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1ne flow V.s Nefarious Lev
10-20 bars
no feedin first to 5 and all that other shyt Lev, i'll cook this cat like the ounce of the crack// i'll make 5th slugs do HUDDLES arround in ya back// i read ya offense let me break it down// i'm not reppin Harlem World but ill SHAKE-U-DOWN// if you aint bustin ROCS you can't ROLL wit me// look on the Cam got proof ya bitch Came Home wit Me// mufucka you don't know bout the hell in the struggle// till me n-my daws SURROUND ya punk ass like BELT BUCKLES// this nigga smell like a puss,sound like bitch emcee'n// rip his ass out till his puss hole starts bleedin// ya style old but still BLEED through MENOPAUSE// thank god fa ya CHIN, now i got a place to REST my BALLZ// my skillz like DOPE-cats FIEND fa it and they friends cry when thet lose//<--die bitch made nigga, my dick spray cum on ya boobs// i'm like gettin the CLAP danger to HEALTH// the only time this nigga HARD is when he PLAY wit HIS SELF// i bust shot you bust NUTSbut BEATIN OFF dont go// no chick all alone playin MIDNIGHT STROKE// playin my target while i clap lead out the chrome// the only way you SPIT off the TOP is if you givin me DOME// -1ne(flow) |
uppin fa lev
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ill take his place just post it and keep that verse, that is wat thats supposed to be, right?
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nah b i want Lev to post
if this cat don't post by 4:30 hes a no show |
I'm here man....
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hey lev ill give u som real comp...oh and go get in our 6way battle
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Take your vision of winnin' away in a instance, cause I have dark intentions, to embark in missions to rip your bars apart like a shark with vengeance....
All ya had to say was drop at the same time, but this dame cryin', tryna get a no show win, I keystyle my shit and yours is ghostwritten.... In the beginnin' of your verse u was dyin', no denying I brought truth to ya false illness bitch I tame the lion(lyin')... I hate when wack niggaz like you say they tight&think they right, I'll drag you onto a freeway&stomp the fuck outta you in broad daylight... I'll make ya plans fold, with only the knowledge my hands hold, you can't flow, I'll rip ya head off and see what garbage is in it like a manhole... This nerd gay, flowin' in an absurd way, cause the wack format you labeled ya flow in is the reason they made that rule for wordplay... Fuck that shit....switch it a bit. You're not as good as you think you are/ I had to leave the complexity and deepness out so that you wouldn't sink too far... Fuck gangster rap, I'll snatch this kids gat and brutally beat 'em with a spiked bat/ showin' him the true meanin' of pain with insane means, cause I'm like that... Usin' all kinds of metaphors, profound words and shit to curse ya/ this kid needs a helpin' hand to beat me, cause his punches resemble inertia.... No movement, I'm original like mutants so I assume with those skills there's only room for improvement/ Get booted from windows for losin', bruised and verbally abused cause my rhymes end life like executions... Nothin' special..Just some shit I threw together. |
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VOTE: NEFARIOUS LEV
REASON: EVEN THE PERSONALS THAT WERENT VERY PERSONAL STILL WERE VISCIOUSLY GRAPHIC SUCH AS STOMPING YOU ON FREEWAY IN BRAWD DAYLIGIGHT. YOU CAN TELL THIS WAS NOT THOUGHT OUT LONG AND THE FACT THIS A SPERADDIC THOUGHT DELIVERED WITH SUCH POWER ENOUGH TO GET A VOTE. NOT TO MENTION THE PUNCHES WERE OF A HIGHER CLASS. DELIVERED WITH ALOT OF EXPERIENCE. 1NE FLOW YOU CAME HARD AS HELL AND IF WORDS WERE A FIST FIGHT YOU WOULD OF KILLED BUT THE POINT IS THEY AINT THIS A VERBAL WAR YOUR PUNCHES FELL A LIL SHORT NOT GARBAGE THOUGH.YOU DID COME ILL JUST NOT AS ILL. |
yo logic a=can you vote on my battle against thuth
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yo good lookin lack uppin fa votes
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umm ok here we go
lev's verse to me was like a 7.9 and 1ne flow was like a 6.3 creativity=lev punches=lev wordplay=lev flow=1ne flow my vote goes to lev 100 |
yo i felt that 1flow took this i was feelin his whole rhyme better no hatin at all i mean nefarious had better vocab but that don't mean shit to me i was feelin 1flow verse more and punches so my vote goes to
vote=1neflow |
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Awe, I know this nigga ain't just do a hate vote...Don't gimme that shit. I'm gone shred yo punk ass now. Really...it's ova.. Kiss the site good-bye faggot.
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yo, this battle wus tight, both of yall came wit some good punchs, the battle wus pretty much even the whole way, but the line about ya bithch goin home with me swayed my vote, to me it wus one of the most creative lines ive seen
vote:1ne flow |
Break down..
Punchs-nef Metas-nef Multis-nef Vocab-nef rhyme scheme-1ne flow 1ne flow, yoru verse was basic.. with alot of playd punchs.. RHyme scheme was good on it, alot, and i mean ALOT better than Nefs, but your metaphors lackd some(to many playd ones) and your punchs werent that harder hitting.. Nef you came iight.. metaphors were working for you, but your bars are really to long.. Shorten then up to flow better, thatll help im tellin you.. Punchs werent bad.. your verse has possiblities.. hit me up on aim - "Tha rar one" vote= Nefarious lev one |
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Uppin'
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Nef rippt 1ne flow with more complex rhyme scheme, punches, multis, and flow... overall Nef's verse was better.
VOTE: Nefarious Leviathan. Keep at it, and keep elevatin'...1 |
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uppin'
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yo u won kid ight nice battlin u dawg i appreciate it
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