remembered, the lights outside will glisten, and the turkey will be tender, She rushes to her job to try and pay for the Xmas fines, Not realizing she has left behind he little boy's Wish list signs. She comes back to get it, to find the house in a mess, The turkey, presents, and now cleaning just adds to the stress. So she tells her son to behave, for their is much work to do, but the last words out his mouth were, "I want to spend it with you." But she was too busy moving to hear these simple 7 words, Inside her mind "So much to do" were the only things she heard. So she went and got the turkey, the presents were safe in the car, She thought it would finally be perfect, but money only reaches so far. On the Eve of Christmas it was time for her son's play Well everything is taken care of, I can take off this day. So she went to his school, and enjoyed the show, Thinking about her son made her realize how big he had grown. As they pulled into the garage, she felt something was wrong, She wondered why these feeling were lasting so long She looked inside and saw the presents were gone, nowhere to be found, she couldnt hide her remorse and just cried aloud, Mommy, dont cry, we don't need those things, Because the joy of having u, no present can ever bring. So this is a lesson, to those who have gone off the path, you may think your doing great, but u can still come in dead last! 15 min keystyle, enjoy. |
Fucka 20 lines, stories better wit more. px
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wtf u said it would go to midnight! PEEP MY POEM before u give him money!
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shit that was tight dawg, cali still got this but i think that warents some money as well so ill give u a 100,000 dollar 2nd prize personify, account #?
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37441....least i made some money today....thanx bro
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Cali need ya account #
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