kkkhater vs (x) CeEd
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-02-05 at 06:23 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

(x) CeEd has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-30-04 06:25 PM.

kkkhater has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-30-04 06:56 PM.

You be callin me on a battle for you're record seems like you have trouble,
for my lyrics will sned ur thoughts all into bobble,
Only rated movie that you wont be rating would be the x,
for I hear on this site that you suck pretty mean dicks.
I hand you this verse for it seems like it does not cleanch ur thurst.
So I jam my lyrics in you like a nin MM that will send whit white trailer trash into a burst.

are you gonna drop???? homes I will give ya until the end of today.

He says's he hates the "3ks" but really he's a White Supremicist,
under the white Cape he acts black......but really a white Lyricst,
All of a sudden he strikes at Blacks, wit'out even thinkin'
the bitch needs to be dead himself wit'out anyone Reminsein'
With a rec' like 0-1 hes's stunned i'll be done
wit you quicker than Em' and Fred Durst SON
Kid cant rap he's Wack acts like he hates White but he hates Blacks
Dont play play yourself ima kill you,like you had Polio
Kid its best you walk away ima ride you like a Rodeo
Your Lattice is weaklacks the workers and Construction
My termites in your Body now your workers are more Reluctant
Son your like the "Ku" without the "Klutz" & the "Klan"
The chaces of you beatin me is like Bin LAden not Readin his daily Quraan.....

edits....................... i meant chances................... last line
8th line i put 2 plays in buy mistake .my bad..................
10th line meant 2 put a space between "weak' and 'lacks"

and by the way a quaraan is like a holy book

uppin this shit......................................

Voted For: (x) CeEd

You be callin me on a battle for you're record seems like you have trouble,
for my lyrics will sned ur thoughts all into bobble,
Only rated movie that you wont be rating would be the x,
for I hear on this site that you suck pretty mean dicks.
I hand you this verse for it seems like it does not cleanch ur thurst.
So I jam my lyrics in you like a nin MM that will send whit white trailer trash into a burst.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ OKAY. UM ELEVATE ON PUNCHES, THE PUNCHES HERE YOU HAD WAS WEAK WERENT REALLY EFFECTIVE. THE FLOW, IT WAS CHOPPED UP IN SOME PARTS. YOU HAD PERSONALS WHICH IS GOOD.



He says's he hates the "3ks" but really he's a White Supremicist,
under the white Cape he acts black......but really a white Lyricst,
All of a sudden he strikes at Blacks, wit'out even thinkin'
the bitch needs to be dead himself wit'out anyone Reminsein'
With a rec' like 0-1 hes's stunned i'll be done
wit you quicker than Em' and Fred Durst SON
Kid cant rap he's Wack acts like he hates White but he hates Blacks
Dont play play yourself ima kill you,like you had Polio
Kid its best you walk away ima ride you like a Rodeo
Your Lattice is weaklacks the workers and Construction
My termites in your Body now your workers are more Reluctant
Son your like the "Ku" without the "Klutz" & the "Klan"
The chaces of you beatin me is like Bin LAden not Readin his daily Quraan.....
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ALRIGHT AGAIN, UM WORK ON PUNCHES, DONT STRETCH YOUR LINES THAT MUCH. PERSONALS WAS GOOD I SENSE YOU'VE HAD SOME. FLOW "EH" CHOPPED UP IN SOME PLACES.




OVERALL=THIS BATTLE HANDS DOWN GOES TO (X) THE MAN HAD SOME GOOD PUNCHES. THEY WERE EFFECTIVE. KKKHATER YOUR PUNCHES WERENT THAT EFFECTIVE ELEVATE ALTHOUGH U HAD PERSONALS I'LL GIVE YOU POINTS ON THAT. EITHER WAY YOUR PUNCHES CAME LIL WHACK. (X) JUST CAME HARDER WITH THE PUNCHES

PEACE

This was feedback posted for kkkhater
 

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good battle here (x) CeEd..

uppin this shit homies............................................

uppppin dis battle upppppppppppppin>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

Voted For: (x) CeEd

honestly both of yall suck but X got dis cause his punches was betta den kkk his structure was decent to elevate both of yall seriously

Ok as we get bashing commets thanks for the votes and where still uppin.

Voted For: (x) CeEd

good battle....but my vote has to go to xceed

vocab- xceed won this by a long shot...kkk you need to up your vocab....pretty decent vocab by xceed....you wont this part easily

multis- none really by either...the first bar ok xceeds had one...thats the only one that i saw in the whole battle..

wordplay- none both of u work on that

structure- xceed takes this one.....kkk you really need to work on this...not that xceeds was great...it was just that yours really wasnt good at all...no hate

punches- xceed...kkk your second bar was played...and other than that none of them really hit all that well......xceed yours werent too great either...your best bar was your opener...

personals- not a whole lot....but xceed did play off of kkks name a lot

ok so my vote goes to xceed for having better structure, vocab, and his punches hit a lot better.....

xceed....please return the favor with a vote on my battle with eastcoast...link in my sig

Voted For: (x) CeEd

i couldnt really judge dis battle at all....dis was a wack battle...i judged off of vocab and complexity and to me C had them over kkkhater..he also had better personals....kkkhaters's verse was too basic

ok just give ur honest vote where upppppin dis battle again.

upppppppppppppppppin dis shit once again please vote.

uppppppppppppppppin dis battle please leave some votes.

1 more vote homies .....................cmon uppin this shit votes will be returnd

Voted For: (x) CeEd

lol

can y'all say white wash

kkkhater:fix ur uneven ass structure, sit and think of some more creative and original punches........might help if you key while listenin 2 a beat might help ur flow...

Xceed: well dun man..nice easy ass win..some nice original line sin there, mad personals,,,,only thing i can say is work on structure...u had more than enuff hard-hittin punches to take dis...:thumbup:

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