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Spoken Prophecy 12-29-04 05:54 PM

Assas-Sin vs Spoken Prophecy
 
Battle Rules:

16 - Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
first to 5 votes win


Minimum posts to vote: 20

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Old / expired battle close - tie

System 12-29-04 05:54 PM

Spoken Prophecy has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-29-04 05:54 PM.

System 12-29-04 05:55 PM

Assas-Sin has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-29-04 05:55 PM.

Spoken Prophecy 12-29-04 05:58 PM

this faggot joined the "catholic church with hopes to Romance Kids
Evil? if ur where trapped in hell u wouldnt even be able to Access-Sin!(Assas-Sin)
when the Mac hits-it tears chunks and leave niggas smellin like rare Skunk
U scared punk? well ill cock and load my Arms and give u a Bear Hug!
here it is Evil and Good meet u beat me? I wont loose sleep
Cuz u wouldnt be able to "Spit Hard" even if u had wood teeth!
u gay B plus im runnin over ya lines like Duece Staley
U can Spray a clip at the "source awards" and still not merck a Mc Daily!
u want beef chump come get some and get stomped
U coward ,go stand next to a "yellow wall" and Blend Some!
its as if i was borned cursed submersed in perverse illness
the scripts i disburse disperse Sins and invert critics!
the first to reverse physics ...pushed up on gavity
and beat"Sin"ful atheist to born again chirstians!
let me kick the ballistics Assas-Sin the shit u spit is
stretched More than Yao ming doing acrobatic calisthinics!

Kyleon 12-29-04 07:07 PM

C'mon on fam why you Playin Gangsta on me
Shit I can make a sandwich outta you cuz you str8 up balony
Ya neva squeezed a watagun let alone a gauge
So stop dat falsifying before ya body end up on da newspaper front page
You beatin me in battlez is like you gettin a sex,Itz gonna be hard
Cuz my punchez will leave Indentions in you like # on a credit card
Ya flow still couldnt merk me even if ya threw in sum heat
Cuz ya punches like Mike Tyson against Hollyfield they like to cheat
Ill clap ya as quick with no question being ask
Muthafuka are you crazy I got punches dat will leave permited behind a mask
I see ya by yeah name ya already have Spoken sumthin
But all i hear go is Bullshit ryhmez you bite from Joe Budden
So nigga when ya dreamin of fukin a girl im bangin ya Sis
And pull a rkelly move on her and instead of cumin ill piss
You from chi-town?Damn you fukin up da there rep
Even Ciara had betta Linez in her song 1,2 STEP...

(X)eed 12-29-04 09:05 PM

Voted For: Spoken Prophecy

shit -----wuz this a hard battle ...u niggaz both came hard
best lines were the first to reverse physics ...pushed up on gavity
and beat"Sin"ful atheist to born again chirstians!
let me kick the ballistics Assas-Sin the shit u spit is
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ that had some nasty multies thre... but the punches had 2 b ass-asinSo nigga when ya dreamin of fukin a girl im bangin ya Sis
And pull a rkelly move on her and instead of cumin ill piss
You from chi-town?Damn you fukin up da there rep
^^ lol gud shit but vote has to go 2 prohecy cuzz a vocab....

(X)eed 12-29-04 09:07 PM

yo holla ba kwif sum honest votes in my battle against unknown.... return the favour

Dok Holidae 12-29-04 09:30 PM

Voted For: Assas-Sin

This was a close WACK battle..Structure I wud say Assas-sin had beta structure and if youhave better structure u can read you can read it better So he had better flow also..Punches came weak from both sides but ill give it to spoken..Vocab was all a tie the beginning to the end..Personal I give it to Assas-sin..Multis I wud give it to Assas-sin...

WACK BATTLE OVERALL

v/Assas-Sin

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Spoken Prophecy 12-29-04 10:46 PM

assasin .............had.............. multies?...................

Spoken Prophecy 12-30-04 01:09 AM

uppin.............
4.....................
votes!!!!!!!!!

Kordozar 12-30-04 01:25 AM

Voted For: Assas-Sin

Pretty Good Battle Both Had Punches,Vokab,Wordplay Strukture Wass Easy Ta Read 4rm Tha Both Of You,They Both Started Off Good And AyaThing But AssAssIn Took This By A Hair Cus He Came Harder With His Punches And All And It Seemed Like He Put More Effort In It............Good Shit 4rm Tha Both Of You..........

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Kyleon 12-30-04 02:01 AM

uppin for votez fam..

50hater_killer 12-30-04 02:09 PM

Voted For: Spoken Prophecy

dam here is my gradin on this one he gets my vote in many ways.
structure spoken keep elevating on it tho
hits neither
opener-closure spoken
vocab spoken
flow spoken
multi ass
personal ass
but over all ass and hey hit up on my links please peace.

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Kyleon 12-30-04 03:42 PM

^^yo so does go to me or Spoken cuz you gave it to Spoken when you said I won overall....

Spoken Prophecy 12-30-04 06:14 PM

Son u tryin to steal votes now!!! lol
do u want to just call off ths battle cuz u seem real thirsty my nig!!

Spoken Prophecy 12-30-04 06:15 PM

how canu think u got the vote whenu he gave me more categories thanu off bat
structure spoken keep elevating on it tho
hits neither
opener-closure spoken
vocab spoken
flow spoken
multi ass
personal ass

50hater_killer 12-30-04 06:17 PM

my bad it was not suppose to go to you ass my bad homes.

.LeFt. 12-30-04 08:25 PM

Voted For: Assas-Sin

nice puches with both of u... i got assas-SIn on this one because with assas-sin's verse sounds like he came harder thou n yea... buh nice job on both of u guys.. keept it up...

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Kyleon 12-30-04 09:58 PM

uppin for votez famz...

Kyleon 12-31-04 02:44 AM

uppin for votes famz

Spoken Prophecy 12-31-04 11:55 AM

what happened to my pother vote i had 2 votes man
u know what its cool dont worry about it i think i have to find me another site to battle on

Kyleon 12-31-04 12:04 PM

uppin for votez famz..

MaRVJay 12-31-04 12:25 PM

This was feedback posted for Assas-Sin
 
wait did wun of ya niggaz get my vote dqed......my shit was explained

Chuck Low 12-31-04 12:36 PM

Voted For: Spoken Prophecy

HE GOT MY VOTE GOOD SHIT U HAD GOOD WORD PLAY AN EVRYTHANG U HAD GOOD ASS LINES ALL THE WAY THRU...............ASSASIN CAME WITH IT TO THO HE CAME HARD THIS WAS REAL CLOSE BUT SPOKEN PROPHECY TOOK IT WITH HIS WORD PLAY
LOOKOUT RETURN THA FAVOR
CHUCKLOW VS. JAVELIN
CHUCKLOW VS. DEATH
CHUCKLOW VS. JBKRYPTONITE
CHUCKLOW VS. KKKHATER

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Pimpjuice 12-31-04 01:27 PM

Voted For: Spoken Prophecy

vote goes ta da prophecy, close battle but the punches here were stronger den assasisn. assassin u had a better flo though, but wen it came down to it the punches is wat took da kake.
return da favor

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Kyleon 12-31-04 03:44 PM

^^fukin herb...marvjay1009=pimjuice...vote dq...

50hater_killer 12-31-04 04:18 PM

dammit assas why did u dq my vote for oh well. peace out homes ;)

Darth Assassin 12-31-04 04:21 PM

Voted For: Spoken Prophecy



C'mon on fam why you Playin Gangsta on me
Shit I can make a sandwich outta you cuz you str8 up balony
(weak opener...)
Ya neva squeezed a watagun let alone a gauge
So stop dat falsifying before ya body end up on da newspaper front page
(eh..)
You beatin me in battlez is like you gettin a sex,Itz gonna be hard
Cuz my punchez will leave Indentions in you like # on a credit card
(eh..k)
Ya flow still couldnt merk me even if ya threw in sum heat
Cuz ya punches like Mike Tyson against Hollyfield they like to cheat
(eh...k)
Ill clap ya as quick with no question being ask
Muthafuka are you crazy I got punches dat will leave permited behind a mask
(nah)
I see ya by yeah name ya already have Spoken sumthin
But all i hear go is Bullshit ryhmez you bite from Joe Budden
(nah)
So nigga when ya dreamin of fukin a girl im bangin ya Sis
And pull a rkelly move on her and instead of cumin ill piss
(finally...somethin...cool shyt here)
You from chi-town?Damn you fukin up da there rep
Even Ciara had betta Linez in her song 1,2 STEP...
(eh..weak ender)

sum- man...i dont know what it is about ur punches man....alot of ur lines if worded better couldve been alot harder....there was only one set in there that really caught my eye...and honestly the rest were garbage.....take it or leave it....its crit....ur comin with basic generics man.....try usin similes or metaphors that are more well thought out....


this faggot joined the "catholic church with hopes to Romance Kids
Evil? if ur where trapped in hell u wouldnt even be able to Access-Sin!(Assas-Sin)
(cool play on name)
when the Mac hits-it tears chunks and leave niggas smellin like rare Skunk
U scared punk? well ill cock and load my Arms and give u a Bear Hug!
(k)
here it is Evil and Good meet u beat me? I wont loose sleep
Cuz u wouldnt be able to "Spit Hard" even if u had wood teeth!
(ooo nice)
u gay B plus im runnin over ya lines like Duece Staley
U can Spray a clip at the "source awards" and still not merck a Mc Daily!
(k)
u want beef chump come get some and get stomped
U coward ,go stand next to a "yellow wall" and Blend Some!
(lol...k)
its as if i was borned cursed submersed in perverse illness
the scripts i disburse disperse Sins and invert critics!
(k....filler.....but ok)
the first to reverse physics ...pushed up on gavity
and beat"Sin"ful atheist to born again chirstians!
(k)
let me kick the ballistics Assas-Sin the shit u spit is
stretched More than Yao ming doing acrobatic calisthinics!
(ooo cool ender...and nice personal)

sum - ok ok....im feelin this verse....urs was a lil above avg...nothin too complexed...but i like what i saw...ur killer instinct was there...some lines were just plain...but u had some personals in there....and personals win battles versus punches....ur wordplay was there as well.....flow was pretty cool....and u put a couple of multis in there....like in the beginnin....cool shyt



v= sp..

d.a.

Spoken Prophecy 12-31-04 08:46 PM

Yo Evertime I Get A Vote U Think U Can Just Dq It My Votes Are Jusdt Explained As Your Votes !!

Spoken Prophecy 01-01-05 12:36 PM

naw man...............i got more than 2 votes...............................

Spoken Prophecy 01-02-05 02:29 AM

uppin...............4..................
votes................

Spoken Prophecy 01-03-05 08:18 PM

uppin.............. 4 ..............
..............more votes.......

Blackmage 01-03-05 08:55 PM

Voted For: Assas-Sin

My vote's for assassin because his verse was just overall better. He had no multis but his rhymes sounded like actuall rhymes. Spoken prophecy had a multi in the middle of his verse but the multi was kinda garbage until the end when he made the gravity comment. but that's pretty much it. his attempt at a personal didn't really land and the bear hug comment...anyway the wood teeth comment was decent but not really raw. For assassin the balony punch was decent and the newspaper comment was pretty good.(although who says balony anymore) the tyson comment was kinda off but the ciara comment was pretty good. all in all assassin won. both verses were structured decently but the boy assassin took it.

Spoken Prophecy 01-04-05 12:23 PM

r u serious dude..............^^^^!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kyleon 01-22-05 10:47 AM

uppin this....its been a long time but shit its w.e...uppin

Gotti Nuffguns 01-22-05 11:02 AM

Voted For: Assas-Sin

One Sided .

Punches - Ass
Flow - Ass
Multies - Prophecy
Personals - None
Opener - Ass
Closer - Ass

Enjoyment - None
Enjoyment

Gotti Nuffguns 01-22-05 11:03 AM

Return The Favor .. Peoples .. !!!
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Battles Are In My Sig

Germ 01-30-05 01:09 AM

Voted For: Assas-Sin

tight
flow: assassin
opener: tie
finisher: s prophecy
personals: tie
multies: not really any
punches: assassin
vocab: s prophecy

good battle, assassin, good flow man, punches bit stronger than prophecy, good originalty, just get some more vocab next time, solid spit
spoken prophecy, nice job man, just fell a little short with punches and rhyming, viscious vocab though, kinda hard to read in some places, like the opener and finisher though, word
-going with assassin

Armada Da 187 01-30-05 01:19 AM

Voted For: Spoken Prophecy

ahhh damn good battle from both it took me bout 30 minutes to decide who to vote for and i gotta give it to Spoken got it by a hair

Explanation:

Ok Punces on both were good one right after another
The Line that one it all :

u want beef chump come get some and get stomped
U coward ,go stand next to a "yellow wall" and Blend Some!
(Strait up hell yeah )

Flow went to both , both were nice n on tune wit it so that was a tie

WordPlay both once again were the shit so that was also a tie

Ill clap ya as quick with no question being ask
Muthafuka are you crazy I got punches dat will leave permited behind a mask

that spit by assassian lost me n is what made me vote for Spoken this line lost it for ya bro


this is by far the bes fuckin battle ive ever seen on bnet n i hate to vote against either one but i gotta vote for spoken

GOOD FUCKIN BATTLE FAMS!!
(Applauds both of you)

Not Hatin Jus votin

Kyleon 02-02-05 09:38 PM

^^whateva fam..keep da votez coming...~1~...


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