.Aeral. vs Skriptz
 

Battle Rules:

8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
3-0 = Ko

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 12-24-04 at 02:39 PM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

3-0 KO

.Aeral. has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-24-04 02:13 PM.

Skriptz ill? .. This queer I'm erasin his fate..
..Put a 45 in his mouth & he still gettin' ate
You'll get left with bruises once my darts hit..
..& he's the ruler of the game, so I'm the yardstick
Heat up your mind & put your brain in the oven..
..& take ya heart outta chest to show ya some lovin'
The text's speeding, Headed for ya dome & tips heating..
..& I'm writing in red..... Cos I left skriptz bleeding

Skriptz has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-24-04 02:20 PM.

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Voted For: Skriptz

Ok u got my vote because u had way better punches and rhyme scheme then Aer but it was bassically a even battle just that Aer needs to elavate ver badly cuz from the third line down it sucked but urs was good all the way through so overall my vote goes to Skriptz

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

"...it was an even battle, but yours was good all the way through and his sucked from the third line down.."

that doesn't make any sence whatsoever.. idiot.

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..it's a shame how long it takes for votes in this damn site....

Voted For: Skriptz

Vote: Skriptz



Skriptz ill? .. This queer I'm erasin his fate..
..Put a 45 in his mouth & he still gettin' ate
structure fine, flow fine, just not a punch or diss - 6/10
You'll get left with bruises once my darts hit..
..& he's the ruler of the game, so I'm the yardstick
i know what you wanted to do but the ruler could be technically longer than yardstick lol - 6.5/10
Heat up your mind & put your brain in the oven..
..& take ya heart outta chest to show ya some lovin'
nice wordplay, gd flow, structure. just not a diss - 7/10
The text's speeding, Headed for ya dome & tips heating..
..& I'm writing in red..... Cos I left skriptz bleeding
maybe if u had changed the text colour dis cud hav been half dope, was ok, not too bad - 7/10

With lyrics you don't bite you nibble...I'll murk your ass for shits and giggles
This aint no riddle...a broke comedian cracks your jokers with scribbles
first half of bar was gd humour and nice flow, 2nd half werent feelin it, ok openr - 7/10
Herbs like you are just like a virus' putting our computers at risk
You'll never have my talent, even if you put my verse on a disc
gd diss, nice concept, decent bar, nice punch -7.5/10
And believe me, I dont really want no beef so dont get mad
Take your period out on someone else, preferably your dad
meh.........nuttin special...ok filler -7/1o
Structure is the wackest part of ur verse..wordplay in ur
rhymes is missin
This kid thinks he's Suga Ray...nah, thats just sugar lines you spittin
nice humour, gd simile, nice and creative - gd closer -8/10

RTF - link in sig. ~1~

This was feedback posted for Skriptz
 

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Voted For: Skriptz

v/skriptz....close battle but he gets my vote because of his vocab an creativity wit his punchs an he had multi's....aeral.....ur verse was good but u lacked in the vocab an ur punchs were to basic.......
punchs=skriptz
vocab=skriptz
multis=skriptz
structure=skriptz
overall=skriptz
*RETURN THE FAVOR*

vote up........

Voted For: Skriptz

Pretty Good Battle
Openor=Skriptz He Had Multiz And A Good Punch
Multiz=Skriptz Juss Tha 1st Lines
Strukture=Tie Both Easy Ta Read
Punches=They Both Wass Decent So Tie
Personals=..Aeral..His Wass Better
Wordplay=..Aeral..He Had Decent Wordplay
Vokab=Neitha
Closer=Skriptz Cus His Wass Ok And ..Aeral..If You Typed Ya Verse In Red Woulda Been Better........

Skriptz Get This Came Harder With His Punches And Good Personals Up Ya Vokab

/V Skriptz................

This was feedback posted for Skriptz
 

checkin polls.....dont have enough posts to vote.....i think skriptz got this with consistency throughout the verse....good battle though.....it should be close