Javelin vs Chuck Low
 

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Check in by: 12-29-04 at 10:52 PM

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Javelin has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-26-04 10:53 PM.

Chuck Low has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-26-04 10:54 PM.

TO take me on first, like a rookie, is crazy
It only shows us, that your family'S gene pool... was empty. You'll find out the hard way that you were out your mind, my lyrics will fall like the bombs from a russian Hind. Don't take this too hard man, don't let your confidence sink. But if shits gets out of hand, i can refer you to a shrink. Im really sorry you had to be my first victim but I just feel like destroying you like a prize winning halloween pumkin. While we in the holliday spirit, see me as a fresh new scent and when Santa comes down your chimney, maybe he'll bring you some talent. Seems like a rough start to your short story, but still give me a reply, so I can put it in your obituary

Later,
Javelin

This Bitch Talkin Hard Like He Runnin Tha Block/
Tha Only Reason U Eva Held A Glock Is Cuz U A Cop/
When U Battlin Dont Tell This Bitch Where U Travelin/
Next Thing U Know U Busted By Javelin/
Tha Only Way U Could Beat Me Is If I Let Cha Put Me N Handcuffs/
I Got More Losses Than Wins But I Still Stand Tuff/
I Got Flows Colder Than Your Climate/
Tha Only Reason U On This Site Is Cuz Ur Nephew Probly Told You Ta Try It/



***in His Personals Under Occupation It Says Hes A Cop
***he Live In Canada And Its Always Cold Up There So Thats Why I Said That

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Voted For: Chuck Low

let me break it down
multis: i didnt see any
flow: chuck low
personals: chuck low
punches: didnt really see any hard hitters
structure: u both need it but i would say chuck low had better structure becuz of his flow and personals

overall chuck low won.

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werd dope....nuff said....im impress...............

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Voted For: Chuck Low

Javelin- what happened you had NO FLOW whatsoever, you basically wrote a story or something.. chuck low, u didn't come hard either however you had some personals using his profile (the cop) throughout ya verse and you had a flow.. but dun mention how u got more loses than wins.. just keep blazing ya opponent.. pretty one-sided.. but Chuck Low gets my vote.. :thumbup:
Javelin, practice writin battle verses.. not stories.. diss ya opponent and that's all.. quit writin sentences if u need help go to the Tutorials on the first page.. :)

Voted For: Javelin

my vote goes to Javelin he had betta flow n punchez man His closure got a 8/10 n his opener got a 9/10
n he was being real n throwing punches 2 chuck low

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Voted For: Javelin

javelin won this battle but barely. neither was very hot
yall need to work on ya punches n make em hit harder.
but jaevlin won this wit better flow n harder punches.
make them a lil more creative next time tho. Chuck low's verse was way too basic get some better vocab n a more mature flow.
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Voted For: Chuck Low

V/Chuck Low......he gets my vote cause he dissed jav wit nice personals an punchs he was creative an his structure was on point.....jav u had sum okay lines nuthin big u need to work on sum punchs an ur structure needs help.....no hate jus elavate.......
punchs=low
structure=low
vocab=low
opener=low
closer=low
overall=Chuck Low
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Voted For: Chuck Low

STYLE:
mediocre attempt by both; javelin u couldve edged this if u actually had decent rhymes less the 1st 2 lines

PUNCH:
i felt nothing here guys.
"Tha Only Reason U Eva Held A Glock Is Cuz U A Cop" ok... and?
"Next Thing U Know U Busted By Javelin" dont throw punches at urself
Javelin, get to the point, n u couldve edged this as well

FLOW:
didnt feel urs Jav, Chuck's was ok, last line was a drag tho

TECHNIQUE:
good try Jav, but ur overall ideas didnt sink in; defensive take by Chuck, should work on broadening ur thoughts and go on the offensive.

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P: =tiE=
F: Chuck Low > Javelin
T: Chuck Low > Javelin
OVERALL: good concept Chuck, but again, not hard enough hits; Javelin this is a battle, not a page in ur diary
VOTE: Chuck Low

by the way... canada aint ALWAYS cold, n glocks are not commonly used by cops.

Voted For: Chuck Low

Aight, not the greatest battle

But chuck got this because of the better structure, both had some played out punches, an i couldnt understand Jabelins flow, but Chuck came harder with the better structure, an better wordplay, so chuck gets my vote......

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Peace