Yeska vs Acuity
 

Battle Rules:

6 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No homosexuals, except Acuity because he has to battle.

Lets do this..

Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 12-25-04 at 07:36 AM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

Yeska has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-25-04 07:19 AM.

Acuity has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-25-04 07:31 AM.

Someone tell this kids parents to apologies..
Shiit.. Check this..
Look.....
Look, ya best to no show, we all know Elusive G was wack..
The new breed? Just a bunch of fruity fags that cant rap..
It’s a sad fact, but I gotta dispose of this wack lame..
I mean, his mom says he’s Acuity....She aint know its his rap name..
A damn shame, I read ya text.. & Put my balls on the street..
Why do voters ignore my verse? Cause yours put them to sleep..

Dumb fag.. 6 Lines aint enough to describe how wack you are..
Stick with ya played shit //

Peace.

Lmfao.. Dude, wtf was that..

Lol.. Aiight uppin for votes..

Uppin.

Uppin.

Voted For: Yeska

Acuity
Yeska's on a level of wack spittin, that L'il C.A.L.I couldn't even envision
Sayin u got skills is called idealsim,cos when writing ur dumbass needs supervision
coo
Acuitous lyrical precision, leave Yeska's dome split like plasmic cell division
Not into military images, but ill deplete his provisions, leave him in indecision
aight...but doesnt hit too hard
His rhymes need revision, full of holes so deep 2 see tha bottom u need night vision
Yeska emodies genital symbolism.........
.................................................I 'll Behead Yeska and call it a swift circumsicion
this was decent

Yeska
Look, ya best to no show, we all know Elusive G was wack..
The new breed? Just a bunch of fruity fags that cant rap..
this was str8
It’s a sad fact, but I gotta dispose of this wack lame..
I mean, his mom says he’s Acuity....She aint know its his rap name..
lol...this was kinda funny to me
A damn shame, I read ya text.. & Put my balls on the street..
Why do voters ignore my verse? Cause yours put them to sleep..
this was coo

i think Yeska came harder than A...those last two bars from Yeska had me laughin...i think Yeska came harder overall and more consistent

Uppin.

Uppin.

Voted For: Acuity

Acuity: ur drop wasn't all that bad..but u do need a little elevating tho..punches were decent on here..flow was aight..structure was okay..and the vocab was decent..overall u had a decent drop

Yeska: hardly saw any punches form you..ur flow was good..structure was decent..opener was blah..and the closer was kinda wack..elevate more tho

RTF Acuity

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Omg.. Wow, I hope thats the only pathetic dumb shit that votes in this battle..

Uppin.

Voted For: Yeska

It’s a sad fact, but I gotta dispose of this wack lame..
I mean, his mom says he’s Acuity....She aint know its his rap name..

^ that line won the battle basically. Acuity brought nothing but a bunch of whack ass multis and no punches that diss, which is the point of a battle. So yeska wins basically because he used punches that dissed rather than bland patheticness.

Voted For: Yeska

punches yeska personals none really was a ok battle vocab has to go to Acuity but i though yeska won this battle overall he had betta punches Acuity you was good just gotta keep workin on punchlines cause thats what wins these battles an both should get some personals in their always good...overall yeska gets my vote....

Voted For: Acuity

acuity gets this,
flow acuity
rhyming acuity
opener-closure acuity
personals acuity
hits acuity
imagry acuity keep workin on it
vocab acuity
hit up on my links peace

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Uppin. Wouldnt mind seeing less friend votes and dickrides ACUITY..

Voted For: Yeska

Acuity: for real nice shit... good punches... good flow... some of that vocab sounded a little forced.. but pretty good overall..

yeska: WAYY better personals... punches hit hella harder.. no battin round bushes or shit.. just personals.. and since there was nuthin wrong with flow or structure..

yeska gets my vote

Voted For: Yeska

I think that Yeska got this battle because i feel that Yeska came stronger in the following categories...Punches i felt Yeska got it they were used effectifely and were on point Yeska u shoulda been a bit more creative on this occasion personals i felt went to Yeska good lookin wordplay and creativity goes to Yeska and flow and structure i'll give to Yeska.

V/Yeska