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kkkhater vs Lawless (Hs)
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8- 20UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting you are involved in a car jack peace. Minimum posts to vote: 30 Check in by: 12-28-04 at 06:13 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Lawless (Hs) has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-25-04 06:14 PM.
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kkkhater has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-25-04 06:14 PM.
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iight kidd post ya verse and I'll respond to it iight... good luck kidd...
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As I drive up the road in my bens I hear gun shots at the rear end of my fins,
As my car was forced out of site I could hear screams as I look up at him. Blood covering the streets as the smell of gun smoke is smelt in the day. As I was forced to park I had no choice but to kepp my shaky body at bay, I looked up and was welcomed by a pistol, witch his demands tour through my ear like a whistle. As I was tour out of my car I recieved my kicks as they landed on my bed, As my day turned to night and as I was awoken I was frightened to find myself in a hospital Bed. I can still whisper the last words he spoke, saying that this bitch aint no hokes. |
did you drop ya verse yet... I'll spit when eva I see it iight
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the landed part when it says bed it should say head dammit sorry lol peace.
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he puss n don't want a confrontation I'll murk em wit no conversation/
he couldn't spit 'hard shit' if u had a severe case of constipation/ I'm the dick and you the new clit/ gettin poked// are you a joke? you soft as Q- Tips/ I heard u spit before and all that shit is useless/ after I sabbotage yo ass u gon be screamin' ova the beat* like Dj Clue bitch/ the mac will clap and twirl you/ he can't rhyme cause he got mo nuts in his mouth then a squirrel do/ is it the flow or rep that's gettin this hoe checked/ I'm makin' his career sag like 80 year old breast/ muthafucka I'm exchangin' heat/ this hoe prolly think he hard cause he sleep in power ranger sheets/ look at his record he don't dish fear or skill/ he jus remains unseen like the blind behind steerin' wheels/ his flow is sewage how do you step to the flame/ he's bound to fade out like the letters in his name/ I see how you do how ya rhymes designed hoe/ and I noticed he spit riddles cause he couldn't be behind bars if he was Shyne Po/ you got notta skill and you ain't droppin ill/ what are you poppin pills? you couldn't break me if I was a 20 dolla bill/ * when I said "ova tha beat" like over the loss... feel me? |
Voted For: Lawless (Hs)
Damn...100% one sided...Lawless killed this cat...Every single punch struck as hard as a train...real good shit man... |
thanks man we are uppin for this battle folks.....
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would that even count as a vote he was not detailed but what the hell uppppin.
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we are uppin for this battle folks... post here...
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uppppin dis battle come on let start voting do not fall asleep on me now!
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Voted For: Lawless (Hs)
KKKhater As I drive up the road in my bens I hear gun shots at the rear end of my fins, As my car was forced out of site I could hear screams as I look up at him. NO... Blood covering the streets as the smell of gun smoke is smelt in the day. As I was forced to park I had no choice but to kepp my shaky body at bay NO!.... I looked up and was welcomed by a pistol, witch his demands tour through my ear like a whistle. No u need it to be more personal As I was tour out of my car I recieved my kicks as they landed on my bed, As my day turned to night and as I was awoken I was frightened to find myself in a hospital Bed. allright I can still whisper the last words he spoke, saying that this bitch aint no hokes. BAD 13/50 Lawless (Hs) he puss n don't want a confrontation I'll murk em wit no conversation/ he couldn't spit 'hard shit' if u had a severe case of constipation/ Tight.. I'm the dick and you the new clit/ gettin poked// are you a joke? you soft as Q- Tips/ [i] Ok I heard u spit before and all that shit is useless/ after I sabbotage yo ass u gon be screamin' ova the beat* like Dj Clue bitch/ Tight the mac will clap and twirl you/ he can't rhyme cause he got mo nuts in his mouth then a squirrel do/ Tight is it the flow or rep that's gettin this hoe checked/ I'm makin' his career sag like 80 year old breast/ Played.... i think bittin.... i dunno muthafucka I'm exchangin' heat/ this hoe prolly think he hard cause he sleep in power ranger sheets/ ok has nuttin to do wit da concept :nono: look at his record he don't dish fear or skill/ he jus remains unseen like the blind behind steerin' wheels/ Played his flow is sewage how do you step to the flame/ he's bound to fade out like the letters in his name/ PLayed... I see how you do how ya rhymes designed hoe/ and I noticed he spit riddles cause he couldn't be behind bars if he was Shyne Po/ BAD you got notta skill and you ain't droppin ill/ what are you poppin pills? you couldn't break me if I was a 20 dolla bill/ Bad Lawless (Hs) 40/90 vote goes lawless |
thanks for the vote.... we are uppin' people......
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^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^uppin dis vote once again^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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Voted For: Lawless (Hs)
lawless gets my vote cuz even tho he went off topic he came hard enuff ta make up for it but i keep seein this kkkhater bitch wantin ta battle about a carjacking prolly' cuz he already got his shit written out..but too bad you still lost...look out on my open battles....chuck low |
Voted For: Lawless (Hs)
vote: lawless ...... everything was way better then kkk's crappy shit ....... punches were awesome and metas were real nice and ya vocab was good as well and kkk just didnt have a good verse ....... so i vote for lawless |
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^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^uppppin for some honest vote 4-0 him so lets get some honest votes uppin peace.
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Voted For: kkkhater
im thinkin this was SUPPOSED to be a topical so yeh kkk- vocab-basic imagry-decent storyline-on point creativity-decent structure-lacking flow-okay you actually did the topic so yeah thats the only reason you get my vote lawless-yeh you musta not known this was a topical battle kid........it was stated to obvious in the setup so i dont blame you for missin seeing it.........but yeh it was a topical about getting car jacked so uh you only lose cuz you did a battle verse and not the topic................ |
Voted For: kkkhater
Weak Battle overall KKKhater had a slightly betta structure both need to work on that...Punches from both of ya where hittin weak so dat was a tie..Vocab was decent from KKKHater but lawless had good punches so lawless took the punches..Flow i would say Hater took it this time...Personals was a tie and both need to elavate on that too....Mutlis was a tie overall close battle but weak...I give it to KKKhater though |
^^^^^^^^^^^^^uppin dis battle peeps honest votes^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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Voted For: kkkhater
LOL - white wash 2 kkkh8r did Lawless know it was a topical???? anyways Lawless errrmmmm- nxt time write abiut the topic lol kkkh8r -good imagery in places -gd topic coverage -elevate in yo vocab -try and write a bot more nxt time -develop ur story more - may come with more lines |
iight thnx for the feed and the votes uppin this battle oncea gain peace.
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Voted For: Lawless (Hs)
you got this in my opinio you had better punches although the flow was a bit choppy it didnt matter some of the lins i liked... he puss n don't want a confrontation I'll murk em wit no conversation/ he couldn't spit 'hard shit' if u had a severe case of constipation/ ^^ good punch and good opener... I see how you do how ya rhymes designed hoe/ and I noticed he spit riddles cause he couldn't be behind bars if he was Shyne Po/ ^^ another good punch well done kkkhater yours was more of a story than a battle so you dont get my vote but this was an alright battle in my opinion... keepit it up and keep elevating |
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