C.F.C vs.Ms.Danna Dane
 

aight 20 line max no crew votes my only rules heres my verse

aight miss I really don't wanna verbally bust on you'
i jus wanna get u in the bed wit no clothes on and than bust on u'
chick u ain't nasty enough to get close to defeatin me'
should'nt u be playin wit dolls listenin to peaches and cream'
nah let me stop ur clicks a bunch a b-boys this is a MC sight'
ur fuckin wit an A plus nigga your only B boy tight'
yo the only way your beatin me is wit ur hands on my dick'
I bet u fucked easy-e before he died jus to say that ur sick'
u did'nt really wanna get into a verbal rumble'
your like mugsy bougues in this rap game shootin against Mutumbo'
so get ur mind right like jay and bleek'
your rhymes are shit do ur teeth decay when u speak'
please do me a favor and don't neva battle again'
your raps are illegal so basically ur battlin a sin'
your skillz is like a decapatated corpse tryin to be the head chairman'
by the time this rhyme is over ur gonna be my new #1 fan'
i'm bout to leave u wit my final thought like this was jerry springer'
ur rap skillz are fallin like alicia keys maybe u should of been a singer'

i forgot to write no feedin my bad

blah....




hhhhmmmmmm i say 8 lines should kill you



fuckin with dane? u catchin a quick "L'..my verse lets off steam like da humudity down in hell..i catch you on da block and i'mma flood ur fenders with gun-shells..leaving ur body red-HOT! like a cooked lobster tail/
i wuz gonna spit 1st so i can smoke a L and wait on ur chump-shyt..its ashame u gettin ur azz beat quicker den a horny munk dick..so just face da facts and get-over it/
you mad cuz u cant get down with a crew or u keep gettin trade..you beatin me? ur head must be pulled tight, nicca take out dem braids/
steppin to me, u betta have sum ill-ness installed.. u standin next to me while ur celly ringin is da only way dis will be a close call/
the feelin of beatin me,so far only sK!llz will know.. u couldnt gas me even if ur verse wuz presented by amaco/
i'll come round ur set and will destroy ur enviroment.. go ahead and grab ur nine,i do mike-style and brang da 45 back outta retirement/
i;m throwin punches, why u scratchin trynna get dane frame scar'd..my punches will leave'ya lik typing in a pass-word, all u see is stars/
and i'm droppin nothin but dat hot shyt,dunn.. leavin mo shock-wave impacts den a nuclear bomb colliding with da air-force-one/
and if dis wack nicca win, i wanna re-match it..like OJ gettin married again, i want another stab at-it/LOL

*layz head on pillow and wonders off into dream-land

uppin

unnn damnnnnn


are you shore you a femcee or you an emcee just fuckin around


tight veres ms

both of yah had tight verses

but my vote goes to MS. donna

cuz of lines like these

fuckin with dane? u catchin a quick "L'..my verse lets off steam like da humudity down in hell..i catch you on da block and i'mma flood ur fenders with gun-shells..leaving ur body red-HOT! like a cooked lobster tail
and like these
you mad cuz u cant get down with a crew or u keep gettin trade..you beatin me? ur head must be pulled tight, nicca take out dem braids/

lol
nice battle

umm MS donna i have noticed that you very creative or your shit is written

lol im talkin about the braid part how you know he got braids anywayzzz

nice verse tight battle

my vote dane

100

I NEVER WRITE SHYT BUT ONLY POETRY..

ITS LIKE I SMOKE A L OF SUM YAE-YO WEED..AND JUST BECOME VERY LYRICAL..

BUT I SWEAR TO U MY SHYT WUZ NOT WRITTEN OR I DIE RIGHT NOW










STILL LIVING...SEE I TOLD YOU

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UPPIN

lmao

C.F.C waitin for votes

yo i gotta give this c.f.c on the real the femcee came kinda ill but the flow just wasn't enough and the better punches came from c.f.c

ummmm ok its officially known dat lil dallas is a d/r.. cfc threw betta punches den me? be more realistic...

ur will not be able to vote on any other dane battles for da simple fact u dont wanna see dane win, u hater..

and ont come-back free-postin talkin shyt..cuz dane will demolish ur azz anytime..but i wont..cuz u aint even a worthy contender...

*looks at lil'D post number..den looks at da time he came here.. damn son u got too much time on ur hands, u live on da net..


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uppin dis 1 sided battle

stop sleeing






uppin

yo its tru son dont sleep on shit i try to vote on every thing people seem to just want to battle but dont vote

dont sleep on dane she nice holla if you eva wanna join my crew or do a collab aight gurlllllllllll

VOTE...VOTE...VOTE..VOTE.VOTE...VOTE....VOTE.....V OTE.....VOTE.....


uppin again and again....

yo Sk!llz get off danas dick or clit or whaeva she gots talkin bout lildallas he respects and knows who's better
ur shit was wack mines was hot my pucnches are better my flow is better so get ur mind right bitch
and i call out Sk!llz next homo ass thug

C.F.C

look you fuckin chicken bitch

go call m,e out then wat are you waitin for

post the rulez spit and then i'll spit after wards

YEAH, TAKE DAT SHYT B/S



UPPIN ON DIS FUCKING!!!!! BATTLE

damn chick stop writin shit what u think u gonna promote your win is you the don king of this rap shit huh
C.F.C

WHAT_EVER MAAAAAN!!

DONT GET MAD CUZ A FEM CAN FLOW BETTER DEN YOU.. AND FOR DA LAST TIME, I DO NOT WRITE SHYT..I KEY MY SHYT NO_LESS DEN 20 MINS.. SO GET OF MY PUSS I"VE BEEN DOING DIS BEFORE U KNEW ABOUT DA INTERNET..

RECORDS;

b-boyz- 16-2
planetrap 13-1
jack4beats 26-4

57-7


BELIEVE IT OR NOT......
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uppin

dis site sleepz too much..wake yo azz up


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uppin

this was a nice battle you both came wit some funny ass punches and 'creative' ass lyrics........
Dane took this though i think she had a tighterflow balanced wit harder punches...peace return the favor on my battles yall

thx creative.. i'mma drop a vote on ur batle but even thou u voted for me dosnt mean i'mma vote on u..but we'll se, checkin ur battle now


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C.F.C still waitin for his 2nd win

My vote...
 

The Femcee...for these reasons

Breakdown of Verses

C.F.C.


^^^^^Started weak in my view and rhymed with the same shit.


^^^^^^^^That was weak as hell, maaaan.


^^^^^^^It was aight....Your text raps bore me like Cam'Ron.


^^^^^^The first line bout the hand on ya dick is played and the easy e line was aight.


^^^^^It was pretty weak. Seemed lik the first line Fabolous ever spit or some shit.


^^^^^OK line but still lookin' for the goodness.


^^^^^^Weak as hell


^^^^^^The first line was good but the 2nd line fu'cked up the rhyme scheme and was weak.


^^^^^^Jerry Springer line was OK I guess but the Alicia Keys line is extremely played.

I'll give that verse about a 1.5/10.





Ms. Danna Dane


^^^^^^Pretty good even though I'm not too much into the gangsta rap shit.


^^^^^^^^This bar got kinda sloppy and you already used an "L" line in the bar b4 it.


^^^^^OK bar


^^^^^^Nice shit.


^^^^^^pretty decent bar.


^^^^^^Really not into the gangsta rap but still better than all of his bars.


^^^^^^The first line was borin' but the password line was nice.


^^^^^^^^OK bar.


^^^^^Ha! Nice finishin' line.

Give this verse a 5.5/10

Flow: Dane
Creativity: Dane
Punches: Dane
Wordplay: None (that I saw)

Overall:Dane

Vote=Ms. Danna Dane

whoa whoa i see some hatin for real 1.5 get out of here with that bullshit dog

It wasn't hatin'. It was the plain truth. Show me a tight bar you had and explain it. It seems like you forced a whole verse. Find someone who will honestly disagree then. That was a clean and fair vote and your verse was weak as hell. Take it how you wanna but it's the truth.

my whole rhyme was good it was'nt the best shit i ever wrote i can take some advice but lets be real 1.5 get the fuck out of here wit that
nigga what u canibus now u ain't sick like that and i'll be damned if a mothafucka gonna try to act like he beyond me and say my rhymes is weak
lets be real about that shit i ain't got no problem countin that vote i could give a fuck about it u jus hatin on me personally right there so like i tell all mistaken cats get ur mind right

damn danna i was hopin we both gave him a ko

but a win is good any wayz lmao

hey c.f.c

we both beat you

you wack motha fuck

i know she havent won yet but she is

cuz its 3-1 hahahah

I see you've become upset like an emotional bitch about my vote and there probably isn't a person who'd disagree. We can battle then. No I'm not Canibus but your shit was extremely weak and it's a fact.

lets do it faggot set it up in bitch slapped

and skillz get outta here u wack faggot u neva should of beat me your verse was'nt shit to mine and we gonna battle again you'll get burned like this homothug i'm bout to battle now

LMAO
 

I WOULD OF KO"D DIS CAT IF LIL D AND COME IN D/R TALKIN BOUT HIS PUNCHES WUZ BETTER DEN MINES///

MUHUHAHAHA!!!


3-1 UPPIN


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I TOLD U CFC U CANNOT NOT FUCK WITH ME OR SKILLZ..
NOW TAKE 2 L"S TO UR GRILL/

IF I WOULD OF POST DAT I WOULD OF STILL WON!!!

NOW GO GET A NEW ALAIS U BYTCH

alright fuck dis lil arguement.......

Yo kid u need 2 start from the foundation..... @ least attempt 2 make ALL yo linez rhyme, thatz where u fucked up, couple played out linez, lotta room 4 improvement, don't trip though i aint gonna diss yo good linez, kauze simply i aint found any, Elevate.....

alright woman, yo flow was decent, nothin high standard or glamourous, but it was by far the better flow, u started with that "Cooked lobster tail" line that was pretty basic but that alone was a good start against yo opponent, try not using obvious thingz in yo linez, it remindz me of "tryin 2 step 2 me wit yo linez but yo shoe lacez un-tied" so i usually str8 talk shit but since yo opponent'z verse made me feel sick i read yo entire flow, after a better start.... u waz goin a lil off subject but workin on yo opponent so that aint a minus, and i actually lined the ending "and if dis wack nicca win, i wanna re-match it..like OJ gettin married again, i want another stab at-it" good job woman, thatz how u got my vote.

Something 2 think bout..... next time u trippin on h8 votez which u seem like the only 1 who think it's a h8 vote, make sure u don't suck, by the way.... Elevate.

Vote = Ms Danna Dane Aka Da broad who Whooped yo azz

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