Sunshine Vs. Lil Dallas
 

10-15 lines
no crew votes
no d/r,
no haten,
no feedin,
silentkhaos can not vote, he might as well be in your crew check in when ready


LIL D'S VERSE

sunshine just met the rain//
comin out the west, introducin you to pain//
this shit is no longer a game//
you been eclipsed, can't see this//
below me, blow me, while i spit ill shit//
you the whackest, fakest emcee, i'm the realest//
so far below me you still can't see what the deal is//
this shit is too easy i just closed the blinds// (peeps his name)
shut off your rhymes, and piss on you from behind//
faggot, easy v for me, i been killin niggas like you since i was three//
now you done got caught in the wrong shit and got another KO defeat//
BUT ON THE REAL, you lucky you ain't catch the heat//
you ain't been exposed to a nigga like me, i'm sure you'll see this and in fright cry a while//
but the votas ain't havin no sympathy//
we done joined up, sendin bitches like you away with the heat, stop flowin you a disgrace, worldwide to all emcees//



SUNSHINE'S VERSE
I don’t fuck around with lil people especially lil dicks(lil (D)allas)u claim u been killn niggas since u were 3 but really u meant suckin dick since u were 6// my biaxial words are cuttin you open like cecerian sections and pregnant bitches// lil dallas couldn’t be big if he had stilts like demurral clowns and shaqs 6 foot 8 inches// your lines don’t punch they’re just little pinches and u couldn’t take me down if u threw me into the trenches// I been waitin to rip a nigga like u that has under estimation, cuz like ur name ur lil to me and your rhymes have no inflation// in everyone one of your rhymes you need preparation its like u masturbatin without pre ejaculation// you called your self tryin to get mad in bitch slapped, but now ur getting verbally raped by my mental creation// im playin play station 2 and your rhymes are still on the level of playstion one// when this verse mentally caps u your thinkin (sun) of a gun,runnin like a bitch coughin up lungs//but fuck it , your in your casket now my work is done, i blew of your head like your girlfriend does it to me for fun//



HAD TO REPOST THESE CUZ OUR LAST BATT WAS TOO CLUTTERED, LET US KNOW WHAT'S UP, VOTE.

My vote goes to Sunshine, he had a great use of Vocab and a nice flow, lil, like I said in your other battle, too simplistic and short, you need to up vocab, punches and Meta

Vote: Sunshine

Peace

1-0 uppin for comeback

vote=lil dallas
 

this was close in my opinion. but i thought sunshine sort of rambled on in a couple of his bars, and when he started talking about playstation my dicision was made. however he did have better punches that dallas.

1-1, playa, good shit

up, if silent and deadly looks here check bitch slapped

both verses were phat sunshine would've took this battle but he violated the rules

no feedin
^^^^^^
"u claim u been killn niggas since u were 3"

that's feedin dawg if you didn't do that you would've had my vote-even thought you ripped this nigga's ass out the rules still apply nah mean

vote=sunshine

2-1

sunshine nothin to really say

3-1 I won

yo lil dallas said i could feed on that too jst to let yall know

yo you ain't win yet, playa you gotta get 5

and yo truths disciple gotta say more than that, until he expounds I'm countin that as a hate or d/r, 2-1

can ay hvote on my battle against truth
you could see it right there

if you can plezz lol


100

VOTE SUNSHINE
LIL DALLAS YOU CAM EDIRECT WHICH IS THE STRONGEST OINT OF YOUR BATTLE VERSE YOU DO NEED MULTIES BUT YOUR PRETTY STRONG WITHOUT.
SHINE JUST CATORED MORE TO BATTLE STYLES.USING MULTI'S AND ATTCKING /DISCREDITING HIS OPPONENT BREAKING THEM DOWN AND USING MULTIPLE PERSONAL TRAITS AGAINST YOU. THIS WAS A HARD ONE TO DECIDE AND BY NO MEANS AN EASY VICTORY.

4-1 u gotta count disciple cuz u didnt sayhome many votes t win

it's always 5 votes by default, come on now

i know that but gimme one reason why that vtoe shouldnt be counted bcuz you never put in the rules you gotta explain your vote and that wasnt dickryding or hatin a perfectly good vote....................
still uppin peeps

",not no one line cheap vote so you think you can slip by,but a real vote.And if this rule is not being followed I will disqualify your match."
damn, does neone read the rules around here, the vote dosent count

fine fuck it 3-1 uppin or votes

yo i liked tem both but in my opinion i think sunshine came a bit harder wit his u both had a ood flow both had good punches but sunshine wanted it more

4-1

ok... theres way to much to exlain what Lil D needs to improve for fuck it.. LiL

you really need work on your rhyme scheme... your bars are way to short, try lengthing them up.. also add more disses/punchs in your verse... after that and vocab, itll become better..

Sunshine, it was decent for a verse.. Metaphors were alright, punchs were good... RHyme was ok.....

vote= sunshine

one

alright i win 5-1
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