Relentless vs. Awaken'd
 

rules-
10 bars
verses due tonight
5 votes
3-0 is a K.O.
if u wanna add some then add some.
check in so i know your gonna post.
sont matter who posts first

checkin in. and just to make sure it duznt matter who goes first, there should be no referring to the other's verse.

rap wit me u get jacked, ill brake ya back, eat u for a snack/
leave u disfigured and wit dis trigger ill kill dis wigger/
come back for more? then be in store for hot shit galore/
u be surfin on the messege boards, found my verse so call me ya lord/
leave u in disbelief that one could spit rhymes like these, please/
theres a million people out there, who know this aint fair/
relentless be scared, holla back son...thats a double dare.

nice verse aight yo.
Trust me, you cant touch me, I storm on your rain(reign) of terror/
your wins never reflect like images in broken
mirrors/
when you givin me brain is the only time you blowin
my mind/
this nigga steals watches, then masturbates with the hands of time/
my visionary predicts your name in a
obituary/
cuz you bout to get R.I.P.ed worse then people in
cemeteries/
this gay's raps couldnt come straight if he wrote his lines with a ruler/
u aint gotta front, you couldnt process a win if you had a super computer/
unknown thoughts, its seems like you led by
strangers/
I guess you a fugitive slave, cuz you cotton(caught in)
danger/

why do my verses always post crazy. anyway uppin for votes!!!!!

lets get some votes.

im not usually in dis section of rapbattles but i think dat relentless took it. i especially like how u (relentless) used ya words like rain and cotton. i also felt like yours flowed real smooth. now awaken'd i aint sayin yours is bad cuz it was good too i just liked relentless's flow and style betta.

one

aight thanx for the vote 1-0.
uppin!

nice verse to both

yah both spit some nice shit but i think relentless came tighter

my vote goes to relentless

thanx for the vote 2-0
uppin!

aight this was a nice battle i think awakend came wit more lyrical skill in this but i got to vote for the main aspect of a battle...relentness won because he threw some nice punches and word-play overall it was more complex. awakend ya need to make ya verses moire complex wit wordplay and shit..

aight thats 3-0 k.o. thanx for votin yall. good battle yo.
holla
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yo i voted here can yah vote in my battle
if yah can or wont holla

thanx

100

heres the link

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=16852

aight. I'll do that.
holla
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aight thanx

you no doubt relentless took this no contest
the blowin-my mind shit was ill son-keep

and the hands of time...it's a rap yo

^^^^^this nigga is focused keep doing ya thing son

vote= relentless

now go peep my battle--1ne flow V.s. Still holdin Steel

aight yo thanx. this battle was already over, but I'll still go peep yours.
holla
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