Chuck Low vs kkkhater
 

Battle Rules: topical you are flying over baghdad in a blackhawk

10- 20mx Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 12-30-04 at 10:03 AM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

kkkhater has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-27-04 10:05 AM.

Chuck Low has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-27-04 10:07 AM.

As I sit on my chari strapped to my m-16,
with mad thoughts going through my head,
all I could think about was the explosions below.
But as the chopper maneuvered back and fro,
the smell of death filled the cockpit,
but as shrap metal tour through the air.
I begin to think that I was back at the fourth of July.
But as we watch the smoke rise to sun I remeber seeing the red turn into the sky.
While the chopper shot down below,
screams and cries where heard from down below.
But all I could do was watch as heaven turned to hell.

im in a blackhawk flyin over baghdad/u member 9-11 dawg its gone be that bad/i drop bombs like osama/ creepin in blackhawk jets and b-52 bombas/u like suddam swimmin in a pack of paranas/i make you spit back up yo vomit/my coalition forces blowin up hondas and porches/we packin more heat than african tribes with torches/ i put fear in hearts, families no longer sittin on porches when i come thru in tha lincoln with 400 horses/tell yo family u luv em cuz im bout ta fly past/ with a black mask and missiles dawg u gone die fast/

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Voted For: Chuck Low

YO MAN THAT SHIT WAS HOT. LET ME BREAK IT DOWN
VISUALITY: BASICALLY THIS IS WHAT I CAST MY VOTE ON. I WAS THERE WIT U. KKKHATER WUZ THROWIN MY OFF. I COULDNT SEE IT. GOOD BATTLE BUT CHUCK LOW TOOK IT WITHOUT LIFTIN HIS FINGER

CHECK DEES FOR ME:
MY OPEN MIC:ONLY THE STONG'LL SURVIVE AND MY OTHER OLD BATTLES WIT DEF BY MOUF AND OPTIKAL AND YOUNGUN

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Voted For: Chuck Low


Chuck
Your Structure Was Better, Could Use A Little Improvment But It Was Good, You Had A Couple Punches That Was Good Here, I Cough A Little WordPlay In You Verse That Was Cool, Vocabulary Need To Be Upped A Little Along With Personals, Throw In Some Multi's And It Will Be Good

KKKHater
Your Structure Was All Over, You Had Some Good Vocabulary But Nothing SPecial, Your Punches Was Alright Nothing To Decent , Ha A ew Multi's But Not To Much, Meta's Need To Be In Here And Some Multi's

Chuck Low
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Oh Shit I Had The Wrong Battle Clicked Open I Had One Over This And Must Of Click That One Out, Lmao! Delete This Shit Mang

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Voted For: kkkhater

chucklow...
again i see your stucture burn my eyes wtf.....you overal need to elevate you dont use punches nore wordplay you have such weak lines....no hate

kkkhater:
not bad your stucture was also weak but meh it was ight....good verse tho nice punches..pz

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Voted For: kkkhater

vote goes to kkk hater 4 sure........................homie it made me think bout shit more realistic....had good vocab..................and better structture wack flow but ...............cant complain.aiight holla bak wif votes below

Voted For: Chuck Low

even tho dat shit was bout like killin innocent peeops and dey fam i got 2 give it 2 u for complexity and vocab...kkk had a nice drop to tho..
V/CL

Voted For: kkkhater

ok both sucked kkk had better structure and flow neither had imagery good or great vocab so kkk gets it for structure and flow only thing left to rate this on

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This was feedback posted for Chuck Low
 

Voted For: kkkhater

work on structure both kkk gets my vote because he got rite to the point and made his verse sound interestin at da same time his structure was off a lil but he came through wit a decent verse

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Voted For: kkkhater

breakdown:
open/close...Kz
multies.none
wordplay...kz
talked bout subject better...chuck
flow...kz
overal..KKKhater

good topical battle wun..e.z