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Lil D 12-27-04 09:07 PM

BLACK~MAGIK vs Lil D
 
Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-27-04 at 09:37 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

System 12-27-04 09:09 PM

Lil D has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-27-04 09:09 PM.

System 12-27-04 09:15 PM

BLACK~MAGIK has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-27-04 09:15 PM.

Lil D 12-27-04 09:25 PM

Yall niggaz no betta than to fuck wit me/cuz im takin yall through da alphabet and endin dis shit off wit a T/don’t beef im from da eastcoast to/im bout to show yall niggaz wat I do/I roast bitches like u up in little pieces/I eat yall up like a bag of reeces/ima cut yall up wit a mushety and a chain/da reason im doin this is becuz im heavy in da game/dat nigga eastcoast would talk about somebodies dick bein microscopical/when tryin to see his shit is impossible/im wit dat eastcoast coasteast/I no yall bitches is obieast/I wont say rest in peace ima just say rest/it aint my fault dat yall go wit girlz dat aint got no breast/my NAME IS SILVA/ima kill/ima 20 dolla billa/if u come up in da club wit a fine girl best believe im gonna steal hu/watz that i hear......royal royal royal royal....../dats right bitch u don heard it now act loyal/read my last statment and tell me wat it said/cuz this youngsta don read u a story and put chu to bed

B. Magik 12-27-04 09:35 PM

Battle? You dead-wrong, watch this cat get stepped-on
Like 'violent cartoons', Black's always comin' with 'wep's-drawn'
This cat's-wack, get ya ass-capped, when the mac-claps
face it, you wouldn't be 'shit' if you 'fell from my ass-crack'
This cat's-a-disgrace, I got shells that'll put you back-in-ya-place
Why this kid's breath smells like he straight up wiped his ass-with-his-face? Lmao
Get damaged-and-popped, you, ya gurl, and ya man'll-get-shot
Watch me 'twist his body up' like the 'hands-on-a-clock'
Ya shit-is-trash, and the day when you get-some class
Will be the day when the Olsen Twins get-some-ass (Lmao)
You shouldn't have started-this, Magik's been known to rip apart-a-bitch
Leave him dartin-quick, And rolling in wheel-chairs with the retarded-kids


Haha...I just key'd this fuckin verse...Let the fuckin votes begin!!

B. Magik 12-27-04 09:36 PM

MAn wtf was that shit u spit? This is a battle you idiot

B. Magik 12-27-04 09:37 PM

Upping for votes On this fuckin battle...Lemme KO this clown...1

B. Magik 12-27-04 09:55 PM

We need votes!!! Uppin this bitch!!! Come on motherfuckers!! Quit Sleepin!! 1

J~FOUR 12-27-04 10:11 PM

Voted For: BLACK~MAGIK

Black~Magic:

Shit Was On Point. Decent Punches.. You Had Alot of Two Word Multies, Tryin Making Them To Three And Four.. You Took The Punch And Multie Category As Well As Alot Of Others.. Good Verse By You..

Lil D: Your Verse Was Really Plain, No Complexity Or Good Punches.. Also Your Flow Was Off Because Of Your Syllable Markings.. Fix Your Structure So Its Easier To Read..

Gain Decent Job By Both..


RETURN THE FAVOR

microcker 12-27-04 10:31 PM

Voted For: BLACK~MAGIK

Black Magic came WAY better. His verse had a hard punch in every line. Flow was better and structure. The other dude sry but your verse sux. It was wack. v/ blak magik

microcker 12-27-04 10:32 PM

Thanx...2-0...Upping for more votes...Yeah the multies wouldve been better but I had to key this in like 30 minutes so the shit isnt my best...thanx for the votes...uppin...1

microcker 12-27-04 10:33 PM

Magik no beef man...Lets kill it! NIce verse dawg i wanna collab get at me if u down peace out

microcker 12-27-04 10:34 PM

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B. Magik 12-27-04 10:35 PM

WTF??? Why did it post my upping as microcker?????

B. Magik 12-27-04 10:36 PM

And mic rocker quit free posting in here you fag...hell no i dont wanna collab with u

EastCoast 12-27-04 11:39 PM

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B. Magik 12-28-04 06:10 PM

Uppin for votes on this battle!!!!! Quit sleeping on this RV!!

B. Magik 12-28-04 10:11 PM

Uppin this bitch!! Will somebody please fucking vote?!?! Jesus Christ!!

B. Magik 12-29-04 01:46 PM

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Uppin This Goddamnit!!!!!!!!

B. Magik 12-29-04 05:34 PM

Will one of you fucking rv assholes please fucking vote on this shit?!?! Jesus Christ! I will return the fuckin favor!!! Uppin!!

Kyleon 12-29-04 05:39 PM

Voted For: BLACK~MAGIK

OK battle
Structure im givin dat to BM i could read his betta and since i could read his betta he had betta flow...Punches were weak in my opponion both ways...Vocab goes to BM..personals N Multis i say a tie but leanin towards Bm..Metas go to BM

overall a close battle...This battle was alright.

v/Black~Magik

Kyleon 12-29-04 05:40 PM

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Also Known. 12-29-04 06:41 PM

Voted For: BLACK~MAGIK

hands down magik got this other dude was talkin non sense and black had some funny lines which made him win this lil d needs to elevate

Affinity 12-29-04 07:46 PM

Voted For: BLACK~MAGIK

lil d
im not sure what that was but your stucture made my eyes bleed.....try and wokr on some stuctureizing the verse and use more wittyness of uses of punchlines and wordplay...lol....but your vocabulary was weak and all that your hole thing was weak sry no hate but go elevate pz

BlackMagic
hmm alright verse your stucturing was better but it still was weak....you used some good wordplay and your punches were locked.....you used some good vocabulary in all it was all good, good verse n all you took this simply...no hate to both of you pz

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