Lethal-C vs Kilo704
 

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Minimum posts to vote: 30

Check in by: 12-29-04 at 07:39 AM

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Lethal-C has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-26-04 07:40 AM.

aight homie you got three days from the time i posted it's time to check in when eva u ready.

Kilo704 has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-26-04 05:22 PM.

aight mayne good luck......................lets do dis

my competition is bitchin wanna b last 2 post/
if this battle was a shootout he'd b 1st 2 ghost/
ya rhymes is shitty,i'll chase u thru ya city like diddy/
have ya bones stickin out.....like janet jackson's titty/
i aint speakin beef but nigga if i slide thru ya area/
its gon probly be wit dem crazy lil kids from libera/
cuz they really dont give a fuck why they airin ya/
and just 4 a peek in ya fridge they would burry ya/
not 2 mention i got ya bitch givin me slobba head/
wit a loosa neck than dem mothafuckin dolls wit tha bobble heads/
she know how 2 do her job in bed.......................
and slide down poles quick enough 2 change in2 batman & robin's threads/
i can tell ya shit aint neva gon pop, like 10 gold chains/
i'll have ya bitch blowin on me like nintendo games/
my new years resolution is 2 b a muscle in da year '05/
so wuts yours?... puttin tha "anal" in blackekstmanalive?/

Listen up, i'm spittin wit fear U only spittin it queer
Cuz the Finest Lyrical spitta in Emerica iz here
Shit this boi's is dead like tupac in an open-casket
Sumbody give him a dick and it'll shut this fuckin-faggit
You took a fuckin Heavy Hit n' you fell flat on ya azz kid
I'm bout ta snuff you out like fresh green wraped up in plastic
See u just a youngin goin' threw puberty n' jerkin ta nudity
Witcha nursery rhymes nothin' ya spittin is fuckin new ta me
You Don't wanna fuck wit me Fam cuz i'll make ya a missin factor
LiL bitch you ain't spittin shit n' i'm tired of st8 dissin actors

dis gon b a close 1 mayne.........nice verse good luck dawg

yeah mabe homie it will be a close one.......uppin this...........

Voted For: Kilo704

flow kiloe
rhyming kilo
lyrics kilo
personals kilo
hits kilo
vocab kilo
imagry kilo
amd most of all opener to closure kilo
hit up on my links peace.

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Voted For: Kilo704

Kilo got it...Really feeling them punches, metas, and wordplay you threw down...Lethal got u in the flow category, but other than that, this battle was all you dawg...1

can we get some votes here??????????????uppin......

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dam how long is it gon be b4 somebody vote on dis battle??????? uppin.......

Voted For: Kilo704

aight this battle was not bad, lethal c came out first with a nice flow little better than basic, not alot of hard punches from lethal c although i liked his finisher.

You Don't wanna fuck wit me Fam cuz i'll make ya a missin factor
LiL bitch you ain't spittin shit n' i'm tired of st8 dissin actors

yeah that shit caught my eye.

Now kilo was pretty weak flow was off in some places too, till i read this

not 2 mention i got ya bitch givin me slobba head/
wit a loosa neck than dem mothafuckin dolls wit tha bobble heads/
she know how 2 do her job in bed.......................
and slide down poles quick enough 2 change in2 batman & robin's threads

that shit made me chuckle, shit like that is always good to see in battles, then the blackestmanalive shit was sick. nice finisher too, i think kilo took this battle. The problem here was kilo wrote i think 15 lines where as lethal c wrote 10, which kinda sucks it aint even but u gotta vote for somebody so yeah kilo takes this.

Voted For: Kilo704

u got this one came harder on erything but structure no hate on ny 1 jus like y0o shit betta kilo vote= kilo

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Voted For: Kilo704

looking kinda like a newbie battle right here:

flow: both alittle more so on lethal's side
style: niether kilo i didn't like the / and .... lethal just didn't look good
vocab: kilo just cause of a couple bigger words
complexity: kilo mainly because it is long
punches: kilo they were crazy the main reason you won this battle
personal: kilo again they were right there and they hit
opener: lethal
closer: kilo