Scene vs Notorious B.I.G.
 

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6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No D/R votes

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-31-04 at 08:37 AM

Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in.

Notorious B.I.G. has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-29-04 08:37 AM.

Scene has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-29-04 08:37 AM.

My punches send ya flyin kid... forreal... I cant believe you tryin this
Dopium? Thuglife? Lil CALI? nope.. noone likes ANY of ya aliases
Im on toppa this bitch.. but ima deliver a message we all thought was obvious shit
CALI aint that great, wannabe... so pack up kid and just get offa his dick!?
Stick a split in ya tits, till ya riddled with slits, from ya middle to dick
Got my fists up to hit, no need for more lines... kid i'll rip ya wit six..

WHAT NIGGA... YO MAN.. I FUCK Y'ALL UP SON

hahahahahahaha u had all dat time and u dropped dat wack ass shit in 10 mins :laugh2:

WHERES YOUR VERSE??? HUH??

ALL TAHT TIME?? OHH YEAH NIGGa... I WROTE THAT IN LIKE 1 MINUTE FOO..

I SPENT 10 MINUTES CHILLIN

Who the fuck are you?? U aint the real biggie smalls
You Tellin everyonr on RV to GET off of Pacs Balls
claimin u good when ya wack to fat havin heart attack
cuz ya 'rhymes' are has corny has a cracka 'JACK'
Bettah watch ya mouth when u talk shit to me
thinkin u good boy u been watchin to much T.V
Say 1 exercise ur fat ass has actually have done
Ill have ya havin more ATTACKS then BIG PUN
listenin to ya shit over and over gets really 'old'
even if u r B.I.G You Know my Hearts Cold

Voted For: Notorious B.I.G.

notorious you got this in my opinion here's why...

My punches send ya flyin kid... forreal... I cant believe you tryin this
Dopium? Thuglife? Lil CALI? nope.. noone likes ANY of ya aliases
^^ nice personal... i can see where your coming from
Im on toppa this bitch.. but ima deliver a message we all thought was obvious shit
CALI aint that great, wannabe... so pack up kid and just get offa his dick!?
^^ nice multi and good punch...
Stick a split in ya tits, till ya riddled with slits, from ya middle to dick
Got my fists up to hit, no need for more lines... kid i'll rip ya wit six..
not bad but you rhymed dick twice

overally alright verse with a couple of good multies and punches 7/10

scene your verse was aight but you lacked the punches but you did good for a first battle...

Who the fuck are you?? U aint the real biggie smalls
You Tellin everyonr on RV to GET off of Pacs Balls
^^ not bad but the biggi and pac thing is played...
claimin u good when ya wack to fat havin heart attack
cuz ya 'rhymes' are has corny has a cracka 'JACK'
^^ not bad but the flow was edgy...
Bettah watch ya mouth when u talk shit to me
thinkin u good boy u been watchin to much T.V
^^ couldav bin a punch but second line was wack
Say 1 exercise ur fat ass has actually have done
Ill have ya havin more ATTACKS then BIG PUN
^^ same not bas but the flow lost you the edge...
listenin to ya shit over and over gets really 'old'
even if u r B.I.G You Know my Hearts Cold
^^ dont get it...

overall it wasnt that bad but you didnt have punches like b.i.g

return the favour links in the sig... no hate

k uppim this ppl plz honest votes and no hate votes either ok :thumbup:

Voted For: Scene

SCENE GOT THIS NO DOUBT CUZ HE AINT EVEN BATTLIN BIGGIE HE BATTLIN SOME BITCH WHO CANT RAP SO THEY USE OTHER PEOPLE LRICS IT WAS TIGHT THO HOW SCENE DISSED HIM GOOD SHIT RTF
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Voted For: Scene

both here were weak tho

big ur drop was weak here...punches were very hard hittin
structure was in place..flow was shaky & ur vocab here was
decent..but overall both of you need to elevate more
scene ur drop wasnt all that either..punches were aight here
kinda played tho, but decent..structre was aight & kinda
stretch ur lines out tho..but overall both work on ur punches
tho...no hate 2 both

Voted For: Notorious B.I.G.

notorious took this one easily......

scene....ill admit that you are elevating somewhat....but work on the multis...and your punches hitting harder....also work on some worplay for your verses and youll be straight

but big took this one because his punches hit a whole lot harder....he had multis...personals were better....and his whole verse was just more complex......good battle.....return the favor...links in sig

This was feedback posted for Scene
 

lmao.... sorry i wont laugh any more.... ummmmm yeah... checkin tha polls..... ummmmm..... yeah

Voted For: Notorious B.I.G.

Vote: BIG

hint^^its gd battlin these MC's wit that name but if u gona elevate and battle real textcees on RV change ur name nigga, cos they'll rip u alive if ur still called BIG.

My punches send ya flyin kid... forreal... I cant believe you tryin this
Dopium? Thuglife? Lil CALI? nope.. noone likes ANY of ya aliases
haha werd, i didnt even know Scene was lil CALi, gd personals, gd punch and flow - 9/10
Im on toppa this bitch.. but ima deliver a message we all thought was obvious shit
CALI aint that great, wannabe... so pack up kid and just get offa his dick!?
played line 4 a lil CALI diss, gd flow and structure -7.5/10
Stick a split in ya tits, till ya riddled with slits, from ya middle to dick
Got my fists up to hit, no need for more lines... kid i'll rip ya wit six..
tight multi flow, no punch, but gd flow-8/10

Who the fuck are you?? U aint the real biggie smalls
You Tellin everyonr on RV to GET off of Pacs Balls
no....it didnt work..i know what u wanted but no...-6.5/10
claimin u good when ya wack to fat havin heart attack
cuz ya 'rhymes' are has corny has a cracka 'JACK'
ok, weak punch, gd structure n flow-7/10
Bettah watch ya mouth when u talk shit to me
thinkin u good boy u been watchin to much T.V
meh...ok filler, work on more creativity man -6.5/10
Say 1 exercise ur fat ass has actually have done
Ill have ya havin more ATTACKS then BIG PUN
ok, but uve already used this concept above -7/10
listenin to ya shit over and over gets really 'old'
even if u r B.I.G You Know my Hearts Cold
slef glorification, gd concept though-7.5/10

RTF - LINKS IN SIG................

Voted For: Notorious B.I.G.

No gets my vote he came harder I think his strucutre was better, he had better flow and his multis and vocab where iight but keep elevating homes.

My punches send ya flyin kid... forreal... I cant believe you tryin this
Dopium? Thuglife? Lil CALI? nope.. noone likes ANY of ya aliases
Im on toppa this bitch.. but ima deliver a message we all thought was obvious shit
CALI aint that great, wannabe... so pack up kid and just get offa his dick!?
Stick a split in ya tits, till ya riddled with slits, from ya middle to dick
8.8/10
try not rhyming two words the same time dick dick???


Who the fuck are you?? U aint the real biggie smalls
You Tellin everyonr on RV to GET off of Pacs Balls
claimin u good when ya wack to fat havin heart attack
cuz ya 'rhymes' are has corny has a cracka 'JACK'
small balls?
7/10

hit up on my links peace

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Voted For: Notorious B.I.G.

[Color=Blue]........Thass Lil Cali?
.......Openor=Nb Wass Pretty Good
........Strukture=Tie,Easy Ta Read Both You
........Punches=Nb Came Harder
...........Vokab=None
...........Personals=Tie Both Had Some Weak Personals
............Multiz=Nb Killed Kid With Tha Multiz
...........Closer=Nb Decent Punch Multiz And Good Way Ta End It

..............Nb Ok Drop Juss Add Some Vokab Ta Ya Flow And It'll Be Good..............

/V Notorious B.i.g[/Color[