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Relentless 07-13-02 07:05 PM

Relentless vs. Awaken'd
 
rules-
10 bars
verses due tonight
5 votes
3-0 is a K.O.
if u wanna add some then add some.
check in so i know your gonna post.
sont matter who posts first

Awaken'd 07-13-02 07:09 PM

checkin in. and just to make sure it duznt matter who goes first, there should be no referring to the other's verse.

Awaken'd 07-13-02 07:10 PM

rap wit me u get jacked, ill brake ya back, eat u for a snack/
leave u disfigured and wit dis trigger ill kill dis wigger/
come back for more? then be in store for hot shit galore/
u be surfin on the messege boards, found my verse so call me ya lord/
leave u in disbelief that one could spit rhymes like these, please/
theres a million people out there, who know this aint fair/
relentless be scared, holla back son...thats a double dare.

Relentless 07-13-02 07:44 PM

nice verse aight yo.
Trust me, you cant touch me, I storm on your rain(reign) of terror/
your wins never reflect like images in broken
mirrors/
when you givin me brain is the only time you blowin
my mind/
this nigga steals watches, then masturbates with the hands of time/
my visionary predicts your name in a
obituary/
cuz you bout to get R.I.P.ed worse then people in
cemeteries/
this gay's raps couldnt come straight if he wrote his lines with a ruler/
u aint gotta front, you couldnt process a win if you had a super computer/
unknown thoughts, its seems like you led by
strangers/
I guess you a fugitive slave, cuz you cotton(caught in)
danger/

Relentless 07-13-02 07:46 PM

why do my verses always post crazy. anyway uppin for votes!!!!!

Awaken'd 07-13-02 07:51 PM

lets get some votes.

papiswifey 07-13-02 08:22 PM

im not usually in dis section of rapbattles but i think dat relentless took it. i especially like how u (relentless) used ya words like rain and cotton. i also felt like yours flowed real smooth. now awaken'd i aint sayin yours is bad cuz it was good too i just liked relentless's flow and style betta.

one

Relentless 07-13-02 08:43 PM

aight thanx for the vote 1-0.
uppin!

sK!LLz 07-13-02 08:46 PM

nice verse to both

yah both spit some nice shit but i think relentless came tighter

my vote goes to relentless

Relentless 07-13-02 09:32 PM

thanx for the vote 2-0
uppin!

$__CrEaTiVe_$ 07-13-02 09:44 PM

aight this was a nice battle i think awakend came wit more lyrical skill in this but i got to vote for the main aspect of a battle...relentness won because he threw some nice punches and word-play overall it was more complex. awakend ya need to make ya verses moire complex wit wordplay and shit..

Relentless 07-13-02 11:43 PM

aight thats 3-0 k.o. thanx for votin yall. good battle yo.
holla
~1~

sK!LLz 07-13-02 11:52 PM

yo i voted here can yah vote in my battle
if yah can or wont holla

thanx

100

heres the link

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=16852

Relentless 07-13-02 11:53 PM

aight. I'll do that.
holla
~1~

sK!LLz 07-13-02 11:54 PM

aight thanx

1ne flow 07-14-02 12:19 AM

you no doubt relentless took this no contest
the blowin-my mind shit was ill son-keep

and the hands of time...it's a rap yo

^^^^^this nigga is focused keep doing ya thing son

vote= relentless

now go peep my battle--1ne flow V.s. Still holdin Steel

Relentless 07-14-02 10:20 AM

aight yo thanx. this battle was already over, but I'll still go peep yours.
holla
~1~


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