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Relentless vs. Awaken'd
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10 bars verses due tonight 5 votes 3-0 is a K.O. if u wanna add some then add some. check in so i know your gonna post. sont matter who posts first |
checkin in. and just to make sure it duznt matter who goes first, there should be no referring to the other's verse.
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rap wit me u get jacked, ill brake ya back, eat u for a snack/
leave u disfigured and wit dis trigger ill kill dis wigger/ come back for more? then be in store for hot shit galore/ u be surfin on the messege boards, found my verse so call me ya lord/ leave u in disbelief that one could spit rhymes like these, please/ theres a million people out there, who know this aint fair/ relentless be scared, holla back son...thats a double dare. |
nice verse aight yo.
Trust me, you cant touch me, I storm on your rain(reign) of terror/ your wins never reflect like images in broken mirrors/ when you givin me brain is the only time you blowin my mind/ this nigga steals watches, then masturbates with the hands of time/ my visionary predicts your name in a obituary/ cuz you bout to get R.I.P.ed worse then people in cemeteries/ this gay's raps couldnt come straight if he wrote his lines with a ruler/ u aint gotta front, you couldnt process a win if you had a super computer/ unknown thoughts, its seems like you led by strangers/ I guess you a fugitive slave, cuz you cotton(caught in) danger/ |
why do my verses always post crazy. anyway uppin for votes!!!!!
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lets get some votes.
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im not usually in dis section of rapbattles but i think dat relentless took it. i especially like how u (relentless) used ya words like rain and cotton. i also felt like yours flowed real smooth. now awaken'd i aint sayin yours is bad cuz it was good too i just liked relentless's flow and style betta.
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aight thanx for the vote 1-0.
uppin! |
nice verse to both
yah both spit some nice shit but i think relentless came tighter my vote goes to relentless |
thanx for the vote 2-0
uppin! |
aight this was a nice battle i think awakend came wit more lyrical skill in this but i got to vote for the main aspect of a battle...relentness won because he threw some nice punches and word-play overall it was more complex. awakend ya need to make ya verses moire complex wit wordplay and shit..
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aight thats 3-0 k.o. thanx for votin yall. good battle yo.
holla ~1~ |
yo i voted here can yah vote in my battle
if yah can or wont holla thanx 100 heres the link http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=16852 |
aight. I'll do that.
holla ~1~ |
aight thanx
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you no doubt relentless took this no contest
the blowin-my mind shit was ill son-keep and the hands of time...it's a rap yo ^^^^^this nigga is focused keep doing ya thing son vote= relentless now go peep my battle--1ne flow V.s. Still holdin Steel |
aight yo thanx. this battle was already over, but I'll still go peep yours.
holla ~1~ |
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