Dopium vs ol'dirtymexican
 

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10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No hate votes
No D/R votes

Minimum posts to vote: 30

Check in by: 12-27-04 at 09:23 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

Old battle closed - tie
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Dopium has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-27-04 08:23 PM.

U aint gettin into P.S.A ill make ya whole vision turn grey
Got ya name from a famous rapper O.D.B u fake ass emcee
Tryin out for Psa and heavy hittas at the same time
ya shit is confusing like trying to understand a mime
bitch ill 'infect' ya causing retardedness in ya mind
Your as wack as that bitch Marilyn 'Manson'
fuckin with me will cause ya head to spin
when u get merked its gonna be 'end of days'
u wont be shit if u change ur name to 'johnny blaze'
merking me is like a retard goin through a maze


Explainations

1.k he tried out for PSa and heavy hittaz at the same time
2.the turn grey line ment color blind
3.johnny blaze is another name for meathod man or a brand of clothes
4.marliyn manson is on this site

ol'dirtymexican has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-27-04 09:08 PM.

your skills r a myth like asians wit asses
ill murdah u bitch have u turned bac 2 ashes
im a real G u kno i stay high and
ya verse iz even smaller than wut ya bitch is ridein
keep fuckin wit me n git ya throat cut
ill have ya takin shots like ya do in tha butt
eryone kno u fresh wit homo ass niggas
'n' tha mex dont bet wit normal ass figgas
when u hit tha streets, u cuddle tha cock
but when im steppin out, its ta hustle tha block
yea im 0-2 ,call it tha written curse
but it bout ta git broke ,spittin dis verse

k uppin this ppl plz honest votes plz :thumbup: thx

Voted For: Dopium

your skills r a myth like asians wit asses
ill murdah u bitch have u turned bac 2 ashes
…
im a real G u kno i stay high and
ya verse iz even smaller than wut ya bitch is ridein
…
keep fuckin wit me n git ya throat cut
ill have ya takin shots like ya do in tha butt
…ok
eryone kno u fresh wit homo ass niggas
'n' tha mex dont bet wit normal ass figgas
…meh
when u hit tha streets, u cuddle tha cock
but when im steppin out, its ta hustle tha block
…
yea im 0-2 ,call it tha written curse
but it bout ta git broke ,spittin dis verse
…

U aint gettin into P.S.A ill make ya whole vision turn grey
Got ya name from a famous rapper O.D.B u fake ass emcee
decent
Tryin out for Psa and heavy hittas at the same time
ya shit is confusing like trying to understand a mime
ok
bitch ill 'infect' ya causing retardedness in ya mind
Your as wack as that bitch Marilyn 'Manson'
…
fuckin with me will cause ya head to spin
when u get merked its gonna be 'end of days'
okay
u wont be shit if u change ur name to 'johnny blaze'
merking me is like a retard goin through a maze
okay

overall Dopium took this one
even tho it was a weak battle but he
came harder in this tho

Voted For: ol'dirtymexican

your skills r a myth like asians wit asses
ill murdah u bitch have u turned bac 2 ashes
nah
im a real G u kno i stay high and
ya verse iz even smaller than wut ya bitch is ridein
ok
keep fuckin wit me n git ya throat cut
ill have ya takin shots like ya do in tha butt
na
eryone kno u fresh wit homo ass niggas
'n' tha mex dont bet wit normal ass figgas
na
when u hit tha streets, u cuddle tha cock
but when im steppin out, its ta hustle tha block
quit the gay punches.. their gay
yea im 0-2 ,call it tha written curse
but it bout ta git broke ,spittin dis verse
no

U aint gettin into P.S.A ill make ya whole vision turn grey
Got ya name from a famous rapper O.D.B u fake ass emcee
na
Tryin out for Psa and heavy hittas at the same time
ya shit is confusing like trying to understand a mime
eh
bitch ill 'infect' ya causing retardedness in ya mind
Your as wack as that bitch Marilyn 'Manson'
hell no
fuckin with me will cause ya head to spin
when u get merked its gonna be 'end of days'
doesnt even rhyme
u wont be shit if u change ur name to 'johnny blaze'
merking me is like a retard goin through a maze
na

ODM actually rhyme the whole time and he had the decent punch...dopium didnt have nething worth an ok...so ODM got it

k uppin this ppl aight plz no hate votes either :thumbup:

uuuuuupppppppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

k uppin this ppl plz no hate votes or anything like dat ok.

uppinnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Voted For: ol'dirtymexican

LMAO LMAO LMAO LMAO OL DIRTY MEXICAN GOT THIS BATTLE JUST JUST JUST BY THE OPENING 4 LINES WHICH WERE FUNNY AND DAMN THAT'DA HAD ME CRACKIN UP....DAMN...


your skills r a myth like asians wit asses
ill murdah u bitch have u turned bac 2 ashes
im a real G u kno i stay high and
ya verse iz even smaller than wut ya bitch is ridein

that won the battle there with ease....right there simple and plain no more explanation really needed

but yeah Dopium u are elavatin but this guy just straight sonned u..it was phenomenal but it was better then what u where bringin..both of u gotta bring up ya vocab and what not and punches but yeah Ol had thsi in in the bag

Voted For: Dopium

Aii Explanation

Ol Dirty Mexican
your skills r a myth like asians wit asses
ill murdah u bitch have u turned bac 2 ashes
....No Punch..
im a real G u kno i stay high and
ya verse iz even smaller than wut ya bitch is ridein
......weak.....
keep fuckin wit me n git ya throat cut
ill have ya takin shots like ya do in tha butt
....Played & Weak....
eryone kno u fresh wit homo ass niggas
'n' tha mex dont bet wit normal ass figgas
....Self Glorification...No
when u hit tha streets, u cuddle tha cock
but when im steppin out, its ta hustle tha block
./....not even a Punch and its still weak..
yea im 0-2 ,call it tha written curse
but it bout ta git broke ,spittin dis verse
....Umm No You Not like this .....

Aii Man Basically You really suck No Hate But You need to work on Yo Skills overall

Dopium
U aint gettin into P.S.A ill make ya whole vision turn grey
Got ya name from a famous rapper O.D.B u fake ass emcee
.....Didnt Ryme?......and weak Punch..
Tryin out for Psa and heavy hittas at the same time
ya shit is confusing like trying to understand a mime
....weak....
bitch ill 'infect' ya causing retardedness in ya mind
Your as wack as that bitch Marilyn 'Manson'
again didnt ryme and ..yet it still was weak
fuckin with me will cause ya head to spin
when u get merked its gonna be 'end of days'
......:huh:.....
u wont be shit if u change ur name to 'johnny blaze'
merking me is like a retard goin through a maze
.....Wweak..

aii overall Mayne I Think That this was very weak but it was stronger than ODM'z verse so ima give you the vote and I hope that you work on ya shit bcuz its really not dat good

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ROFL omg this battle sucked this was months ago. :nono:

Voted For: ol'dirtymexican

Explanation:

Flow was ok in both verses, punchlines wuz tight... tie again, structure all good by both, personals not creative, talkin bout creativity.. ol'dirty had mo creativity, multi's neva played, vocab fucked up....... nameplay, had a bit from dopium.
oldirty won cuz he had mo punchlines, n mo creative shit

V/ ol`dirty mexican

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Voted For: Dopium

U aint gettin into P.S.A ill make ya whole vision turn grey
Got ya name from a famous rapper O.D.B u fake ass emcee
^^^didn't rhmye
Tryin out for Psa and heavy hittas at the same time
ya shit is confusing like trying to understand a mime
^^OK...but kinda played
bitch ill 'infect' ya causing retardedness in ya mind
Your as wack as that bitch Marilyn 'Manson'
^^too basic
fuckin with me will cause ya head to spin
when u get merked its gonna be 'end of days'
^^^didn't rhyme
u wont be shit if u change ur name to 'johnny blaze'
merking me is like a retard goin through a maze
^^whack

Only half-decent punchline was the one with mimes.The rest was basic.U can't just say"U worse than Mayirllyn".U gotta be more complex.Wordplay and metas.


your skills r a myth like asians wit asses
ill murdah u bitch have u turned bac 2 ashes
^^self glorify
im a real G u kno i stay high and
ya verse iz even smaller than wut ya bitch is ridein
^^whack...elementary diss
keep fuckin wit me n git ya throat cut
ill have ya takin shots like ya do in tha butt
^^self glorified
eryone kno u fresh wit homo ass niggas
'n' tha mex dont bet wit normal ass figgas
^^self glorified
when u hit tha streets, u cuddle tha cock
but when im steppin out, its ta hustle tha block
^^self gloriry
yea im 0-2 ,call it tha written curse
but it bout ta git broke ,spittin dis verse
^^dun bring up losing record

Okay....you self glorified too much.Focus on dissin and nothing more.Add some metas and wordplay.If ya got a losing record....hide it and dun mention it.

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