Blackmage vs YoungSoulja
 

Battle Rules:
10 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
3-0=KO

Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 12-31-04 at 08:53 AM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

Win by 3-0 KO

YoungSoulja has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-30-04 09:07 AM.

i drop hard bombs on you as if you were japan
i bring hard punches at chu like i was dat tsunami man
i rock hard,homie i tell you you dont want nun mage
go back to yo seat,learn how to flow,get of dat porno page
man im so ill mah shit'll come leave you in a hole
im so hungry moie mah shit'll eat you whole
looks like you luck is gone,you ran out of fluke
but wat you didnt know is im da king here,naw call me duke
c'mon homie when you ready throw on yo suit
cuz you gone need it fo me,and when you see me,better salute

explainations
fluke is luck that happens wit out any help,um its oh like a miricle
drop bombs you know US dropped atomic bombs on japan
um da tsuniami part is wat just happen to asia
throw on yo suit you know suit up fo war
i think dats about it

Blackmage has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-30-04 08:39 PM.

young soulja i thought told ya i'll fold you up like a wallet
anywhere anytime in any place and you can call it
you gotta be prodigy to beat me cause your flo is young
i told ya it's cause I de-"soul"ed "ja" that's why you 0 and 1
flo is done quicker than t.v dinners outlook is grim
since you like tupac so much you'll end up just like him
you a white belt, with the right help you could be decent
till then you still slim i own my lyrics you leasin
i see why the st.lunatics blew up and you still in line
i bang guns i'm shang tsung bitch your "soul"ja's mine

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yea
 

uppin this battle for votes naturally so can we get to votin please

uppin for votes so yall hurry up and end this battle for me

yeah end it for him,its devistating
for him
roflmao

you're funny... no really you're funny...no really... no wait... no, no you're not

uppin
 

uppin this bitch for votes so yall hurry up and vote so i can get this off my screen

Voted For: Blackmage

pretty easy to pick a winner here.....no hate in this vote......

Punches- blackmage
Personals- blackmage
Multis- Blackmage
structure- Blackmage
Wordplay- None

Basically black takes this one for an overall better verse....his punches hit harder, he played off of souljas name good, he had a personal or two whereas soulja had none............and his structure was a bit better.....this goes to black for an overall better verse

finally
 

finally someone votes.
YESIRRRR... keep em coming yall

Uppin this for some votes so yall hurry up cause this battle been on my screen way too long

uppin this battle for votes come on yall lets move out

Uppin this for some votes so yall hurry up cause this battle been on my screen way too long

Voted For: Blackmage

One-Sided

Black decent punches from you, some of them landed though, your structure was pretty good and the flow + vocab was ncie also, overall you had a decent drop, but keep elevating though, and u'll be good...

Young your drop was aight too, the punches were kinda weak though, and the structure on ur drop was good, but the punches need improving though, but elevate though and work on your shit too..

no hate to both tho..

Pz.

uppin this battle for a k.o come on yall i need one more vote don't quit on me now

Voted For: Blackmage

YoungSoulja: weak ass drop man, used self-glorification throughout the whole battle and that's a big no-no!Vocab,structure n flow were good though but you didn't have any hardhitting punches or personals whatsoever!Bring your opponent down, don't glorify yourself!

Blackmage: didn't even have to come hard to win this.Solid drop in fact, had good vocab n structure.I was feeling your flow and you had some good punches and personals in there extended with creative wordplay.Good job!

This was feedback posted for YoungSoulja
 

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