Ill.Logic vs xcell
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No d/r votes
no hate votes

g'luck

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Minimum posts to vote: 150

Check in by: 12-27-04 at 02:08 PM

Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in.

Ill.Logic has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-26-04 04:50 AM.

xcell has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-26-04 04:57 AM.

Shouldnt Mess Wit A Pro,Cuz I Was Created Ta Kill Hoes,
Already Dissin Yaself,U A Bitch,Even Your Location Says So,
I Burn-Foes,Punches-Is-Small, U Already Beginnin Ta-Stall,
So Watch Me Put An End To His "Flows" Like I Was A Waterfall,
Destroy-Pubs, You Better Beware What I Do To This Scrub,
Cuz I'll "Rip His Bars Apart" Like I Was Tearing "Night-Clubs",

Explanations:
Bar 1-his location says "encintas", that means "to be pregnant" in spanish....get it?
Bar 2- Betta Understand
Bar 3- Night Club is the same as bars....about the same...w/e...u shuld get it

g'luck :thumbup:

drop your verse hoe........

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drop your verse....................................

for a name like ill logic u sure dont stay smart
ure like action figures ull alwasy be in k-mart
speaking of action figures ure just a toy that i play with
this m.a.b bitch pms me sayin how dare u say shit
lets get shit staight...ure not ure a fag a fad
at the beging u start of hard with heart but i verbaly abuse you just fall apart
see... i sell more units then halo
u couldnt b more of an ass if u was j.lo
ure worthless like a mexicans last paso
i own u know like a habbit im done with this kat his whack crew can have im back


explantions---"this m.a.b bitch pms me sayin how dare u say shit" he pmed cause i said he was stupid for startin the game is gay thread...
"see... i sell more units then halo"the video game...
"u couldnt b more of an ass if u was j.lo"she has a alot of ass
if u dont get it dont vote!!!

good luck man.......

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Voted For: Ill.Logic

Punches-Ill Logic
Personals-Ill Logic
Wordplay-Ill Logic
Flow-Ill Logic
Creativity-Ill Logic

this battle wasn't that good...Ill Logic had harder punches and shit...he was more consistent and direct punches...

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

explaning votes are basic,....you should have to explain your verses

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can you say....xcell=gay....dq'in votes n shit...whats up man....that shit was broken down.........w/e

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Voted For: Ill.Logic

ILL TOOK THIS ONE CAUSE XCELL CAME WAY TO SIMPLE FOR THIS ONE...
XCELL-ur verse lacked skill. ur punches were there, but u just used em wrong, and worded em wrong. ur structure fell off near tha midle to tha end, so that took away points. and ur rhyming were coo, but a lil simple...practice more, learn how to become more creative, then elevate (no hate)
ill.logic-ur verse wasnt all that great either. u had some nice punches in there, and some nice structure, but it also lacked skill. u just came out tha better person in this battle, but i still think u should practice more on some harder punches, then elevate.tha last bar was tha best. and i dont really think u should haf'to explain for every bar, thats unneccesary. but overall, u came out on top in this one...
overall-you both need to work on skill and creativity. ill.logic. took this one with harder punches and better wordplay.


plz, if u havent already(ill.logic) return a vote on tha battle in sig...


my bad xcell, but i had to do it honest, just practice a lil more...




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Voted For: Ill.Logic

Vote: ill logic

Xcell:
WTF was up wit ur structure homie.................fix that, dont use played lines 2 do wid k-mart, its jus uncreative, some of ur attempted metaphors were poor, u sacrificed ur structure for a multi flow and it werent even hard hittin and it didnt have a propa punch in it.....work on gettin more creative punches into ur verse

Ill Logic:
Shouldnt Mess Wit A Pro,Cuz I Was Created Ta Kill Hoes,
Already Dissin Yaself,U A Bitch,Even Your Location Says So,
ok, sort of a gd personal, not that hardhittin but gd - 7/10
I Burn-Foes,Punches-Is-Small, U Already Beginnin Ta-Stall,
So Watch Me Put An End To His "Flows" Like I Was A Waterfall,
nice metaphor, gd worplay n concept, nice overall - 7.5/10
Destroy-Pubs, You Better Beware What I Do To This Scrub,
Cuz I'll "Rip His Bars Apart" Like I Was Tearing "Night-Clubs",
ok closer, solid, not really a punch but decent - 7/10

RTF - links in sig

Voted For: Ill.Logic

fuk that xcelll elevate.........yo ill logik its ur man x ceed u had beef wit..........no we kool aiight yo vote has 2 go 2 logik he had good punches and dope structure some good personals wack word play but hay.................... y oxcell you had awesome wordplay best line wuz see... i sell more units then halo
u couldnt b more of an ass if u was j.lo
ure worthless like a mexicans last paso
i own u know like a habbit im done with this
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ lol gud but logik owned ur ass dawg
So Watch Me Put An End To His "Flows" Like I Was A Waterfall,
Destroy-Pubs, You Better Beware What I Do To This Scrub,
Cuz I'll "Rip His Bars Apart" Like I Was Tearing "Night-Clubs",

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^gud shit sounds like sum old skool shit --------- gud keep it up........yo holla bak wit a vote 4 the battle against necro pyronix............. return the favour

ya xceed....we cool....not bcuz of this vote but wut happen before...anywayz

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Voted For: Ill.Logic

rite o.k battle here....

but ILL took this one

pretty dope verse dawg with nice flow, structure and most of all some hard hitting punches, liked the closer, original....

other kid was alrite but can still elevate alot just found it abit boring, not much originality but flow n structure was alrite....

pz

Could ya plz hit this up wiv an honest vote, bein mad slept on, thanx...
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Voted For: Ill.Logic

damm da other nigga spit like 10 lines...aint dat a dq but aneway ill i aint hater fam u took dis shit even tho ya verse was short...cell i aint feel ya verse ya structure was kind of nervous n dat fukked up ya flow ya lines were 2 stretched....

opener-ill
structure-ill ofcourse lol
punchlines-ill
creativity-ill
multis-ill
personals-ill
finisher-ill
enjoyed-ill.....he took dis whole shit nuff said...

links r ind a sig ya'll return da favor