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~Luciano~ 12-26-04 10:59 PM

The Truth
 

These rap dudes think they livin them Lyrix they Spittin
But once the Heat come out
they get all Congested Like an After Thanksgivin Shittin
You dont have no Corner Bodega for yo Secret Stashes
Cuz these ni99az Blind 2 the Masses
Like they was Visually gettin Input thru Stevie's Glassses
Blast ya Breathe off ya Heart like a 400 Pounded Boulda
I stick wit "D" like i had the Pistons Embroided on my SHoulda
Dont come at me Like im tha Dissappointment like a SadToy
Get 50 busted at ya Pinkies
and Watch you Shift.... like Diddy since you such a BadBoy
Some Hustlas...some jus Liars...Some really will TouchYa's
Some will suprise you like a Transexual tryin to Fuck Bruhs
These Rappers is Story tellers..u dont kno who u Endorsin
and u Listnin 2 the Rumors..so u dont kno wha u Supportin
You Dudes is fallin off tha Charts..Im in Artificial Harms?
And im comin Unexspected possibly
Kinda......Sumthin like a Stick up Kid wit Artificial Arms
Im takein over the Rap Verses Boards....come time me
I figured out the Industry Pumped up
Then get caught and start tellin....... like Jason Giambi
Figured u Ni99az cant touch me...Like steel on my Tri ceps
Delivering PunchLinez in GrandSlams
got Ni99az thinkin i got Barry Bonds Squattin on my Bi Ceps


...Stop troop stop stop...u Killin em...u dont got Punches they say
jus Vocab.........................So Bitch

How many times i gotta Pour out my all till i Turn Blue
Do i have 2 Demolish all in ya city
................Like that Skyscraper Height Lizard Do
My spit Game is Vicious...my Dick game is Delicious...Hoes Half Mines Bro
Dont get mad..cuz my Stroke rateing over the Superbowl Halftime Show
Only takes one bar delivered for them 2 Realize and KnowMinez
I den came from Poverty and Survived the Grind
My future Includes Dryin off Franklins & Benjamins on my ClothesLines
From the Rox to the Blox you can call it somewha of a Transformation?
..When my last dayz Rise Upon me..Ima be fine
knowin my Lil Boyz gone be pushin Big wheelz
That caculate & Adjust & Compare 2 the Size of ya Everyday Transportation

.....If u dont like me Fuck u....its a wrap for these Clowns




http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1880491

Parallel 12-26-04 11:12 PM

damn thats pretty good....i gotta give this a good mark nice wordplay...some pretty good stcutre and the flow was tight...the vocab was hurt-full...lmao...damn this was straight fire...check out my mic...links in the sig

~Luciano~ 12-26-04 11:19 PM

4 sho jus some quick shit i keyed up...ima use it 4 audio tho

Coopa Bang 12-26-04 11:48 PM

yeah dat was some tite shit...Bangin in da system in my trunk fa sho...Nice wordplay and flow fam...Shit ill be lookin out for da audio..When ya think it comin out??...........

MADDRAPPER 12-27-04 12:26 AM

You use fake syringes and take revenges on drugs but
Nothing cleanses a scrub you cats write like jitterbug sluts
No bright praise just a trite phrase in a tablet of habits corrupt
So graphic and wicked like a traffic ticket even ties ropes
One cat wrote a book and hope to hook folks with his quotes
Wanted to penetrate their fame and ventilate their brain in hopes
But need good dome vapor on strong paper and lyrics that smokes
And could be hung up and sung corrupt on microphones like the blues
But no true taste it was loose like a shoelace untied didn’t pay dues
Had to be gravy true like navy blue and stick to paper like crazy glues
But his lazy crew of words didn’t sell, dressed in suit and Stacy shoes

~Luciano~ 12-27-04 01:00 AM

This is not the place 4 that get ya own thread....kids these dayz

~Luciano~ 12-27-04 12:59 PM

Bumpy fuckin Johnson

~Luciano~ 12-28-04 04:55 AM

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EyeDentity 12-28-04 04:59 AM

This Was Tight Hommie, Decent WordPlay, Some Good Vocabulary In This Piece, Structure Was Good As Always, Nice Drop Homes Keep Doing Your Thing...9/10
...One...

..Decree.. 12-28-04 05:10 AM

Nice Shit Troop........:thumbup:

~Luciano~ 12-28-04 06:01 AM

4 sho...uppin for some more feedback.......

~Luciano~ 12-28-04 05:39 PM

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C-Bo 12-28-04 11:08 PM

this was some nice shit man...i liked tha flow and shit...everything cuz...keep sittin...9/10

C-Bo 12-28-04 11:09 PM

i meant Spittin* Troop................................

~Luciano~ 12-29-04 01:42 PM

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Kilo704 12-29-04 02:44 PM

yo i'm feelin dis 1... tha vocab n tha way u got tha point across was sick.....10/10

~Luciano~ 12-31-04 12:27 AM

4 sho bumpin...........

intensify effect 01-07-05 11:16 AM

u have 24 hours to drop a link or this will be closed....
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=170871

~Luciano~ 01-07-05 04:11 PM

Since when?.................................```````````` ``````

Diplosive 01-07-05 05:03 PM

nice drop dawg, nice wordplay, good vocab.. this was a dope peice dawg, keep spittin...9/10

~Lady Fiya~ 01-07-05 05:10 PM

wordplay was ill........................ u doin big thingz hot verse.. we need to collab sumtime. :thumbup:

props Troop..

intensify effect 01-07-05 06:37 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by *Troop*
Since when?.................................```````````` ``````


since the rule said so, since i became open-mic mod,
plus im enforce'in them so people shit wont get slep on plus open mic would get more active slightly if u had to drop feed back to at-less 1....


so like i said....


u have 24 hours to drop a link with proper feed back or this will be closed...
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=170871

~Luciano~ 01-07-05 11:34 PM

Yea yea yea ....Fiya u kno wha we got comin up boo boo

~Luciano~ 01-20-05 03:25 AM

Bumpin this shit from the dead u fux........

intensify effect 01-29-05 08:19 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by *Troop*
This is not the place 4 that get ya own thread....kids these dayz



dont worry he was bannd from open mic......

~Luciano~ 01-29-05 07:07 PM

Thank u ,,,and ban these dumb beef threads 2 baby


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