X-Spitty vs Lil D
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-27-04 at 08:59 PM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

Lil D has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-27-04 08:30 PM.

X-Spitty has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-27-04 08:33 PM.

damn this shit is fire,,,,
damn im surprised of this.,..

First of all...let me give you some tricks,use your imagination
Cuz Your wacker than making a guitar talk like Peter Frampton
Your lyrics are as retarded like steve-0 in jackass,aint dat right Lil D
You never will reach fame even if its as bad like Jinx da Juvy
Hey people look at me! im with stupid....just like static-x
last night i made a dream about you having a bullet in your neck
so i could see you suffering,bleeding,almost an orgasme
but fuck up cuz i woke up and you were still standing tere like trash

You must not no wo u fuckin wit/im not da one in da back of da alley suckin dick/see I don’t start shit I finish shit/afta this battle im gonna be known as the person who finished it/when I go to court I don’t need no lowya/you must hav forgot da name let me spell it out fo ya/S.I.L.V.E.R./nigga this is Eclipse u no who da fuck we are/I no I no I no I am night mare/when I came up in ya face wit a gat bitch u got scared/yo man I got plots to get richa/and I want to no if u stole da shit u just wrote…….did cha/im runnin out of time I gotta split/but just rememba who taught u dat shit

upin dis............................................... ..

Voted For: Lil D

shit both you peepz came here hard.......aiight,,,,,,,,,,,,,, damn,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, l LIL D u had sum f***** phat mulites,,,,,,,,,,,,, i mean that ............ had weak punches X-Spitty took the punches but u had better flow and structure................... the reason me votin 4 ur ass is ur mulites were phat as fuk............................ gud shit ...........................gud work.............. X-Spitty no beef aiight i've seen ur other battles ur way better than wat u spat here,,,,,,,,,,,,,, anywayz............... uppin 4 u 2 peepz.........y oand holla bak wif sum votes Lil d honest votes agaisnt me and unknown////////////////// k sweet

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uppin this shit..........................................

Voted For: Lil D

dis was hard but lil got this I think

flow lil
rhyming lil
personals tie
opener-closer lil
imagry X
voacab lil
so thats my vote and hit up on my link peace.

Voted For: Lil D

Lil D - iight spit, flow was kinda whacked but there was some decent punches.

Best Line - /I no I no I no I am night mare/when I came up in ya face wit a gat bitch u got scared

Worst Line - You must not no wo u fuckin wit/im not da one in da back of da alley suckin dick/

X-Spitty - iight spit man, flowed well.. had some ok punches.

Best Line - Your lyrics are as retarded like steve-0 in jackass,aint dat right Lil D
You never will reach fame even if its as bad like Jinx da Juvy

Worst Line - so i could see you suffering,bleeding,almost an orgasme
but fuck up cuz i woke up and you were still standing tere like trash

OVERALL - Close battle here, both were pretty weak. But Lil D's atleast rhymed abit. X-Spitty, your shit didnt rhyme dog, and there wasnt many hard punches. Work on that shit man.

Vote - Lil D

Voted For: Lil D

WORK ON YOUR STRUCTURE but lil d had dis his punches hit harder den damian his personals n stuff was killin it

return da favor please links n da sig

Voted For: X-Spitty

breaks down like this:

open: Damian: "First of all...let me give you some tricks,use your imagination
Cuz Your wacker than making a guitar talk like Peter Frampton" - This was a funny opener. clever. Other guys open was weak as fuck aswel.

close: Damian: "so i could see you suffering,bleeding,almost an orgasme
but fuck up cuz i woke up and you were still standing tere like trash" -I liked this. Thenm i read it again and liked it more. good vocab and some anger in that, but not an excessive amount. Its cool

Lil D's best bar: didnt fucking have one. Shit man you are making hard for me to not make this a hate verse. The only reason im taking my time on this is to make sure that with verses like that people realise they cant win in RV or any fucking rap site. It didnt even look like poetry.

Damian's best bar: "Hey people look at me! im with stupid....just like static-x
last night i made a dream about you having a bullet in your neck" -This was cool, bit of aggression in there we like to see. Keep up the elevating bro and you'll get real good

overall wat can i say? Lil D's verse (if you can call it that) had no structure or flow and i didnt read a punch, rhymes scheme, metaphor or any shit like that at all

Damian good verse. Entertaining and aggressive. Well played

theres two votes on here that shouldnt count. They seriously unexplained

is you people dont kno wat static-x is,its a metal group,and Im With Stupid was one of tere songs

Voted For: Lil D

yo ok i got to go with Lil D on dis one son
he was overall better had better word play, structure, vocab, and overall better verse

So V/Lil D

Lil D return the favor link in sigg